Opportunities— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and add one or two specific examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give short supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. My mother encouraged me to try many activities when I was a child. For example, she enrolled me in piano lessons and a local football club, which helped me learn discipline and teamwork. Because of her support, I became confident trying new things and kept practising both music and sport.

Sugestão: Make your opinion explicit in a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons linked with transitions. Use correct verb forms and avoid vague phrases. Keep it coherent and within five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I think people should try as many different things as possible. Firstly, trying new activities helps you develop skills and confidence; for instance, learning a language can improve communication. Secondly, new experiences encourage personal growth because facing challenges teaches you how to adapt and change. Therefore, experimenting with different activities is valuable at any age.

× When I was a child, I have that chance because my mum really support me in every chance to do anything that I want like for for music and sport also.

✓ When I was a child, I had that chance because my mum really supported me whenever I wanted to do anything, such as music and sport.

Errors: incorrect tense (present 'have' used for past) and subject-verb agreement ('mum support' should be 'mum supported'). Also word choice and word order: 'in every chance' is unnatural; use 'whenever' and 'such as' for examples. Suggestion: Use past simple for completed past events (had, supported) and ensure verb agrees with subject (supported). Combine phrases for clarity and remove repeated words ('for for').

× When I was a child I was I can play

✓ When I was a child, I could play (instruments/football) or I was able to play.

This fragment mixes tenses and is incomplete ('I was I can play'). Use a single past form: 'could' or 'was able to' to express ability in the past. Add an object (what you could play) to complete the sentence.

× I would agree that people should try new things every time because it made people grown up like in every age you need to try new things and when you face the new things, sometimes it's hard and you have a chance to change yourself and actually can develop

✓ I agree that people should try new things often because it helps people grow; at every age you need to try new things, and when you face something new, it is sometimes hard, but you have a chance to change yourself and develop.

Errors: 'I would agree' is awkward here; simple present 'I agree' is better for stating an opinion. 'It made people grown up' uses wrong tense and form; use 'it helps people grow' (present general truth). 'Every time' and 'in every age' are awkward — use 'often' and 'at every age'. Sentence run-on and missing auxiliary: 'actually can develop' should be 'and develop' or 'you can actually develop.' Suggestion: Use present simple for general truths, correct verb forms (grow, develop), and break long sentences into clearer clauses.