Opportunities— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid repeating because. Use accurate collocations and word forms: “those opportunities,” “agricultural activities,” and “some knowledge.” Also, “weeding” is the correct word for removing weeds; “wedding” refers to a marriage ceremony. Organize the answer with a clear reason and a few specific examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My father was a farmer, so he introduced me to several agricultural activities when I was young. For example, I learned how to plow the land, weed the crops, and water the plants. These experiences helped me understand how much effort farming requires.

Sugestão: State your opinion clearly using “Yes, I think people should...” rather than “people are doing.” Explain the main benefit of trying different activities, such as discovering interests, developing skills, or finding better career opportunities. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “some kind of people”; use linking words such as “because” and “as a result.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think people should try different activities whenever possible. By doing so, they can discover their interests and develop a wider range of skills. For example, someone who tries volunteering, sports, and creative hobbies may find a talent or career path they had never considered. As a result, they may become more confident and adaptable.

× Yes, I had that opportunities because I learned several agriculture activities from my father.

✓ Yes, I had those opportunities because I learned several agricultural activities from my father.

The plural noun opportunities requires the plural demonstrative those, not the singular demonstrative that. Also, agricultural is the adjective form used to describe activities related to agriculture.

× I gained several knowledge like plowing, wedding, watering and so many things.

✓ I gained a lot of knowledge about plowing, weeding, watering, and many other things.

Knowledge is an uncountable noun, so it cannot be used with several. Use a lot of knowledge or some knowledge instead. The preposition about is also used to introduce the subject of the knowledge.

× I gained several knowledge like plowing, wedding, watering and so many things.

✓ I gained a lot of knowledge about plowing, weeding, watering, and many other things.

When describing knowledge related to a subject, use knowledge about or knowledge of. Here, knowledge about is the natural choice.

× Yes, I had that opportunities because I learned several agriculture activities from my father because he was a father, he was a farmer and I gained several knowledge like plowing, wedding, watering and so many things.

✓ Yes, I had those opportunities because I learned several agricultural activities from my father. He was a farmer, and I gained a lot of knowledge about plowing, weeding, watering, and many other things.

The original sentence is too long and repeats because several times, which makes the structure difficult to follow. Divide it into two sentences and connect related ideas with and. Avoid unnecessary repetition such as he was a father, he was a farmer.

× Yes, of course, people are doing so many things as they can.

✓ Yes, of course, people should try as many different things as they can.

The question asks what people should do, so the answer should use the modal verb should. The structure should try as many things as they can directly matches the question.

× Yes, of course, people are doing so many things as they can.

✓ Yes, of course, people should try as many different things as they can.

Are doing describes an activity in progress, but the question asks about a general recommendation. Use the base verb try after should to express this general idea.

× Some kind of people try to achieve their goal with their own knowledge and some kind of another people they try to achieve their goal to earn money.

✓ Some people try to achieve their goals using their own knowledge, while other people try to achieve their goals to earn money.

Some kind of people and some kind of another people are incorrect and unnatural quantifier phrases for referring to groups of people. Use some people and other people. Because the subject refers to multiple people, goals is more appropriate than the singular goal.

× Some kind of people try to achieve their goal with their own knowledge and some kind of another people they try to achieve, uh, their goal to earn money.

✓ Some people try to achieve their goals using their own knowledge, while other people try to achieve their goals to earn money.

The second clause incorrectly repeats the subject they after the noun phrase other people. Use while to contrast the two groups and place the subject only once in each clause. This creates a clearer and grammatically complete sentence.