Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly, but avoid repetition and unclear phrases such as “So these and often.” Use more natural expressions, such as “My sleep is often disturbed” and “I sometimes have vivid nightmares.” Keep the explanation focused and organize it with a clear reason and result.

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired because I do not sleep very well. I sometimes wake up in the middle of the night feeling disoriented, and I also have vivid nightmares. As a result, I often feel exhausted the next morning.

Sugestão: The answer is relevant and includes a clear reason, but “The most frequent circumstances that I feel tired is” is grammatically unnatural. Say “The time I feel most tired is…” or “I usually feel tired…” Also, avoid repeating “exams” and use a linking phrase to connect over-preparation with stress more smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually feel tired after taking an exam. I tend to overprepare because I have been quite anxious about exams since I was a child. Therefore, even when the exam is over, I still feel mentally exhausted.

Sugestão: You give a direct answer and relevant examples, but some phrases are unnatural, especially “do some like regular activities,” “city walking,” and “relax my nerves.” Use “go for a walk,” “draw,” or “calm myself down.” Avoid repeating “activities” and explain briefly how these actions help you recover.

Exemplo: I usually take a nap when I feel tired. If I do not want to sleep, I go for a walk or draw for a while. These activities help me clear my mind and calm down.

Sugestão: This is a clear and well-supported response with a logical reason and result. However, avoid the repeated “and,” and replace the slightly unnatural phrase “consumes my energy” with “drains my energy.” “After an exhausting trip or exam” is understandable, but “after a tiring trip or a difficult exam” sounds more natural.

Exemplo: Usually, no. Socializing tends to drain my energy, especially when I am already exhausted. Therefore, I prefer to stay at home and spend some quiet time alone after a tiring trip or a difficult exam.

× So these and often and I often experience terrible dreams, nightmares that affect my sleep quality.

✓ I often experience terrible dreams, or nightmares, that affect my sleep quality.

The original sentence contains repeated and incorrectly connected words, which makes its structure unclear. Use one complete subject and verb, and connect the alternative nouns with or: dreams, or nightmares.

× The most frequent circumstances that I feel tired is after I take an exam because I have the habit of over preparing for exams since I was a kid and taking exams is always a stressful task.

✓ The circumstance in which I most frequently feel tired is after I take an exam because I have had the habit of overpreparing for exams since I was a child, and taking exams is always stressful.

The subject circumstance is singular, so it must be followed by is. Circumstances would require are. The revised sentence also uses the more natural expression in which and the present perfect have had to describe a habit that began in the past and continues to the present.

× Typically no because I feel that interacting with other people consumes my energy and and makes me even more tired than before, so I usually prefer to stay alone after an exhausting trip or exam.

✓ Typically, no, because I feel that interacting with other people consumes my energy and makes me even more tired than before, so I usually prefer to be alone after an exhausting trip or exam.

The conjunction and is repeated unnecessarily. Use it only once to connect consumes my energy with makes me even more tired. The phrase be alone is also the natural expression for choosing not to spend time with other people.