Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答直接，原因也比较具体，但“It's definitely especially these months”表达不自然，应改为“I definitely feel tired more often these days”。“take a lot of stress”应改为“experience a lot of stress”或“feel under a lot of pressure”。另外，“my company”重复出现，可以用“the company”替代。建议使用“because”和“so”清楚连接原因与结果，并避免句子过长。

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely feel tired more often these days. The company I work for is going through a PR crisis, and I’m the PR director, so I’m under a lot of pressure. I often have to deal with urgent problems and work late.

Sugestão: 本题回答中有多处影响理解的语法和词汇错误。“physics”应改为“physical health”，“mental”应改为“mental state”，“mentally tailed”应改为“mentally exhausted”，“terri­bled”应改为“terrible”或“stressed”。“It's just a real child”语义不清，建议删除。应先明确回答在工作压力大或与老板沟通后感到疲惫，再补充心理疲劳比身体疲劳更明显，并使用“especially when”和“because”等连接词。

Exemplo: I usually feel tired after a stressful day at work. For me, tiredness is not only physical but also mental. I feel especially exhausted after difficult conversations with my boss because they require a lot of concentration and emotional energy.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体且有个人特色，也能解释为什么和猫相处会让你放松。不过“When I feel tired”重复两次，可以改为“Whenever I feel tired”。“their little furry tails will let me feel really comfortable”不够自然，建议改为“playing with them helps me relax”。最后一句应改为“I think spending time with loved ones makes me feel more relaxed”，并注意主谓一致。

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually spend some time with my two cats. Playing with them, especially watching them chase their furry tails, helps me relax. I also believe that spending time with loved ones can reduce stress and make me feel refreshed.

Sugestão: 回答立场清楚，也给出了原因，但“connect with my friends”在这里不如“go out with my friends”或“meet my friends”自然。“I'm really low energy”应改为“I have very little energy”，“I wouldn't feel affect my friends”语法错误且意思不清，可改为“I wouldn’t be very good company for them”。“when I feel tired”重复较多，建议用“because”连接原因，并补充一个具体做法，例如在家休息后再联系朋友。

Exemplo: Usually, I prefer not to go out with my friends when I feel tired. I have very little energy, so I worry that I wouldn’t be good company for them. Instead, I usually rest at home and meet them when I feel more energetic.

× It's definitely especially these months because my company is going through a PR crisis and I'm the PR director of my company, so I take a lot of stress.

✓ I definitely feel tired, especially these months, because my company is going through a PR crisis. I’m the PR director of my company, so I’m under a lot of stress.

原句以“It’s definitely”开头，但后面缺少清晰的表语，句子结构不完整。“I definitely feel tired”能直接回答考官的问题。另外，“take a lot of stress”结构不自然，应使用“be under a lot of stress”，表示“承受很大压力”。

× so I take a lot of stress.

✓ so I’m under a lot of stress.

表示“处于压力之下”时，应使用固定搭配“be under stress”。不能说“take stress”来表达“承受压力”。

× I think that tell is not only about your physics but also about your mental.

✓ I think that tiredness is not only about your physical health but also about your mental health.

“physics”表示“物理学”，这里应使用“physical”作形容词，修饰“health”。“mental”也是形容词，不能单独代替“心理健康”，所以应说“mental health”。此外，“tiredness”可以作句子的主语，表示“疲劳”。

× I’m that kind of person when I feel I’m really mentally tailed.

✓ I’m the kind of person who feels really mentally tired.

在“the kind of person”后面需要使用关系代词“who”引导定语从句，说明“什么样的人”。“who”指代“person”，并且在从句中作主语，所以谓语使用“feels”。

× I’m that kind of person when I feel I’m really mentally tailed.

✓ I’m the kind of person who feels really mentally tired.

“tailed”不是这里所需要的过去分词。表达“感到疲惫”应使用“tired”。“tired”是由动词“tire”的过去分词形式构成的形容词，常用于描述人的感受。

× So when I talk with my boss and I would feel really terribled.

✓ So when I talk to my boss, I feel really terrible.

题目询问的是通常在什么情况下感到疲惫，因此应使用一般现在时。“when”引导的条件或时间从句中使用“talk”，主句使用“feel”，不需要使用“would”。

× So when I talk with my boss and I would feel really terribled.

✓ So when I talk to my boss, I feel really terrible.

“terribled”不是正确的形容词形式。这里需要使用形容词“terrible”来描述说话人的感受。注意“terrible”表示“令人难受的”，而“terrified”表示“感到非常害怕”，两者意思不同。

× I love my cats and I think to spend time with your loved ones will make you feel more relieved.

✓ I love my cats, and I think spending time with your loved ones will make you feel more relieved.

当“spend time...”作为“think”后的观点内容，并且整体充当主语时，应使用动名词“spending”，而不是不定式“to spend”。“Spending time...”表示“花时间……这件事”。

× Actually, I try not to connect with my friends when I feel tired because when I feel tired I’m really low energy.

✓ Actually, I try not to contact my friends when I feel tired because when I feel tired, I’m really low on energy.

表示“精力不足”时，正确搭配是“be low on energy”，其中需要介词“on”。“I’m low energy”缺少介词。

× I wouldn’t feel affect my friends.

✓ I wouldn’t want to affect my friends.

“wouldn’t feel affect”不能构成正确的英语句子。“would”后面应接动词原形；这里想表达“不想影响朋友”，应使用“wouldn’t want to affect”。结构是“would + want + to do”。