Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly, then explain your reason with shorter, clearer sentences. Replace “work in a laboratory for a long time in a day” with “work long hours in a laboratory,” and use “rest so that I can prepare for the next day” instead of “take a rest to prepare next day.” Add a linking word such as “As a result” to make the answer more coherent. Avoid putting too many ideas into one sentence.

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired these days because I work long hours in a laboratory. I sometimes work late at night, which leaves me exhausted. As a result, I usually go straight home and rest so that I can prepare for the next day.

Sugestão: Clarify when you feel tired and avoid irrelevant or confusing details. “Walk late at night in Lobai Laboratory” may not express your intended meaning; say “when I work late at night in the laboratory.” Use the correct forms “overcome tiredness,” “makes me feel refreshed,” and “helps me recharge.” The final sentence does not clearly answer the question, so replace it with a specific result, such as being able to concentrate better.

Exemplo: I usually feel tired when I work late at night in the laboratory, especially after several hours of conducting experiments. To overcome my tiredness, I drink a glass of cold water and take a short break. This helps me feel refreshed and concentrate better on my work.

Sugestão: The answer is direct and appropriately brief, but improve the grammar and word choice. Say “makes me feel refreshed and re-energized,” not “makes me refreshed and re energizing.” “Walk” is probably a pronunciation or word-choice error; use “work” if you mean your job. Add one more natural action, such as taking a short break, to provide a more specific and developed answer.

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually drink a glass of cold water and take a short break. The water makes me feel refreshed and re-energized. After that, I can concentrate better on my work.

Sugestão: Give a clear choice first, then provide a logical reason. The phrase “because taking a short nap or unless” is grammatically incorrect and makes the meaning unclear. Say “I would rather take a short nap because it helps me recover” instead of “rather than making friends.” You could also mention that you meet your friends another time, which gives the answer a specific and natural ending.

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually prefer not to go out with my friends. I would rather take a short nap because it helps me recover and regain my energy. However, if I have already made important plans, I might meet them briefly and go home early.

× I often feel tired these days because I work in a laboratory for a long time in a day, especially late at night which leaves me exhausted so after work I want to go home and take a rest to prepare next day.

✓ I often feel tired these days because I work in a laboratory for a long time each day, especially late at night, which leaves me exhausted. After work, I want to go home and rest to prepare for the next day.

The expression for a long time in a day is unnatural in this context. Use each day to describe a repeated daily period. Also, prepare must be followed by the preposition for before a noun phrase: prepare for the next day.

× I often feel tired these days because I work in a laboratory for a long time in a day, especially late at night which leaves me exhausted so after work I want to go home and take a rest to prepare next day.

✓ I often feel tired these days because I work in a laboratory for a long time each day, especially late at night, which leaves me exhausted. After work, I want to go home and rest to prepare for the next day.

The phrase next day needs the definite article the because it refers to the specific day following the current day: the next day.

× I often feel tired these days because I work in a laboratory for a long time in a day, especially late at night which leaves me exhausted so after work I want to go home and take a rest to prepare next day.

✓ I often feel tired these days because I work in a laboratory for a long time each day, especially late at night, which leaves me exhausted. After work, I want to go home and rest to prepare for the next day.

The original sentence contains several independent ideas joined together without clear punctuation. Dividing it into two sentences makes the structure clearer and easier to understand.

× When I walk late at night in Lobai Laboratory, I feel tired so to overcome the tiring, I usually drink a glass of cold water.

✓ When I walk late at night in Lobai Laboratory, I feel tired, so to overcome my tiredness, I usually drink a glass of cold water.

Tiring describes something that causes tiredness, while tiredness is the noun needed after the phrase overcome. The corrected sentence uses the appropriate noun form.

× It makes me refresh and recharge it.

✓ It makes me feel refreshed and recharged.

After make someone, use the base verb feel. The adjectives refreshed and recharged describe the person's resulting condition, so the past participle forms are appropriate.

× It makes me refresh and recharge it.

✓ It makes me feel refreshed and recharged.

The pronoun it at the end is unnecessary and unclear because the subject it already refers to the cold water. Do not repeat the object pronoun when no separate object is intended.

× So yes, it helped me improve my experimenting.

✓ So yes, it helps me improve my experimenting.

The student is describing a regular effect of drinking cold water, so the simple present helps is more appropriate than the past tense helped.

× The cold water makes me refreshed and re energizing.

✓ The cold water makes me feel refreshed and re-energized.

After makes me, use the base verb feel. The two resulting adjectives should also be parallel: refreshed and re-energized. Re-energized is written with a hyphen and uses the past participle form.

× When I feel tired I prefer not to meet with my friends because taking a short nap or unless it's helpful for me to recover my health rather than making friends.

✓ When I feel tired, I prefer not to meet my friends because taking a short nap helps me recover rather than going out with them.

The conjunctions or and unless cannot be combined in this structure. The sentence needs one clear reason, so because introduces the reason and rather than contrasts taking a nap with going out.

× When I feel tired I prefer not to meet with my friends because taking a short nap or unless it's helpful for me to recover my health rather than making friends.

✓ When I feel tired, I prefer not to meet my friends because taking a short nap helps me recover rather than going out with them.

The original sentence contains an incomplete and confusing because-clause. The corrected version gives the clause a clear subject, verb, and comparison structure.

× When I feel tired I prefer not to meet with my friends because taking a short nap or unless it's helpful for me to recover my health rather than making friends.

✓ When I feel tired, I prefer not to meet my friends because taking a short nap helps me recover rather than going out with them.

The subject taking a short nap is a singular gerund phrase, so it requires the singular verb helps, not help.