Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and concise: start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar for time expressions and smoother linking words. For example, say when your shift is, how it affects you, and why it is tiring. Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired because I work a long daytime shift from 7:00 AM to 2:00 PM. As a result, I usually feel stressed and exhausted by mid-afternoon since my job is physically demanding and I have little time to rest between tasks.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear time or situation and give a specific reason. Use correct phrasing for times (e.g., ‘at around 5 p.m.’) and add one brief explanation with a linking word (e.g., ‘because’, ‘so’). Keep it to one or two sentences.

Exemplo: I usually feel tired at around 5:00 PM because that is when my energy drops after several hours of continuous work. By that time I often feel mentally drained and my concentration falls.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement of what you do, then give a brief reason or result. Use natural vocabulary for food and relaxation (e.g., ‘have something hot to eat’), and correct tense and article use. Limit to two sentences and avoid irrelevant details.

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually have a hot meal like ramen and a cold drink because comfort food helps me relax. This simple break helps me recharge and continue working more effectively.

× When my work shift in then I really feel tired because I have a work 7:00 to 2:00 PM.

✓ When my work shift starts, I really feel tired because I work from 7:00 AM to 2:00 PM.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing verb forms. 'Work shift in then' is ungrammatical; use 'shift starts'. 'I have a work 7:00 to 2:00 PM' should be 'I work from 7:00 AM to 2:00 PM' to show time range correctly. Suggestion: place verbs correctly and use 'from...to...' for time ranges. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So this is very stressful and exhausted.

✓ So this is very stressful and exhausting.

The adjective 'exhausted' describes a person or thing that feels tired; 'exhausting' describes something that causes tiredness. Because the speaker refers to the work being stressful and causing tiredness, use 'exhausting'. Also keep tense and adjective forms consistent. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Mostly when my work 5th in that time I really feel tired.

✓ Mostly, when I am at work in the afternoon, I really feel tired.

The original sentence has unclear structure and uses '5th' incorrectly. It seems the speaker means a time (perhaps 'at five' or 'in the afternoon'). I corrected to 'when I am at work in the afternoon' to make a clear time reference and correct verb structure. Use proper time expressions and include the auxiliary 'am' for present progressive/state. Grammar problem type ID:26

× In that time I mostly wanted to eat some freshly food sauce as ramen with coke.

✓ At those times I usually want to eat some fresh food, like ramen, with a Coke.

Multiple issues: 'In that time' should be 'At those times' for habitual actions. 'Wanted' (past) conflicts with habitual present context; use 'want' or 'usually want'. 'Freshly food sauce' is incorrect word choice and word order; use 'fresh food' and 'like ramen' to give an example. Also use 'a Coke' or 'Coke' with article. The verb+ -ing rule applies to gerunds/participles; here 'freshly' was an adverb incorrectly used. Correct the form and word choice. Grammar problem type ID:8

× It feels really relaxed to me.

✓ It makes me feel really relaxed.

'Feels relaxed to me' is odd when describing an action that causes relaxation; use 'makes me feel relaxed' to indicate cause. 'Feels really relaxed to me' might describe one's state, but with food causing relaxation, 'makes me feel' is clearer. Adjust verb and adjective placement for natural expression. Grammar problem type ID:13