Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and well supported with a relevant example. However, use more natural grammar: say “if I work hard during the day” instead of “if I do something active and work so hard,” “attend classes all day” instead of “attend classes whole day,” and “I usually feel” instead of “I will mostly feel” when describing a general habit. Avoid redundancy such as “tired and exhausted,” because one word is sufficient here.

Exemplo: No, not really. I usually feel tired only after a particularly busy or active day. For example, if I attend classes all day, I normally feel exhausted by the evening.

Sugestão: You answer the question directly, but the response repeats “feel tired” several times and ends with the vague phrase “it changes anyway.” Use one clear topic sentence followed by a specific reason or example. For general situations, use the present simple consistently: “If I work hard, I usually feel tired,” rather than repeatedly using “will.”

Exemplo: I usually feel tired in the evening after a busy day at work. In particular, dealing with several deadlines or attending long meetings can leave me mentally exhausted. Once I get home, I normally need some quiet time to relax.

Sugestão: Your response has a clear answer and a logical sequence, but some expressions are unnatural. Say “take a bath” rather than “have a bath” if describing your usual routine, “take a short nap” rather than “a small nap,” and “relax” rather than “get relaxed.” The phrase “warm up” does not fit this context; explain that the routine helps you recharge or regain energy.

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually take a warm bath and then have a short nap. This helps me relax and clear my mind after a busy day. After that, I normally feel refreshed and ready to do something else.

Sugestão: You show a good contrast with “however,” but the answer contains several hesitations, repetitions, and incorrect phrases. Say “I would probably still go with my friends” instead of “go without with my friends,” and “I would politely tell them I couldn’t make it” instead of “ask them to go without me.” Replace “casual meet up” with “casual get-together” and “it changes time to time” with “it depends on how tired I am.”

Exemplo: It depends on how tired I am and how important the plan is. If it is a special occasion, I would probably still go out with my friends, even if I felt a little tired. However, if it is just a casual get-together, I would politely cancel and rest at home.

× No, not really. However, I would say if I do something active and work so hard during the day, I will often feel tired in the evenings.

✓ No, not really. However, I would say that if I do something active and work hard during the day, I often feel tired in the evening.

This describes a general or repeated situation, so the present simple should be used in both parts of the conditional sentence: if I do..., I often feel.... The future form will is not necessary for a habitual result. Work hard is also the more natural expression for describing how someone works.

× For example, if I had to attend classes whole day, I will mostly feel tired and exhausted by the end of the day.

✓ For example, if I have to attend classes all day, I will usually feel tired and exhausted by the end of the day.

The original sentence combines the past form had to with the future form will. For a possible future situation, use the first conditional: if + present simple, followed by will + base verb. All day is the correct expression for the duration of a whole day.

× If I work so hard, I will often feel tired.

✓ If I work hard, I often feel tired.

This is a general cause-and-effect statement, so the present simple should be used in both clauses. The adverb often shows that the result is habitual rather than a single future event.

× If it's something urgent I would I would probably go without with my friends.

✓ If it's something urgent, I would probably go out with my friends.

The phrase go without with my friends contains an incorrect and repeated preposition. Use go out with my friends when you mean that you will spend time outside with them. The repeated words I would should also be removed.

× However if it's a casual meet up and I feel so tired, I would uh, politely ask them to go without me so I can have a rest at home so it changes time to time.

✓ However, if it's a casual meet-up and I feel very tired, I would politely ask them to go without me so that I could rest at home. The answer changes from time to time.

The original sentence joins too many ideas with so, creating an unclear structure. Use so that to introduce the purpose of asking them to go without you, and separate the final idea into a new sentence. From time to time is the correct prepositional expression.

× However if it's a casual meet up and I feel so tired, I would uh, politely ask them to go without me so I can have a rest at home so it changes time to time.

✓ However, if it's a casual meet-up and I feel very tired, I would politely ask them to go without me so that I could rest at home. The answer changes from time to time.

The expression time to time is missing the preposition from. The correct phrase is from time to time, which means occasionally or sometimes.