Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答基本直接，但有明显语法和搭配问题。“my schedule packed away study and work”应改为“my schedule is packed with study and work”；“scoring the phone”应改为“scrolling on my phone”；“make me stressful”应改为“make me feel stressed”。建议用现在时描述经常性情况，并用“because/also/as a result”清晰连接原因，避免把多个原因塞进一个过长句子。

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired because my schedule is packed with studying and work. I also stay up late watching TV or scrolling on my phone. As a result, I often feel stressed and exhausted the next day.

Sugestão: 回答内容切题，也提供了两个具体场景，但“long term work”应改为“working for a long time”，“without break”应改为“without a break”。不要用“And”单独开头，可以用“Also”或“Another time”。描述习惯时可使用一般现在时，例如“when I have an exam, I stay up late”，并补充结果使答案更自然。

Exemplo: I usually feel tired after working or studying for a long time without a break. Another time is when I have an important exam, because I often stay up late reviewing my textbooks. The lack of sleep makes me feel exhausted the next day.

Sugestão: 回答了问题，但“will”不适合描述通常的习惯，建议使用“I usually...”或“I tend to...”。“talk about the life and work”应改为“talk about our lives and work”；“experience some negatives”表达不自然，可能想说“talk about negative experiences”或“do something enjoyable”。建议给出一个具体活动，并说明它如何帮助你放松。

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually meet up with my friends. We talk about our lives and work, and sometimes we share our worries. This helps me relax and forget about my stress for a while.

Sugestão: 观点明确，也解释了和朋友外出的原因，但应直接回答“Yes, I do”。“go out with my friends means relaxation”应改为“going out with my friends helps me relax”；“when I was tired”应改为一般现在时“when I am tired”；“feel relaxing”应改为“feel relaxed”。注意句首大写，并避免重复“share our feelings”。

Exemplo: Yes, I do, because going out with my friends helps me relax. When I am tired, I enjoy talking to them about my feelings and daily life. After spending time with them, I usually feel much better.

× Yes, I feel tired because my schedule packed away study and work and I also stay up late watching TV or scoring the phone like exam will make me stressful, so I will feel tired.

✓ Yes, I feel tired because my schedule is packed with studying and working, and I also stay up late watching TV or scrolling on my phone. An exam can make me stressed, so I feel tired.

“my schedule packed”中缺少系动词“is”。“schedule”是主语，“packed”是形容词或过去分词，前面需要使用“is”构成完整句子。建议检查句子中是否有明确的谓语动词。

× Yes, I feel tired because my schedule packed away study and work and I also stay up late watching TV or scoring the phone like exam will make me stressful, so I will feel tired.

✓ Yes, I feel tired because my schedule is packed with studying and working, and I also stay up late watching TV or scrolling on my phone. An exam can make me stressed, so I feel tired.

固定搭配是“be packed with”，表示“充满……”。不能使用“packed away”来表达日程安排得很满。建议积累常见的形容词和介词搭配。

× Yes, I feel tired because my schedule packed away study and work and I also stay up late watching TV or scoring the phone like exam will make me stressful, so I will feel tired.

✓ Yes, I feel tired because my schedule is packed with studying and working, and I also stay up late watching TV or scrolling on my phone. An exam can make me stressed, so I feel tired.

可数名词“exam”是单数时，前面需要冠词。这里表示“一个考试”，所以使用“an exam”。元音音素开头的单数可数名词前使用“an”。

× Yes, I feel tired because my schedule packed away study and work and I also stay up late watching TV or scoring the phone like exam will make me stressful, so I will feel tired.

✓ Yes, I feel tired because my schedule is packed with studying and working, and I also stay up late watching TV or scrolling on my phone. An exam can make me stressed, so I feel tired.

“stressful”表示“令人有压力的”，通常修饰事物；“stressed”表示“感到有压力的”，修饰人。这里主语是“我”，所以应说“I feel stressed”，而不是“I feel stressful”。

× Yes, I feel tired because my schedule packed away study and work and I also stay up late watching TV or scoring the phone like exam will make me stressful, so I will feel tired.

✓ Yes, I feel tired because my schedule is packed with studying and working, and I also stay up late watching TV or scrolling on my phone. An exam can make me stressed, so I feel tired.

问题是在描述经常发生的情况，应使用一般现在时。“I will feel tired”表示将来会感到累，不符合这里的习惯性表达。应改为“I feel tired”。

× I feel really tired after long term work without break. And when I have an important exam, I will stay up late to review my textbooks. It makes me tired.

✓ I feel really tired after working for a long time without a break. When I have an important exam, I will stay up late to review my textbooks. It makes me tired.

“break”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。这里表示“没有休息”，应说“without a break”。另外，将两个完整句子用“And”分开会使表达不够自然，因此将其连接到前一句中。

× I feel really tired after long term work without break. And when I have an important exam, I will stay up late to review my textbooks. It makes me tired.

✓ I feel really tired after working for a long time without a break. When I have an important exam, I will stay up late to review my textbooks. It makes me tired.

介词“after”后面如果接动词，应使用动名词形式。因此“after work”应改为“after working”。建议记住介词后通常接名词、代词或动名词。

× I will hang out with my friends. We will share our feelings and talk about the life and work. Also we will experience some negatives to relax ourselves.

✓ I hang out with my friends. We share our feelings and talk about life and work. We also do some enjoyable activities to relax.

问题描述的是感到疲倦时通常会做什么，属于习惯性行为，应使用一般现在时。“will hang out”和“will share”容易表示将来，而不是日常习惯。建议根据问题的时态使用“I hang out”和“We share”。

× I will hang out with my friends. We will share our feelings and talk about the life and work. Also we will experience some negatives to relax ourselves.

✓ I hang out with my friends. We share our feelings and talk about life and work. We also do some enjoyable activities to relax.

“life”和“work”在这里表示一般概念，并不是特定的生活或工作，所以通常不使用定冠词“the”。应说“talk about life and work”。

× In my opinion, go out with my friends means relaxation and when I was tired I really need my friends to talk with me. it makes me feel relaxing. Also, we will share our feelings.

✓ In my opinion, going out with my friends is relaxing, and when I feel tired, I really need my friends to talk with me. It makes me feel relaxed. We also share our feelings.

当动词短语作句子的主语时，通常使用动名词形式。“go out”应改为“going out”。例如：“Going out is fun.”建议注意动词短语作主语时使用“-ing”形式。

× In my opinion, go out with my friends means relaxation and when I was tired I really need my friends to talk with me. it makes me feel relaxing. Also, we will share our feelings.

✓ In my opinion, going out with my friends is relaxing, and when I feel tired, I really need my friends to talk with me. It makes me feel relaxed. We also share our feelings.

这里表达的是通常情况下的感受，不是过去某一次感到累，所以“when I was tired”应改为“when I feel tired”。同时，“we will share”应改为“We share”，因为这是习惯性行为。

× In my opinion, go out with my friends means relaxation and when I was tired I really need my friends to talk with me. it makes me feel relaxing. Also, we will share our feelings.

✓ In my opinion, going out with my friends is relaxing, and when I feel tired, I really need my friends to talk with me. It makes me feel relaxed. We also share our feelings.

“relaxing”表示“令人放松的”，通常描述活动或事物；“relaxed”表示“感到放松的”，描述人的感受。“make me feel”后面应使用“relaxed”，所以应说“It makes me feel relaxed”。