Opportunities— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly in the first sentence and avoid repetition such as “arranged arranged they arranged.” Use the past tense consistently: “I participated,” “I won,” and “I lost.” Also, say “participated in games” rather than “participated games.” Add one or two specific details about the activities and explain how you felt about them. Avoid ending with “So yeah, that’s it,” because it does not add useful information.

Exemplo: Yes. My school regularly organised activities such as team games and art competitions, so I had several opportunities to try new things. I particularly enjoyed playing football because it helped me make new friends. Although I didn’t always win, I learned how to cooperate with my classmates and became more confident.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and support it with a logical reason and an example. The phrases “write different things,” “many people already multitasking,” and “they have confident” are unclear or grammatically incorrect. Use accurate expressions such as “try different activities,” “develop a broader perspective,” “multitask,” and “become more confident.” Avoid repeating words and do not leave the answer unfinished. Linking words such as “because,” “for example,” and “as a result” will make your response more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I think people should try a variety of activities because it helps them develop new skills and gain a broader perspective. For example, someone who tries a sport, learns a language, and volunteers may become more adaptable and confident. However, they should choose activities that genuinely interest them rather than trying to do everything at once.

× I had participated games.

✓ I had participated in games.

The verb participate is followed by the preposition in when referring to an activity or event. Say participate in games, not participate games.

× Sometimes I wins.

✓ Sometimes I won.

The answer describes completed experiences in childhood, so use the simple past tense. The past form of win is won. Also, wins is used with a third-person singular subject, not with I.

× Sometimes I'm lose the games.

✓ Sometimes I lost the games.

Because the speaker is describing completed childhood experiences, use the simple past tense. The past form of lose is lost. The form I'm lose is not grammatically correct.

× They have confident.

✓ They are confident.

Confident is an adjective, so it must follow the linking verb be. Use are confident, not have confident. The verb have would require a noun, such as confidence.

× Some people do multitasking.

✓ Some people multitask.

Multitask is already a complete verb, so it does not need do plus the -ing form. Use the verb multitask directly: Some people multitask.

× Some people do multitasking or

✓ Some people multitask, whereas others do not.

The original sentence ends with or and does not complete the comparison. A complete sentence needs a finished second clause, such as whereas others do not.