Opportunities— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng với câu chủ đề, dùng thì đúng và ngữ pháp cơ bản chính xác, mở rộng bằng 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ tên câu lạc bộ, hoạt động bạn tham gia và cảm nhận). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'they has' và diễn đạt mơ hồ như 'really want to enjoy'. Duy trì tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng liên từ như 'and' hoặc 'so' để nối ý.

Exemplo: Yes. In high school I had the opportunity to join a photography club, and I participated in weekly workshops. I learned how to use a camera and edit photos, which made me more creative and confident.

Sugestão: Bạn nên đưa ra quan điểm rõ ràng ngay từ đầu, sau đó giải thích lý do bằng một hoặc hai câu hỗ trợ với ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh câu lẫn lộn và lặp từ như 'try try'. Sử dụng liên từ (because, but, however) để nối ý và chọn từ vựng phù hợp (ví dụ 'risky' thay vì 'too hot'). Giữ độ dài 2–3 câu và dùng thì đúng.

Exemplo: I think people should try many different things, but they should avoid dangerous or risky activities without proper preparation. For example, trying new hobbies like cooking or sports is beneficial, but extreme sports require training and caution.

× Yes, in my high school they has a club that I really want to enjoy

✓ Yes, in my high school they had a club that I really wanted to enjoy

The original sentence has a subject-verb agreement and tense issue. 'They has' is incorrect because the plural subject 'they' requires the plural verb 'have' in present or 'had' in past. The context refers to childhood (past), so use past tense 'had'. Also 'want to enjoy' should match past perspective 'wanted to enjoy'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for experiences in the past: 'In my high school we had a club that I really wanted to join/enjoy.'

× I think it depends if something too hot you should I shouldn't try try too much

✓ I think it depends; if something is too hot, you shouldn't try it too much

The sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word order, missing verb 'is' after 'something', conflicting modal verbs 'should' and 'shouldn't' used together, and repetition 'try try'. According to the modal verb rules, use one modal to express advice. For conditionals use 'if' followed by a clause with a verb: 'if something is too hot'. Then give advice: 'you shouldn't try it too much' or 'you shouldn't try it at all.' Suggestion: simplify to 'I think it depends. If something is too hot, you shouldn't try it.'