Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly with the correct subject–verb agreement: say “I don’t,” not “I doesn’t.” “Everydays” is incorrect; use “daily life” or “everyday routine.” Also, “make everything happy” is unnatural and unclear. Give one specific reason and avoid contradictory ideas such as saying your life is both useful and boring unless you explain the contrast.

Exemplo: No, I don’t often feel tired because I usually have a well-organized routine. I spend my time doing things I enjoy, such as reading and exercising, so I generally feel energetic and positive.

Sugestão: Use the natural expression “at night,” and use the present simple for a regular situation: “I feel tired because I work during the day.” “I had doing” should be replaced with “I have done” or, more naturally here, “I’ve finished.” “Homeless” does not mean emotionally exhausted; use “exhausted” or “mentally drained.” Organize the answer with a clear time, reason, and result.

Exemplo: I usually feel tired at night, especially after a busy day at work. By the time I get home, I’ve used up most of my energy, and I often feel mentally drained because I have had to concentrate on many tasks.

Sugestão: The answer is relevant and has a clear structure, but use “listen to music” rather than “listen to the music” when speaking generally. “Make me relax” should be “help me relax” or “make me feel relaxed.” Replace “Beside that” with “Besides that” or “In addition.” Avoid repeating “when I feel tired” and add a specific detail about the kind of music or conversation.

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually listen to some relaxing music because it helps me unwind. Besides that, I sometimes chat with my close friends, as talking to them improves my mood and helps me forget about work for a while.

Sugestão: Make your conditional answer simpler and clearer. Use “If they invite me” rather than “If I had answer them,” and use “go out” rather than “go up.” Explain the main condition first: you go out if you have already made plans, but you stay home if you are too tired. Keep the verb tenses consistent and avoid repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: It depends on whether we have already made plans. If I’ve agreed to meet them, I’ll usually go out even if I’m a little tired. However, if I’m exhausted and we haven’t arranged anything in advance, I prefer to stay home and rest.

× No, I doesn't often feel tired because I think my everydays are very useful and even boring because I will do the things that I like and try to make everything happy.

✓ No, I don't often feel tired because I think my everyday life is useful and not boring. I do the things that I like and try to make everything enjoyable.

The subject I takes do, not does. Does is used with third-person singular subjects such as he, she, and it.

× No, I doesn't often feel tired because I think my everydays are very useful and even boring because I will do the things that I like and try to make everything happy.

✓ No, I don't often feel tired because I think my everyday life is useful and not boring. I do the things that I like and try to make everything enjoyable.

Everyday is an adjective, so everydays is incorrect here. Use the singular noun phrase everyday life. Also, everything is singular and does not need a plural form.

× No, I doesn't often feel tired because I think my everydays are very useful and even boring because I will do the things that I like and try to make everything happy.

✓ No, I don't often feel tired because I think my everyday life is useful and not boring. I do the things that I like and try to make everything enjoyable.

The answer describes a usual habit, so use the present simple I do instead of the future form I will do. Use the present simple for routines and repeated actions.

× No, I doesn't often feel tired because I think my everydays are very useful and even boring because I will do the things that I like and try to make everything happy.

✓ No, I don't often feel tired because I think my everyday life is useful and not boring. I do the things that I like and try to make everything enjoyable.

Make everything happy is not the natural expression because things cannot normally feel happiness. Use make everything enjoyable or make everything fun to express that the activities are pleasant.

× Usually I will feel tired in the night because I had doing everything and work in the day.

✓ Usually, I feel tired at night because I have done everything and worked during the day.

This sentence describes a regular situation, so use the present simple I feel instead of I will feel. The present simple is appropriate for repeated situations.

× Usually I will feel tired in the night because I had doing everything and work in the day.

✓ Usually, I feel tired at night because I have done everything and worked during the day.

After have or has, use the past participle form. The correct form is have done, not had doing. The verb work should also be changed to worked to maintain parallel structure with done.

× Usually I will feel tired in the night because I had doing everything and work in the day. So after I back to home I feel tired and homeless because I need to think many thing when I work.

✓ Usually, I feel tired at night because I have done everything and worked during the day. So, after I get back home, I feel tired and overwhelmed because I need to think about many things while I work.

Use at night and during the day for these time expressions. The natural expression is get back home, without to before home. Use think about when referring to the subject of your thoughts.

× Usually I will feel tired in the night because I had doing everything and work in the day. So after I back to home I feel tired and homeless because I need to think many thing when I work.

✓ Usually, I feel tired at night because I have done everything and worked during the day. So, after I get back home, I feel tired and overwhelmed because I need to think about many things while I work.

Many must be followed by a plural countable noun. Therefore, use many things, not many thing.

× Usually I will feel tired in the night because I had doing everything and work in the day. So after I back to home I feel tired and homeless because I need to think many thing when I work.

✓ Usually, I feel tired at night because I have done everything and worked during the day. So, after I get back home, I feel tired and overwhelmed because I need to think about many things while I work.

Homeless means having no home, so it does not express mental or physical tiredness in this context. Use overwhelmed, stressed, or exhausted depending on the intended meaning.

× When I feel tired, usually I will listen to the music because music can make me relax and not feel tired. Beside that, I will also chat with my friends when I feel tired.

✓ When I feel tired, I usually listen to music because music can help me relax and feel less tired. Besides that, I also chat with my friends when I feel tired.

These are regular actions, so use the present simple I listen and I chat instead of the future form I will listen and I will chat. Use will mainly for future decisions, predictions, or promises.

× When I feel tired, usually I will listen to the music because music can make me relax and not feel tired. Beside that, I will also chat with my friends when I feel tired.

✓ When I feel tired, I usually listen to music because music can help me relax and feel less tired. Besides that, I also chat with my friends when I feel tired.

Music is an uncountable noun when referring to music in general, so it does not need the definite article the. Say listen to music, not listen to the music, unless you mean a specific piece of music.

× When I feel tired, usually I will listen to the music because music can make me relax and not feel tired. Beside that, I will also chat with my friends when I feel tired.

✓ When I feel tired, I usually listen to music because music can help me relax and feel less tired. Besides that, I also chat with my friends when I feel tired.

Besides means in addition to that and is the correct connector here. Beside usually means next to or at the side of something.

× If I had answer them and they want to go at the time, although I feel tired, I will also go out with them. But if I didn't answer them and tell them go up on the time so if I feel tired I will not go up.

✓ If I answer them and they want to go out at that time, I will still go out with them, even if I feel tired. But if I don't answer them and tell them to go out at that time, I will not go out if I feel tired.

This is a first conditional about a possible present or future situation. Use the present simple after if: If I answer and if I don't answer. Had answer and didn't answer incorrectly place the condition in the past.

× If I had answer them and they want to go at the time, although I feel tired, I will also go out with them. But if I didn't answer them and tell them go up on the time so if I feel tired I will not go up.

✓ If I answer them and they want to go out at that time, I will still go out with them, even if I feel tired. But if I don't answer them and tell them to go out at that time, I will not go out if I feel tired.

The original sentence contains several clauses joined in an unclear way, especially the sequence so if. Use a clear first conditional structure: If plus present simple, followed by will plus the base verb. Also, use the complete phrase tell them to go out.