Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and avoid the unclear phrase “since I'm already at my sixth year doctor of veterinary medicine student.” Say “I’m in my sixth year of veterinary medicine,” and explain that your heavy workload makes you tired. The phrase “and I think it’s just fine” is confusing because it contradicts the idea of feeling tired; remove it or explain your meaning. Use a concise structure: direct answer, reason, and possibly a brief result.

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired, mainly because I’m in my sixth year of veterinary medicine. I have a heavy workload, including classes, clinical training, and assignments. However, I think it’s manageable as long as I get enough rest.

Sugestão: Give the main answer first, then provide one clear explanation. Replace “just like for example” with either “for example” or “such as,” and say “after lunch” rather than “in the after lunch.” The sentence is too long and repeats “but”; divide it into two or three shorter sentences. “Boring days” is less natural here than “when I have nothing engaging to do.”

Exemplo: I usually feel tired at the end of the day after attending classes and completing my assignments. Sometimes, I also feel sleepy after lunch, especially when I have nothing interesting to do. In those situations, boredom seems to make me feel even more tired.

Sugestão: The answer is relevant and includes specific actions, but “empty out my thoughts” and “waken up myself” are unnatural. Use “clear my mind” and “wake myself up.” Avoid repeating “try to,” and introduce the example naturally with “For example.” You could also mention a short break or water to make the response more complete while keeping it concise.

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually take a short break to clear my mind. For example, I do some light exercise or stretching to wake myself up. These activities help me feel more refreshed and focused.

Sugestão: Your answer gives a clear condition, but the final sentence contains repetition and grammatical errors: “if I really I'm really, really tired” should be “if I’m really tired,” and “if I’m not gonna enjoy” is better as “if I won’t enjoy myself.” Replace “waste their time” with “let them down” or “cancel at the last minute,” depending on your meaning. Finish the answer clearly by saying that you politely ask to reschedule when necessary.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually go out with my friends, especially when we have made plans in advance. I don’t want to let them down, but I also consider how tired I am. If I’m too exhausted to enjoy myself, I politely explain the situation and ask if we can meet another day.

× Yes, especially with the workload that I have since I'm already at my sixth year doctor of veterinary medicine student and I think it's just fine.

✓ Yes, especially because of my workload. I am already in my sixth year as a Doctor of Veterinary Medicine student, and I think it is fine.

Use in, not at, when referring to a particular year of study. The original sentence also contains an awkward structure because the ideas are joined without a clear grammatical connection. Use as a student to identify the speaker's status clearly, and separate the ideas into two sentences for better structure.

× Mostly at the end of the day, but there are times that I feel tired in the middle of the day just like for example in the after lunch during those boring days, but it's maybe because I am not doing anything and it's just the boredom that makes me feel tired.

✓ Mostly at the end of the day, but sometimes I feel tired in the middle of the day, for example, after lunch on boring days. Maybe it is because I am not doing anything, and the boredom makes me feel tired.

Do not use in before after lunch because after lunch already functions as a time expression. Also, do not use the before after lunch in this context. The phrase after lunch is sufficient. The revised sentence uses clearer prepositions and avoids repeating but in one long sentence.

× Most of the time I just try to empty out my thoughts and try to waken up myself by for example doing light exercises or stretching so that my body will feel recharged.

✓ Most of the time, I try to clear my mind and wake myself up by doing light exercises or stretching so that my body will feel recharged.

The natural position of the reflexive pronoun is after the verb and before the particle: wake myself up, not waken up myself. In addition, clear my mind is the more natural expression for this meaning. The structure by doing is correct because a gerund follows the preposition by.

× Yes, especially when we already plan it out ahead of time. I don't want to waste their time just because I feel tired, but I also assess myself if I really I'm really, really tired and if I'm not gonna enjoy going out or be with them, I try to ask politely.

✓ Yes, especially when we have already made plans. I do not want to waste their time just because I feel tired, but I also assess whether I am really tired. If I am not going to enjoy going out or being with them, I try to ask them politely.

Use the present perfect, have already made, for plans that were completed before the present situation. The phrase if I really I am really tired has an incorrect word order and repeats the subject and adverb. Use whether I am really tired instead. Going to is the standard form in careful speech, and going out should be parallel with being with them. The verb ask normally needs an object in this context, so ask them politely is clearer.