Tiredness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and use standard grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly (e.g., “Yes, I often feel tired on weekends when I'm busy.”). Then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”). Avoid slang or unclear phrases (like “crazy ex exhausted”) and correct verb forms (e.g., “when I have done my work” → “after I finish my work”).

Exemplo: Yes, I often feel tired on weekends when I have a lot to do because my days are very busy. For example, after finishing work and running errands I feel exhausted, so I usually rest in the evening.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatically correct answer and organize details with linking words. Begin with a direct sentence (e.g., “I usually feel tired at night before I go to bed.”). Then explain specific reasons in one or two sentences using linking words such as “because,” “after,” or “so.” Avoid repetition and exaggerated informal phrases like “I feel I'm dead.”

Exemplo: I usually feel tired at night before I go to bed because I have a long, busy day. For instance, after work I often go shopping and then study, so by the time I finish my tasks I feel very worn out.

Sugestão: Answer directly and provide specific, varied activities with proper verb forms and linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “I relax at home when I feel tired.”), then give two specific examples and a brief result using words like “for example,” “so,” or “therefore.” Avoid repeating the same phrase and informal words like “chill” too often—use alternatives such as “rest” or “relax.”

Exemplo: I usually relax at home when I feel tired. For example, I meditate or call my mom or friends to talk, and sometimes I just rest on the sofa, so I feel refreshed afterward.

× I don't wanna say I usually feel tired during the weekend, especially when I have a busy day because I find it remarkably overwhelming and not excited at all.

✓ I don't want to say I usually feel tired during the weekend, especially when I have a busy day because I find it remarkably overwhelming and I am not excited at all.

The informal contraction 'wanna' should be replaced with the modal phrase 'want to' in standard English. Also the clause 'not excited at all' lacks a verb and needs 'I am' to form a correct predicate. Suggestion: use 'want to' in formal contexts and include the appropriate be-verb when describing states.

× So I feel a crazy ex exhausted when I done my work, but I have to deal with it.

✓ So I feel exhausted and crazy when I finish my work, but I have to deal with it.

The original mixes incorrect word order and nonstandard forms: 'a crazy ex exhausted' is not grammatical. Use the adjective 'exhausted' and an additional adjective 'crazy' in a natural order. Also 'done my work' is a past form that doesn't fit with the habitual or immediate meaning; use present simple 'finish' for habitual/sequence actions. Suggestion: place adjectives before/after appropriately and use 'finish' for regular/complete actions.

× I don't have a lot of option.

✓ I don't have a lot of options.

'A lot of' requires a plural noun when referring to countable items. 'Option' should be plural 'options'. Suggestion: match quantifier with countability: 'a lot of options' for plural countable, 'a lot of choice' for uncountable.

× I usually feel I usually feel tired before I sleep because they have a long day and my day has to be as busy as I be unfortunately.

✓ I usually feel tired before I sleep because I have a long day and my day is unfortunately very busy.

The sentence repeats 'I usually feel' and uses incorrect pronoun 'they' and wrong verb form 'as busy as I be'. Replace 'they' with 'I' and use present simple 'have' and 'is' to describe habitual states. Remove repetition and reorder adjectives: 'unfortunately very busy'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use present simple for routines: 'I have a long day' and 'my day is very busy.'

× So when I done my day I have to go to buy a food.

✓ So when I have finished my day I have to go buy food.

'Done' is the past participle but used incorrectly without auxiliary; for completed action before another present action use present perfect 'have finished'. Also 'go to buy a food' is unidiomatic: use 'go buy food' or 'go to buy food' and drop the article 'a' with uncountable 'food'. Suggestion: use 'have finished' and 'go buy food.'

× After that I have to read some books.

✓ After that I have to read some books.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but if describing a habitual sequence, present simple 'I read some books afterward' is also possible. No required correction under provided list; keep as is.

× So my day gonna be crazy busy with different kind of things.

✓ So my day is going to be crazily busy with different kinds of things.

'Gonna' is informal; use 'is going to be' for future. 'Different kind of things' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of things.' Also 'crazy busy' can be adverbially modified as 'crazily busy' but 'very busy' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'is going to be very busy with different kinds of things.'

× So before I sleep I feel I'm dead actually.

✓ So before I sleep I feel dead, actually.

The clause 'I feel I'm dead' is awkward because 'feel' should be followed by an adjective complement not a separate clause; 'I feel dead' is correct. Also comma before 'actually' improves readability. Suggestion: use 'I feel dead' to express strong tiredness.

× Whenever I feel tired, especially at the weekend, I usually just chill at home, try to meditate or to try to call my mom or my friends.

✓ Whenever I feel tired, especially at the weekend, I usually just chill at home, try to meditate, or try to call my mom or my friends.

Parallel structure requires consistent verb forms: use 'try to meditate' and 'try to call' or drop the repeated 'to'. The original mixes 'try to meditate' with 'to try to call' which breaks parallelism. Suggestion: maintain parallel infinitive forms or remove the redundant 'to' in the second phrase.

× But that day when I felt crazy tired, I just chill at home and I felt incredibly good.

✓ But that day when I felt crazy tired, I just chilled at home and I felt incredibly good.

The sentence switches between past and present. When narrating a past event, use past tense consistently: 'chill' should be 'chilled'. Suggestion: keep past form for actions in past narratives.