Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için doğrudan konu cümlesi kullanın, gereksiz kelime tekrarlarından kaçının ve kısa destekleyici detay ekleyin. Örneğin ‘because of my education and my exams’ kısmını ‘because of studying late for exams’ şeklinde daha doğal İngilizce ile ifade edin. Ayrıca cevap 2-3 cümleyi geçmemeli ve zaman uyumuna dikkat etmelisiniz.

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired, mainly because I study late for exams. Studying long hours at night usually leaves me exhausted the next day.

Sugestão: Cümle yapısına ve zaman uyumuna odaklanın; soru geniş zamanla sorulduğu için cevaplar da geniş zamanda olmalı. Ayrıca fikirlerinizi bağlarken uygun bağlaçlar kullanın (for example, because, so). Kısa ve net iki cümle kullanın: birincisi doğrudan cevap, ikincisi gerekçesi veya örneği.

Exemplo: I usually feel tired after a long day of work because I’ve been active for many hours. Also, when I’m stressed, I tend to feel even more drained.

Sugestão: Daha doğal söyleyiş için fiil formlarına dikkat edin (prefer + verb-ing) ve ‘advertisements’ yerine ‘short videos’ gibi bağlama uygun bir kelime tercih edin. Cümleleri bağlamak için ‘and’ dışında ‘so’ veya ‘to’ gibi yapılar kullanabilirsiniz. Destekleyici detay verin (ne tür diziler, arkadaşlarla ne konuştuğunuz gibi).

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I prefer talking with my friends to relax, and I also watch short videos or my favourite TV series to unwind.

× Generally I feel tired because of my education and my exams.

✓ Generally, I feel tired because of my education and my exams.

Add a comma after introductory adverb 'Generally' to improve readability; tense is correct (present simple) for habitual state.

× I always work for late nights and it feels bad.

✓ I always work late into the night and it feels bad.

Use the -ing form correctly: 'work for late nights' is unidiomatic. The correct phrase is 'work late into the night' to describe working during late hours.

× I feel tired when I had long work during the day.

✓ I feel tired when I have had long work during the day.

Mixing present 'feel' with past 'had' is inconsistent. Use present perfect 'have had' to link a past period of work to the present feeling: 'I feel tired when I have had long work during the day.' Alternatively, 'I feel tired when I have worked a long time during the day.'

× Generally I've when I feel stress makes me more tired than I thought.

✓ Generally, when I feel stressed, it makes me more tired than I thought.

Sentence is ungrammatical and fragments are misplaced. Use 'when I feel stressed' (adjective 'stressed') and insert commas for clarity. 'I've' is incorrect and should be removed.

× When I feel tired, I prefer talk with my friends and for relaxation I watch some advertisements and series that I like.

✓ When I feel tired, I prefer to talk with my friends and, for relaxation, I watch some adverts and series that I like.

After 'prefer' use 'to' + base verb or the -ing form: 'prefer to talk' is correct. Also add commas for clarity and use 'adverts' or 'advertisements' appropriately; 'watch some advertisements' is odd—likely 'watch some shows or series'.