Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, use correct grammar and a clear topic sentence. Begin with a direct answer, then give one or two specific reasons using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid repetition and unnecessary words.

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired because I am a PhD student and do a lot of research. For example, long experiments and data analysis leave me exhausted, and when experiments don’t go well I also feel anxious.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence stating the main situations, then give two specific examples with linking words (firstly, secondly). Correct grammar and clearer nouns (e.g. ‘basic English’, ‘research tasks’) will improve clarity.

Exemplo: I usually feel tired in two situations. Firstly, when I study English because practicing speaking and writing takes extra time due to my weak English foundation. Secondly, I feel tired during intensive research periods with long lab sessions and tight deadlines.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a topic sentence about your actions to cope with tiredness. Provide one or two specific coping strategies using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repeating reasons; focus on solutions and be concise.

Exemplo: When I feel tired, I usually take short breaks and get some sleep to recharge. For example, after an hour of studying English I take a 20-minute walk or a nap, which helps me return to work more focused.

× Yes, I often feel tired because I'm a PD student I and I have to do the many research and especially when I experiment in smoothly and got a better result I will tired and anxious.

✓ Yes, I often feel tired because I'm a PhD student and I have to do a lot of research. Especially when an experiment goes smoothly and gets better results, I feel tired and anxious.

Multiple sentence structure mistakes: run-on sentences, incorrect word order, and wrong word forms. 'PD student I and I' is a run-on and misordering; correct to 'I'm a PhD student and I'. 'the many research' uses an incorrect article and noun form; correct to 'a lot of research'. 'when I experiment in smoothly and got a better result' mixes tenses and has wrong preposition; correct to 'when an experiment goes smoothly and gets better results'. 'I will tired and anxious' uses wrong verb form and tense; correct to 'I feel tired and anxious'. Suggestion: Break complex ideas into clear sentences, use correct noun phrases (a lot of research), match verb tenses (present for general statements), and use correct verb forms (feel, go, get).

× Most time on the huge pressure when I study English to practice speaking or writing is difficult for me because my English basic is so bad so I need to spend more time to study it so I will feel very tired and 2nd when I do research.

✓ Most of the time I feel a lot of pressure when I study English. Practicing speaking or writing is difficult for me because my basic English is poor, so I need to spend more time studying it and I feel very tired. I also feel tired when I do research.

Tense and structure problems: 'Most time on the huge pressure' is incorrect; correct to 'Most of the time I feel a lot of pressure'. 'when I study English to practice speaking or writing is difficult' is ungrammatical; separate clauses and use present simple for general facts: 'Practicing speaking or writing is difficult for me'. 'my English basic is so bad' uses incorrect noun order; use 'my basic English is poor'. 'need to spend more time to study it' should be 'spend more time studying it'. 'so I will feel very tired and 2nd when I do research' mixes future 'will' unnecessarily and unclear sequencing; use present 'I feel very tired' and add 'I also feel tired when I do research'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual situations, correct noun order, use gerunds after 'spend time', and split long sentences for clarity.

× Well, when I'm at doing some conflict complex things for me and I will feel tired.

✓ Well, when I'm doing some things that are complex or difficult for me, I feel tired.

Incorrect use of 'at' before a gerund and awkward adjective order: 'I'm at doing' is wrong; say 'I'm doing'. 'conflict complex things' is ungrammatical; correct to 'things that are complex or difficult'. Also unnecessary future 'I will feel tired' for habitual reaction; use present simple 'I feel tired'. Suggestion: Remove 'at' before gerund, use clear adjective order ('complex or difficult'), and use present simple for habitual responses.

× For example, when I practice speaking and writing English is is very difficult for me because my English is too bad and always need a lot of sleep time to.

✓ For example, practicing speaking and writing in English is very difficult for me because my English is poor and I always need a lot of sleep.

Adjective/adverb and sentence structure errors: 'when I practice speaking and writing English is is very difficult' has duplicate 'is' and misplaced clauses; better as 'practicing speaking and writing in English is very difficult for me'. 'my English is too bad' is informal and awkward; use 'my English is poor'. 'always need a lot of sleep time to' is incorrect word order and unnecessary 'to'; correct to 'I always need a lot of sleep'. Suggestion: Use gerunds for activities (practicing), avoid duplicate words, choose precise adjectives (poor), and use natural noun phrases ('a lot of sleep').