Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly with a clear frequency, such as “Yes, I often feel tired.” Avoid unclear phrases like “from my words,” and use accurate expressions such as “from Monday to Friday” and “I work long hours.” Also, replace “exoted” with “exhausted.” Organize your answer with a reason and, if possible, a specific result.

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired, especially from Monday to Friday. I usually work long hours during the week, so I feel exhausted by the time I get home. However, I normally recover after getting enough sleep at the weekend.

Sugestão: Give a specific situation and explain why it makes you tired. Use natural vocabulary such as “tasks on my desk,” “deadlines,” and “finish my work.” Avoid inaccurate phrases like “many words put on my decks” and “let me two lying.” Use linking words such as “because” and “so” to connect your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: I usually feel tired at the office, especially when I have many tasks on my desk. I need to concentrate on my work and meet several deadlines before Friday, which can be stressful. As a result, I often spend part of the weekend resting in bed.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer and use the correct phrase “play games,” not “pray game.” Explain how this activity helps you relax, and give a clear example. Replace unnatural expressions such as “I foul relax,” “get more enchantment,” and “when I come back to my home” with “I feel relaxed,” “become immersed in the game,” and “when I get home.”

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually play video games when I get home. I particularly enjoy games such as Mario because they help me relax and take my mind off work. After playing for a while, I feel calmer and more refreshed.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear “yes” or “no,” then explain your choice. The phrase “paint towering” is unclear; use “go out” or “hang out.” Describe a specific activity, such as having dinner or taking a walk, and explain that spending time with friends helps you forget about work and relax. Avoid unnatural phrases like “tough time and office” and “put all trolling state out.”

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes go out with my friends even when I feel tired. We usually have a quiet meal or take a short walk after work. Spending time with them helps me forget about my stressful day and feel more relaxed.

× I always feel tired from my words.

✓ I always feel tired after work.

After work is the appropriate prepositional phrase for describing when you feel tired. From my words does not express the intended cause or time clearly. Use after work, after school, or after a long day to describe when tiredness occurs.

× On Monday I start first day off a week and in Friday I took along seven days a week for work and yeah that's why I feel so exoted.

✓ I start work on Monday, the first day of the week, and I work seven days a week, so I feel so exhausted.

The phrase first day needs the definite article the, and the correct preposition is on Monday, not in Friday. Because this describes a regular schedule, use the present tense work instead of the past-tense form took. Use days in the plural after seven. Exhausted is the correct adjective for feeling extremely tired.

× Many words put on my decks and I should pay attention on it before Friday to end every text.

✓ Many tasks are put on my desk, and I should pay attention to them before Friday to finish every task.

A passive sentence needs the auxiliary verb are before the past participle put. Use desk for one workspace and them because it refers to the plural noun tasks. The correct preposition is pay attention to, not pay attention on. Use every task because every is followed by a singular countable noun.

× On the weekend, I will let me two lying on the bed along the day.

✓ On the weekend, I will lie in bed all day.

After will, use the base form lie, not the -ing form lying. The natural preposition is in bed, and all day is the correct expression for the entire day. Do not use me after will in this sentence because the subject I already performs the action.

× I always pray game when I come back to my home.

✓ I always play games when I come back home.

Use the plural noun games when talking about this hobby generally. Come back home is the natural expression, and home normally does not need the preposition to in this structure. Use play for activities such as games.

× Game is the hobby that I foul relax and comfortable when I'm with it such as Mario.

✓ Playing games is a hobby that helps me relax and feel comfortable, especially when I play games such as Mario.

Playing games is treated as a singular subject, so use helps, not help. After help, use the base verb relax. Feel must be followed by the adjective comfortable, and the pronoun it should not refer to the plural noun games; repeat games or use them when necessary. Use a before the singular countable noun hobby.

× We always hang out together after tough time and office.

✓ We always hang out together after a tough day at the office.

The singular countable noun day needs the article a. The standard expression is at the office, not simply office. Adding day makes the time expression grammatically complete and natural.