Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly in the first sentence, then explain the cause and how you manage it. Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases such as “the reason I feel good,” “you do my regular busy life,” and “I think I’m taking some medicine.” Use accurate medical vocabulary and a clear linking word such as “because” or “so.” Keep the response to three or four coherent sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes feel tired, especially because I was recently diagnosed with anemia. My doctor prescribed some medication, so I hope my energy level will improve soon. In the meantime, I try to maintain my usual routine and get enough rest.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear time expression and use the correct adjective structure: “I feel really tired,” not “I’ve really tired.” Avoid repeating “no energy” and remove irrelevant words such as “Hello.” Add one specific reason or result to make the answer more informative and natural.

Exemplo: I usually feel tired in the morning, especially when I have not slept well. I often struggle to get out of bed and feel too exhausted to do anything at first. However, after I take a short walk and start my daily routine, I gradually feel more energetic.

Sugestão: Focus on what you do when you feel tired rather than mainly describing your medical treatment. Use a complete answer with a topic sentence, followed by two specific actions and their results. Correct the article in “went to doctor” to “went to the doctor,” and avoid ending with “and,” which makes the response incomplete.

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually take a short break and drink some water. If I still feel exhausted, I go to bed earlier than usual. Since I started taking the medication prescribed by my doctor, I have gradually begun to feel better.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer such as “No, usually I don’t,” and then explain the contrast between resting and taking care of your children. Replace unnatural phrases like “It’s really not,” “give a time to my kids,” and “I still work” with more natural expressions. Use linking words such as “however” and “because” to make the response coherent.

Exemplo: No, usually I do not go out with my friends when I feel tired because I prefer to rest at home. However, I still have to look after my children, so I cannot completely relax. I try to spend time with them and finish my responsibilities before going to bed early.

× Yes, sometimes I feel tired, but recently I got my lab result.

✓ Yes, sometimes I feel tired, but recently I got my lab results.

The speaker is referring to the results of laboratory tests, so the plural noun results is more appropriate than the singular noun result.

× I talked with doctor, and he said I have anemia.

✓ I talked with the doctor, and he said I have anemia.

A singular countable noun such as doctor normally needs an article or another determiner. The doctor is appropriate when referring to a specific doctor.

× I think I'm taking some medicine and you do my regular busy life, I guess.

✓ I think I'm taking some medicine and continuing with my regular busy life, I guess.

The subject should be I because the speaker is describing their own actions. The pronoun you incorrectly changes the subject to the listener. Continuing with is also the natural verb phrase for maintaining one's usual lifestyle.

× Especially in the morning I feel like I have no energy to wake up.

✓ Especially in the morning, I feel like I have no energy to wake up.

The definite article the is needed before morning when referring to the usual morning period. The comma after the introductory phrase also makes the sentence easier to read.

× That's the most of the time.

✓ That's most of the time.

The expression is most of the time, not the most of the time. The word most already functions correctly without the definite article in this expression.

× I feel like I've really tired.

✓ I feel like I've been really tired.

The verb be is required before the adjective tired. In the present perfect form, be becomes been: have been tired.

× This started last month, so I just went to doctor.

✓ This started last month, so I just went to the doctor.

The singular countable noun doctor needs a determiner. The doctor is appropriate when referring to the specific doctor the speaker visited.

× This started last month so I just went to doctor and he prescribed medication for my blood work and then I feel right now that yeah it's good and

✓ This started last month, so I went to the doctor. He prescribed medication for my blood work, and now I feel that it is better.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence and ends with and, leaving the structure incomplete. Dividing it into two sentences and completing the final clause makes the meaning grammatically clear.

× I have to stand up and give a time to my kids.

✓ I have to get up and give time to my kids.

Time is generally an uncountable noun when it means attention or time spent with someone, so it should not be used with the article a in this sentence.

× But not with friends.

✓ But I don't go out with my friends.

But not with friends is a sentence fragment because it does not contain a subject and a finite verb. Adding I don't go out creates a complete sentence and directly answers the examiner's question.