Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response direct and grammatical, use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., “try” → “tired”, “finish the day off working day” → “finish a working day”). Use linking phrase for clarity if needed.

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired after a long working day. For example, after eight hours at the office I usually feel drained because I’ve been concentrating and answering emails all afternoon.

Sugestão: Give a concise topic sentence stating when you feel tired, then add one specific reason. Use linking words (because, so) and correct verb forms to make your answer coherent. Avoid repeating phrases and fix word order.

Exemplo: I feel most tired at the end of a long workday because I spend the whole day solving problems and making decisions. As a result, my mind feels overwhelmed and needs a break.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence describing your usual actions, then contrast alternatives with a linking word (but, however). Use correct tense and pronouns, and keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually sit and listen to music to relax. However, if I have enough energy I prefer to go for a short workout because exercising helps me feel refreshed.

× I think I usually feel tired when I finish the day off working day.

✓ I think I usually feel tired when I finish a working day.

The original sentence uses awkward word order and unnecessary words. 'Finish the day off working day' is incorrect. Use simple present for habitual action: 'I usually feel tired when I finish a working day.' Use the article 'a' before 'working day' and remove redundant words. Suggestion: simplify phrases and keep habitual actions in the present simple.

× Nowadays I feel try every day.

✓ Nowadays I feel tired every day.

The word 'try' is a misspelling or wrong word; the correct adjective is 'tired'. Also 'nowadays' with present simple is correct. Replace 'try' with 'tired'. Suggestion: check similar-looking words and ensure correct adjective forms.

× I feel tired that I say I feel tired after a long day of my work day because in my work day I've I feel I my brain is run all the time.

✓ I feel tired, so I would say I feel tired after a long work day because my brain is running all the time during the day.

This run-on sentence has tense and structure problems. Use present simple or present continuous appropriately: 'my brain is running' (present continuous) describes ongoing activity. Remove repeated phrases ('I feel' and 'work day') and add a conjunction ('so') instead of 'that I say'. Use 'during the day' for clarity. Suggestion: break long sentences, avoid repetition, and choose consistent tense for ongoing states.

× I need to think everything every moment that I try so try.

✓ I need to think about everything every moment; I try very hard.

The original has incorrect phrases: 'think everything' should be 'think about everything'; 'that I try so try' is ungrammatical. Use 'try very hard' to express effort. Also separate into two clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use 'think about' for objects of thinking and replace broken phrases with standard expressions.

× If I where we try I just sitting and listening to music, but if if I have an energy I I will choose exercising.

✓ If I were very tired I would just sit and listen to music, but if I have energy I will choose to exercise.

Multiple issues: 'where' should be 'were' in conditional; pronoun 'we' is wrong; verb forms incorrect: 'I just sitting' should be 'I would just sit' in conditional; 'have an energy' should be 'have energy' (no article); 'I will choose exercising' should be 'I will choose to exercise' or 'I will exercise.' Use second conditional for hypothetical tiredness ('If I were very tired, I would...'). Suggestion: use correct conditional forms (were/would), correct verb forms after auxiliaries, and remove unnecessary articles.