Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence (I am a student), give brief relevant details (course, university, how long) and avoid repetition. Correct grammar for time expressions (use "for two years", not "since 2 years"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I am a BF IT student at the University of Lahore. I have been studying there for two years and I am currently in my fifth semester.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly: examiner asked where you study, not why. Give the name and location of your institution and one short reason if needed. Avoid long general statements and repetition.

Exemplo: I study at the University of Lahore, which is near my home. It has good facilities and strong industry connections, so many graduates find jobs easily.

Sugestão: Be specific and coherent: begin with a clear opinion, then support it with 1–2 specific details (facilities, atmosphere). Avoid unclear phrases and irrelevant or contradictory comments. Use correct adjectives and simple sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, the University of Lahore is a good place to study. The campus is peaceful and green, the buildings are well maintained, and different departments have modern labs and libraries.

Sugestão: When giving opinions on sensitive topics, be careful and polite. State your view briefly, then give a balanced, specific reason or a proposed solution. Avoid absolute statements and unsupported accusations. Consider suggesting alternatives (e.g., better supervision or policies) rather than segregation without justification.

Exemplo: I would like improved classroom management and clearer rules to reduce distractions. For example, the university could enforce stricter conduct policies and provide separate study areas for students who prefer a quieter, single-gender environment.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: start with your main plan, then list specific options and reasons. Use parallel structures for clarity (e.g., "I plan to... or I may..."), and prefer accurate phrases like "short courses in" and "specialize in". Keep it concise and avoid mixing too many unrelated items.

Exemplo: After my BS IT, I plan to pursue a master's degree in IT. If I delay that, I will take short courses in video editing and graphic design to build practical skills, and I also plan to specialize in Microsoft Office tools like Word, Excel and PowerPoint to improve my job prospects.

× I am a student of BF IT in the University of Lahore which is near to my house and I usually study there from two years since 2 years and I am in 5th semester now.

✓ I am a BF IT student at the University of Lahore, which is near my house, and I have been studying there for two years; I am in my 5th semester now.

Use of articles and prepositions: 'a student of BF IT in the University' is awkward—use 'a BF IT student at the University' (article and preposition). 'The University of Lahore' is correct with 'the' because it is a named institution, but 'at the University of Lahore' is natural. Use 'near my house' not 'near to my house'. Time expression: 'from two years since 2 years' is incorrect; use present perfect continuous or perfect: 'have been studying there for two years'. Add 'my' before '5th semester'. Suggestion: learn common collocations with 'study' (study at a university, study for X years) and use present perfect for actions continuing up to now.

× I study because it is compulsory nowadays for everyone to study and open the career paths.

✓ I study because it is compulsory nowadays for everyone to study and to open career paths.

Sentence structure and parallelism: the infinitive verbs need parallel form—'to study and to open' or 'to study and open' but add 'to' for clarity. 'Open the career paths' is awkward; use 'open career paths' without 'the'. Suggestion: keep parallel infinitive forms and avoid unnecessary articles.

× It it gives many opportunities after completing studies to have a job in different companies and industries.

✓ It gives many opportunities after completing studies to get a job in different companies and industries.

Word choice: 'have a job' is not incorrect but 'get a job' is more natural here. Also remove duplicate 'It it'. Suggestion: proofread for repeated words and prefer natural collocations like 'get a job' or 'find a job'.

× You can get a good pay if you study so that's why I'm studying.

✓ You can get good pay if you study, so that's why I'm studying.

Article and word order: 'a good pay' is unnatural—use 'good pay' or 'a good salary'. Add a comma before 'so'. Suggestion: choose correct noun collocations for salary-related expressions.

× Yes University of Lahore is a good place to study as it gives eco friendly environment and the building over the building is very beautiful.

✓ Yes, the University of Lahore is a good place to study as it provides an eco-friendly environment and the building is very beautiful.

Article and phrasing: Add comma after 'Yes'. Use 'the University of Lahore' with definite article. 'gives eco friendly environment' should be 'provides an eco-friendly environment' and needs an article. 'the building over the building' is ungrammatical—likely intended 'the building is very beautiful'. Suggestion: use 'provide' for institutions and include articles before singular nouns.

× It is the basement is breathtaking and the different departments shows the. Shoulder amazing.

✓ The basement is breathtaking, and the different departments are amazing.

Sentence structure and verb agreement: Remove redundant 'It is'. 'Departments shows' has subject-verb agreement error—use 'departments are'. The fragment 'shows the. Shoulder amazing.' is unclear; interpret as 'are amazing'. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb and match plural subjects with plural verbs.

× Yes, I would like to make changes in the Co education.

✓ Yes, I would like to make changes to coeducation.

Preposition and form: 'make changes in the Co education' is awkward—use 'make changes to coeducation' and write 'coeducation' as one word (or 'co-education'). Suggestion: learn common prepositions with 'make changes' (make changes to something).

× I would like to separate males and females as they cannot study together because they disturb each other especially boys disturbs girls and male teachers also disturbs female students.

✓ I would like to separate males and females because they cannot study together; they disturb each other, especially boys who distract girls, and male teachers also distract female students.

Prepositions and subject-verb agreement: 'especially boys disturbs girls' has subject-verb agreement and relative clause issues—use 'boys who distract girls'. 'Disturb' is better than 'disturbs' with plural subject. 'Male teachers also disturbs' should be 'male teachers also distract'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with plural subjects and use relative clauses for clarity.

× After completing my BS IT, I would like to take admission in Masters or I'll do short courses like video editing, graphic designing or Canva design.

✓ After completing my BS IT, I would like to gain admission to a Master's program, or I'll take short courses like video editing, graphic design, or Canva design.

Verb collocation and article use: 'take admission in Masters' is incorrect; use 'gain admission to a Master's program' or 'admission to a master's degree'. 'Graphic designing' should be 'graphic design'. Suggestion: use correct collocations for academic admissions and course names.

× I will do specialization in the Microsoft Word, Excel and PowerPoint which is very helpful for me and to make money.

✓ I will specialize in Microsoft Word, Excel, and PowerPoint, which will be very helpful for me to earn money.

Verb form and article use: 'do specialization in the Microsoft Word' is ungrammatical—use 'specialize in Microsoft Word, Excel, and PowerPoint'. Remove 'the' before program names. Change 'which is very helpful for me and to make money' to 'which will be very helpful for me to earn money' for correct infinitive use and tense. Suggestion: use 'specialize in' and ensure relative clauses and infinitives are correctly formed.