Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons, and avoid repetition. Use linking words (because, for example) correctly and correct verb forms (e.g., 'I don't exercise' not 'doesn't'). Keep to under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired. I think this is mainly because I don't exercise regularly and I eat a lot of processed food, which affects my energy levels. For example, I usually skip morning exercise and rely on ready-made meals, so I often feel sluggish.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear topic sentence, then give specific situations and a brief consequence. Avoid unclear phrases ('processed germ foods', 'Washomin') and repetition. Use linking words like 'also' or 'because' to connect causes and effects.

Exemplo: I usually feel tired after returning from campus or after long university classes. Also, when I eat junk food or skip proper meals, I feel sluggish and sometimes have stomach problems, so my energy drops quickly.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct statement of your main strategy, then list alternatives using linking phrases (if that is not possible, I usually...). Be careful with verb agreement ('reels that make me busy'). Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: When I feel tired, my first choice is to take a short nap to recharge. If I can't sleep, I usually have a cup of coffee or watch a short movie or some videos to stay alert.

× Yes, I often do feel tired probably because I don't exercise regularly and and don't care about my physical and digestive health for example I eat a lot of processed food and doesn't and don't exercise properly which I need to do.

✓ Yes, I often feel tired, probably because I don't exercise regularly and don't take care of my physical and digestive health. For example, I eat a lot of processed food and don't exercise properly, which I need to change.

Multiple issues: unnecessary auxiliary 'do' in 'do feel' (present simple does not need emphatic 'do' here), duplicated 'and and', incorrect verb form 'doesn't' referring to plural subject 'I' or compound actions, and sentence run-on. Use present simple 'I often feel', remove duplicate 'and', use 'don't take care of' for correct verb phrase, change 'doesn't and don't exercise' to 'don't exercise', and split into shorter sentences. Also 'which I need to do' is vague; 'which I need to change' clarifies the intended meaning.

× I do feel tired when I come from outside or after my university classes.

✓ I feel tired when I come back from outside or after my university classes.

Using 'do feel' is unnecessary emphasis in a neutral answer; use simple present 'I feel'. Also 'come from outside' is unnatural; use 'come back from outside' or 'return from being outside' to indicate returning.

× Also when I don't eat properly and I eat junk foods and processed germ foods or processed foods.

✓ Also, when I don't eat properly and I eat junk food and processed foods.

'Junk foods' and 'processed foods' are uncountable in this context; use 'junk food' and 'processed foods' consistently. 'Germ foods' is incorrect and unclear; remove it. Add a comma after 'Also' for clarity.

× That makes my stomach upset and I need to go to Washomin again.

✓ That upsets my stomach and I sometimes need to go to the washroom again.

Use active simple present 'That upsets my stomach' instead of 'makes my stomach upset'. 'Washomin' appears to be a misspelling; use 'washroom'. Add 'sometimes' if needed for naturalness. Ensure noun 'washroom' is lowercase.

× When I feel tired I try to take a nap immediately or if that's not possible I try to drink some caffeine or try to watch some movies or reels that makes me busy so that I don't feel sleepy or tired.

✓ When I feel tired, I try to take a nap immediately, or if that's not possible I try to drink some caffeinated drink or watch movies or reels that keep me occupied so that I don't feel sleepy or tired.

Use 'caffeinated drink' instead of 'drink some caffeine' for natural phrasing. 'Makes me busy' is incorrect; use 'keep me occupied' with plural subject 'movies or reels' so 'keep' not 'makes'. Add commas to separate clauses. Avoid repeating 'try to' excessively; keeping one is fine. Use consistent verb forms after 'try to' (take, drink/watch).