Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, be concise and use a clear topic sentence. Say whether you often feel tired and give a brief reason. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: Sometimes I feel tired, but it depends on what I did earlier. For example, after a busy day at work I usually feel exhausted, whereas I feel fine on lighter days.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence stating specific situations, use correct tense and sentence structure, and avoid repetition. Provide one or two concrete examples and link them with connectors (for example, after, because).

Exemplo: I usually feel tired after long periods of physical activity. For example, when I walk for several hours or return home after a full day of sightseeing, I feel really worn out because my legs are sore and I've been on my feet all day.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and expand your answer slightly with reasons or alternatives. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a linked detail about why the action helps or mention another remedy.

Exemplo: I usually take a short nap to recharge because it helps me regain energy quickly. If I can't sleep, I often go for a short walk or drink some tea to feel more alert.

× I usually taking a nap.

✓ I usually take a nap.

The verb 'take' should be in base form after the adverb 'usually'; using 'taking' creates an incorrect continuous form. Use simple present 'take' for habitual actions. Suggestion: 'I usually take a nap.'

× I usually taking a nap for overcome my tiredness.

✓ I usually take a nap to overcome my tiredness.

After 'usually' use the base verb 'take' (simple present) for habits. Also, use the infinitive 'to overcome' to express purpose rather than the base verb alone. Suggestion: 'I usually take a nap to overcome my tiredness.'

× Yeah, but it's depend on what did I do before.

✓ Yeah, but it depends on what I did before.

The subject 'it' with present tense requires third-person singular 'depends' (subject-verb agreement). Also, in a subordinate clause describing past actions use past simple 'I did' without auxiliary 'did' plus inversion. Suggestion: use 'it depends on what I did before.'

× I would generally when I had to walks a very long time and came home back.

✓ I would generally feel that way when I had to walk for a very long time and came back home.

Several issues: the original lacks the main verb after 'would' (needs 'feel that way'). 'Walks' is incorrect form; after 'had to' use base verb 'walk'. 'Came home back' is redundant; use 'came back home' or 'came home'. Also keep past simple 'had to' and 'came' for the sequence. Suggestion: 'I would generally feel that way when I had to walk for a very long time and came back home.'

× I feel very tired that times, but it's depends on the what did I do before I said it before.

✓ I feel very tired at those times, but it depends on what I did before, as I said earlier.

Use 'depends' for third-person singular 'it'. Replace 'that times' with 'those times' (correct demonstrative). Remove redundant 'the' before 'what'. Use past simple 'I did' without inversion. Replace repetitive 'I said it before' with 'as I said earlier' for clarity and naturalness. Suggestion: 'I feel very tired at those times, but it depends on what I did before, as I said earlier.'

× When would you feel tired?

✓ When do you feel tired?

The examiner's question in the transcript should use simple present 'do you feel' to ask about general habits. Using 'would' is conditional and not appropriate for a general question. Suggestion: 'When do you feel tired?'