Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 質問に直接答えられていますが、「especially when after I study」は文法的に不自然です。「especially after I study」としましょう。また、「studying is very very tired tired」は重複があり、意味も不明瞭です。人が疲れる場合は「studying makes me tired」のように表現し、理由を一つ具体的に加えると効果的です。

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired, especially after studying for a long time. I find it mentally demanding, so I usually need a short break afterward.

Sugestão: 「長時間勉強した後」という具体的な状況と、その後に休憩するという結果を説明できています。一方、「studying long time periods」は「studying for long periods of time」とし、理由と結果の間に「so」などを入れて文を整理しましょう。短い文に分けると、より自然で聞き取りやすくなります。

Exemplo: I usually feel tired after studying for several hours. Without regular breaks, I become exhausted, so I stop and rest for a while.

Sugestão: 昼寝や散歩をするという回答は質問に合っていますが、「tired of」は不要で、「or should walk」も文法的に不自然です。「go for a walk」と表現しましょう。また、「makes me refresh or return」ではなく、「helps me feel refreshed」のように、行動の効果を明確に説明すると自然です。

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually take a short nap or go for a walk. Both help me feel refreshed and get back to what I was doing.

Sugestão: 精神的に疲れている場合と、身体的に疲れている場合を比較して答えられている点は良いです。ただし、「If it is just mentally tired」は「If I'm only mentally tired」、「it makes me regain and re energized」は「it helps me feel re-energized」としましょう。最後に「I don't go out」のように文を完結させ、理由も簡潔に加えると回答がより自然になります。

Exemplo: If I'm only mentally tired, I still go out with my friends because socializing helps me feel re-energized. However, if I'm physically exhausted, I prefer to stay home and rest.

× I often feel tired especially when after I study because studying is very very tired tired for me.

✓ I often feel tired, especially after I study, because studying is very very tiring for me.

When and after should not be used together here. Use after to introduce the time when you feel tired. Also, use tiring to describe an activity that causes tiredness; tired describes how a person feels.

× I often feel tired especially when after I study because studying is very very tired tired for me.

✓ I often feel tired, especially after I study, because studying is very very tiring for me.

Use tiring to describe studying because studying causes the feeling of tiredness. Tired describes the person experiencing that feeling.

× I feel tired, especially after studying long time periods, studying for several hours without breaks leaves me feeling exhausted so I usually take a break.

✓ I feel tired, especially after studying for long periods. Studying for several hours without breaks leaves me feeling exhausted, so I usually take a break.

Use for before a duration, as in studying for long periods. The correction also separates the two complete clauses clearly.

× When I feel tired of I often take a nap or should walk because it makes me refresh or return.

✓ When I feel tired, I often take a nap or go for a walk because it makes me feel refreshed.

The preposition of does not belong after feel tired in this sentence. Say feel tired, without of.

× When I feel tired of I often take a nap or should walk because it makes me refresh or return.

✓ When I feel tired, I often take a nap or go for a walk because it makes me feel refreshed.

The original sentence does not use a parallel structure: take a nap is coordinated with should walk. Use two matching verb phrases, such as take a nap or go for a walk.

× When I feel tired of I often take a nap or should walk because it makes me refresh or return.

✓ When I feel tired, I often take a nap or go for a walk because it makes me feel refreshed.

To describe how the speaker feels after taking a nap or walking, use the adjective refreshed. The phrase feel refreshed expresses the intended meaning.

× If it is just mentally tired I still go out with my friends because it makes me regain and re energized but if it is physically tired I don't go

✓ If I am just mentally tired, I still go out with my friends because it helps me regain my energy and feel re-energized. But if I am physically tired, I don't go out.

Use I, not it, because the speaker is the person who feels mentally or physically tired. Make sure the pronoun refers to the person being described.

× If it is just mentally tired I still go out with my friends because it makes me regain and re energized but if it is physically tired I don't go

✓ If I am just mentally tired, I still go out with my friends because it helps me regain my energy and feel re-energized. But if I am physically tired, I don't go out.

The original phrase makes me regain and re energized is not grammatically parallel, and regain needs an object. Use regain my energy and feel re-energized. Completing the final phrase with out makes the intended meaning clear.