Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms, and avoid repetition. Mention current status, recent achievement, and immediate plan in 2–3 sentences with linking words.

Exemplo: I am currently a student. I recently completed my intermediate studies in computer science, and now I plan to pursue a bachelor's degree in the same field abroad.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer naming the institution or city, then provide a brief supporting detail. Correct grammar (remove extra articles, use correct nouns) and avoid repeating the same facts twice.

Exemplo: I study in Karachi, where I am enrolled in a computer science program. I have completed my intermediate studies and am planning to continue with a bachelor's degree abroad.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion and then support it with two specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' and avoid vague phrases such as 'every type'.

Exemplo: Yes, I think Karachi is a good place to study because it has many universities and colleges, and you can find a wide variety of teachers and courses. For example, there are specialized computer science departments and several private and public universities nearby.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct wording errors. If you have no changes, say why briefly and perhaps mention one small improvement if possible. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

Exemplo: I wouldn't change much because the institutions here meet my needs for studying and offer good courses. However, I would like more modern lab equipment to improve practical learning.

Sugestão: Organize your plans in chronological order with clear linking words (first, then, after that). Use correct terms and verb forms, and be specific about the field and timing. Keep it within 3 sentences.

Exemplo: First, I will finish my intermediate studies in computer science. Then I plan to study for a bachelor's degree abroad in the same field, followed by a master's degree. After completing my studies, I hope to find a job in software development.

× I am a student and I am currently focusing on improving my skills and recently I complete my intermediate in computer science.

✓ I am a student and I am currently focusing on improving my skills, and recently I completed my intermediate in computer science.

Mixed present and past tense: 'recently I complete' is incorrect because the action occurred in the past. Use past simple 'completed' to match 'recently'. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× Now I plan it to do my bachelor in abroad in same field.

✓ Now I plan to do my bachelor's abroad in the same field.

Incorrect word order and article usage: 'plan it to do' should be 'plan to do'; 'bachelor' requires possessive or degree phrase 'bachelor's'; 'in abroad' is incorrect — use 'abroad' without a preposition; add 'the' before 'same field' for clarity.

× Currently I'm studying in the Karachi in the computer science field and this and I complete my intermediate in this field and now I'm planning to pursue my baseline abroad.

✓ Currently I'm studying in Karachi in the field of computer science, and I completed my intermediate in this field. Now I'm planning to pursue my bachelor's abroad.

Incorrect use of the definite article 'the' before 'Karachi': city names do not take 'the'. 'in the computer science field' is better as 'in the field of computer science'. 'I complete' should be past 'completed'. 'baseline' is wrong word — use 'bachelor's'. Consolidate into clear sentences.

× Yes, Karachi is the best place to study because in the Karachi every type of the student you can find and every type of teacher you can find easily and there are a lot of universities and the colleges and the schools.

✓ Yes, Karachi is a great place to study because in Karachi you can find every type of student and teacher easily, and there are many universities, colleges, and schools.

Do not use 'the' before city name; 'the best' is an overgeneralization — 'a great' is more natural but 'the best' could be kept if intended. Word order: 'in Karachi you can find every type of student' is correct. Use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' and remove extra 'the' before 'colleges' and 'schools'.

× So it is very best place to study.

✓ So it is a very good place to study.

'very best' is incorrect without article; use 'the best' or 'a very good'. 'a very good place' is natural here.

× The the place where I am listening now, I don't want to make any changes there because I believe this is the best place for studying and completing my education.

✓ The place where I am studying now, I don't want to make any changes because I believe this is the best place for studying and completing my education.

Incorrect word 'listening' should be 'studying'. Remove the duplicated 'The'. Also avoid repeating 'there' and keep concise sentence structure.

× Firstly I will complete my intermediate in composites and next I would like to complete my bachelor in the same field.

✓ First, I will complete my intermediate in computer science, and then I would like to complete my bachelor's in the same field.

Use consistent terms: 'composites' seems incorrect — likely 'computer science'. 'Firstly' can be 'First'; 'bachelor' should be 'bachelor's'. Tense and modal 'would like' is fine for future intention after 'will' step.

× After that I complete my master in same field after I find some job and I avail it.

✓ After that, I will complete my master's in the same field, then I will find a job and take it.

'I complete' should be future 'I will complete' to match sequence. Use possessive 'master's'. 'after I find some job and I avail it' is awkward: use 'then I will find a job and take it' or 'then I will look for a job and accept one'. Ensure consistent future tense sequence.