Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 最初に「頻繁ではない」と明確に答え、その後に理由や具体例を加えると、より自然で効果的です。「I feel tired」が繰り返されているため、2文目では「This usually happens when...」など別の表現を使いましょう。また、文を区切り、接続語を使って流れを明確にしてください。

Exemplo: No, not very often. I only feel tired occasionally, especially after exercising or having a busy day at school.

Sugestão: 質問に対して、疲れる具体的な場面を直接答えられています。ただし、「as I say that」は不自然なので、「As I mentioned」または省略しましょう。また、「when exercising」と「taking a test」を並列にする場合は、文の形をそろえ、試験で疲れる理由を簡単に説明すると内容がより具体的になります。

Exemplo: As I mentioned, I usually feel tired after exercising. I also get tired when I take a difficult test because I have to concentrate for a long time.

Sugestão: 行動を具体的に述べている点は良いですが、「or」が重複し、「they helps」は主語と動詞の一致が必要です。また、「read off」はこの文脈では不自然で、「relaxed」や「refreshed」を使うとよいでしょう。「take a break」の後に、アニメを見ることや友達と飲み物を飲むことを明確な文で説明してください。

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually take a short break. I might watch anime or have a drink with a friend because these activities help me relax and feel refreshed.

Sugestão: 「疲れていても友達と出かける」という立場は明確ですが、「if」と「even though」の使い方が重複しており、文が不自然です。また、「a exception」は「an exception」、「go to quite」は意味が不明確なので、「stay home」や「go out quietly」など、意図に合う表現を使いましょう。通常の場合と例外の場合を、対比表現「However」や「Unless」で整理するとよいです。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually still go out with my friends if I am only a little tired. However, if I feel completely exhausted, I prefer to stay home and get some rest.

× No I don't I feel tired sometimes for example when I exercise I feel tired.

✓ No, I don't. I sometimes feel tired. For example, I feel tired when I exercise.

The original answer joins several independent clauses without appropriate punctuation or sentence boundaries. Use a full stop to separate complete sentences and commas after introductory expressions such as for example.

× When I feel tired I usually take a break like watching anime or or have a drink with my friend.

✓ When I feel tired, I usually take a break, such as watching anime or having a drink with my friend.

The verbs after or should have parallel forms. Because watching is in the -ing form, have should also be changed to having. Such as is also more natural when giving examples.

× They helps me feel relaxed and read off.

✓ They help me feel relaxed.

The subject they is plural, so it must be followed by the base verb help, not the singular form helps. The phrase read off is unclear and has been omitted because it does not express a complete or clear idea in this context.

× Yes I tend to go out with my friend if I feel tired even though I feel tired but there is a exception where I feel exhausted I usually don't go to quite.

✓ Yes, I tend to go out with my friends if I feel tired, even though I feel tired. However, there is an exception: when I feel exhausted, I usually do not go out.

Even though already introduces a contrast, so it should not be followed by but in the same clause. Use either even though or but, not both. However can introduce the contrasting second sentence.

× There is a exception where I feel exhausted.

✓ There is an exception when I feel exhausted.

Use an before exception because exception begins with a vowel sound. When is also more appropriate than where because the speaker is referring to a situation or time, not a place.

× There is a exception where I feel exhausted I usually don't go to quite.

✓ There is an exception: when I feel exhausted, I usually do not go out.

The original sentence contains two complete ideas joined without appropriate punctuation. Use a colon to introduce the specific exception, and use go out to express the intended meaning. The phrase go to quite is not a grammatically complete expression.