Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct clear topic sentence, avoid sentence fragments and repetitiveness, and expand briefly with coherent reasons using linking words. Also correct grammar (article use, verb forms) and keep answer to 2-3 complete sentences.

Exemplo: I am currently a law student at Mediterranean University. I chose this university and this major because I enjoy thinking critically and I have a good memory, which helps me learn legal concepts.

Sugestão: Answer directly and organize information with linking words (for example, 'at' and 'whereas'). Use correct names consistently and avoid run-on sentences. State current or main place first, then briefly contrast the focus of each university.

Exemplo: I currently study law at Ramkhameng University, which focuses on Thai law, whereas Temasek University offers more international business law courses.

Sugestão: Give a clear, concise evaluation and support it with specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect names. Use linking words like 'because' to explain why it's good and provide one or two concrete examples (facilities, reputation, course coverage).

Exemplo: Yes, it is a very good place to study because it is one of Thailand's top universities for law, with comprehensive courses and strong faculty support. The library and moot court facilities are particularly helpful for students.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No) and then explain briefly with coherent reasons and linking words. Avoid repetition and fragmented sentences. If you rarely attend, explain why and mention one specific aspect that could improve, even if minor.

Exemplo: No, I don't think major changes are necessary because I am often studying independently and only visit campus for exams. If anything, I would suggest more flexible online resources and recorded lectures to support students who study off campus.

Sugestão: Provide a clear statement of your plan, use linking words to explain reasons, and avoid hesitations/filled pauses. Be specific about where you want to study and why, and mention realistic next steps (e.g., applications, scholarships).

Exemplo: One of my plans is to pursue a law degree abroad, for example at Boston University, because it has an excellent law program and international opportunities. I am planning to prepare for admissions tests and research scholarships next year.

× I am currently studying at University Mediterranean in Law.

✓ I am currently studying Law at the Mediterranean University.

Preposition and word order: 'study at' is correct but the university name order and 'in Law' is awkward. Use 'studying Law at [University]' to show subject and institution clearly. Also add the definite article in the institution name 'the Mediterranean University' or use the proper name.

× I chose this university and this major because I like to. Think in critical way and I like to memorize things.

✓ I chose this university and this major because I like to think critically and I enjoy memorizing things.

Fragment and word form errors: 'I like to.' is a sentence fragment and 'Think' must be lowercase and connected. Use the infinitive 'to think' and the adverb 'critically' (not 'in critical way'). 'Memorize' is better as 'memorizing' to parallel 'think critically.'

× I studied 2 universities, Temasek University and Ramkhameng University majoring in law but for Thomasa University it focuses on Business International law but for Romcompany University it focuses on Thai law.

✓ I attended two universities: Temasek University and Ramkhameng University, where I majored in law. Thomasa University focuses on international business law, while Romcompany University focuses on Thai law.

Incorrect verb and number usage: 'studied 2 universities' is unnatural; use 'attended two universities.' Tense consistency and clause structure improved by using past tense 'majored' and present tense 'focuses' for general facts. Also clarify 'Business International law' to 'international business law.'

× Yes, there are really good places to study for to massage university.

✓ Yes, there are really good places to study at my university.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'for to massage university' is incorrect and likely a mistranscription. Use 'at my university' to indicate location. 'Massage' should be 'my' or the university name.

× It is the top university in Thailand specializing in law and also around Campaign university.

✓ It is one of the top universities in Thailand specializing in law and is also near Campaign University.

Article and adjective usage: 'the top university' may be overstated; use 'one of the top universities' unless certain. 'Around' is wrong preposition for location; use 'near.' Capitalization of proper noun fixed.

× It is very popular to learn law because it covers all topic.

✓ It is very popular to study law because it covers all topics.

Verb choice and pluralization: 'learn law' is less natural than 'study law.' 'Topic' should be plural 'topics' to agree with 'all.'

× I actually don't have any idea to change anything because I rarely go to universities because studying a lot doesn't need your attendance.

✓ I actually don't have any ideas for changes because I rarely go to the university; studying there doesn't require attendance.

Modal and noun usage: 'any idea to change anything' is awkward—use 'any ideas for changes.' 'Universities' should be singular if referring to one; 'doesn't need your attendance' is unnatural—use 'doesn't require attendance.'

× So I just go there when there is an exam. So. But I think overall the facilities are really good and people are nice.

✓ I just go there when there is an exam. Overall, I think the facilities are really good and the people are nice.

Redundancy and sentence fragments: remove extra 'So.' Combine sentences for clarity and use 'Overall' to introduce summary. Add 'the' before 'people' for specificity.

× The instructor is good.

✓ The instructors are good.

Number agreement: earlier the student spoke generally about people and facilities, so plural 'instructors are good' fits general statement; if referring to a specific instructor, keep 'The instructor is good.' Ensure consistency with context.

× I have many ideas for my future study plans but one of them I think I would love to do my study degree in law abroad because I have heard how about university or Boston University, uh, really good university for studying in law but I think it's too much.

✓ I have many ideas for my future study plans, but one is that I would like to pursue a law degree abroad, for example at Harvard or Boston University, which are really good for studying law; however, I think it might be too expensive/ambitious.

Sentence structure and modal/future clarity: rewrite to express future intention using 'would like to pursue.' Fix unclear phrase 'how about university or Boston University' by giving examples. Add a clear reason such as 'too expensive' or 'too ambitious' instead of vague 'too much.' Ensure tense consistency and clearer modal meaning.