Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 「両親や周囲の大人の行動を見て、礼儀を学んだ」と答えると、質問に直接答えられます。主語と動詞の一致（children run）や所有格（children’s）が不自然で、文の意味も伝わりにくいため、短い文に分けましょう。理由をつなぐときは because や so を使い、同じ内容の繰り返しを避けてください。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly by watching my parents. They always said “please” and “thank you” and treated other people with respect. I gradually learned to do the same.

Sugestão: 最初に「はい、とても重要です」と明確に答え、その後に理由を一つ説明しましょう。ここでは pride ではなく politeness が適切です。また、people に続く動詞は are を使い、「他人から嫌われる」なら are disliked by others のように表現できます。最後の文が途中で終わっているため、社会生活への影響まで言い切ってください。

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people get along with each other. If someone is rude, others may not want to spend time with them. Politeness can make social situations more comfortable.

Sugestão: 「特別なイベント」だけでなく、葬儀や結婚式などの具体例を挙げ、なぜ礼儀が必要なのか説明しましょう。funeral and marriage より funerals and weddings が自然です。formal の繰り返しや文の言い直しを減らし、should を使った文を最後まで完成させてください。

Exemplo: We should be especially polite at formal occasions, such as funerals and weddings. These events are important to the people involved, so we should show respect. For example, we can speak calmly and follow the expected customs.

Sugestão: 子どもの頃にした行動を、過去形で具体的に答えましょう。showed to prideness ではなく showed politeness、また「丁寧な挨拶」は polite greetings と表現できます。お辞儀をしたことに加えて、誰に対して行ったのかを説明すると、より具体的で自然な回答になります。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I showed politeness by greeting adults respectfully. I often bowed when I met my teachers or my friends’ parents. I also used polite expressions like “please” and “thank you.”

× I think our children runs the priority from parents and others.

✓ I think our children run the priority from their parents and others.

The subject children is plural, so the verb must be run, not runs. Use a plural verb with a plural subject.

× So because we are children's watched parents action so it is important effect for to be polite.

✓ Because we children watch our parents' actions, they have an important effect on how we learn to be polite.

The original has an incomplete and confusing clause structure, and it repeats the conjunction so. Use a clear subject and verb, and connect the ideas in one complete sentence.

× So because we are children's watched parents action so it is important effect for to be polite.

✓ Because we children watch our parents' actions, they have an important effect on how we learn to be polite.

Actions is plural because it refers to the actions of parents in general. Use a plural noun when referring to more than one action.

× Yes, pride is very important because if uh if people was not if people is not priorite, they are they are hasted by other people.

✓ Yes, pride is very important because if people are not polite, they are hated by other people.

People is plural, so it takes are, not is or was in this present-tense statement. Use a plural verb with people.

× So it is important for social and

✓ So it is important for society.

Social is an adjective and cannot function as the object of for here. Use the noun society. The original ending is also incomplete.

× So because it is a formal formal event people should should attract should should

✓ Because it is a formal event, people should behave politely.

The original repeats conjunctions and modal verbs and does not form a complete idea. Begin with because, then give a complete main clause with a base-form verb after should.

× When I was a child, I showed to prideness by respecting.

✓ When I was a child, I showed politeness by showing respect.

Show does not take to before its direct object in this meaning. Say show politeness, not show to politeness. After by, use a noun or an -ing form.

× For example, um, formal greeting and bowing, both, it is very brightness, brightness action.

✓ For example, formal greetings and bowing are both polite actions.

The sentence refers to multiple examples, so greeting and action should be plural. Use are with the plural subject formal greetings and bowing.

× For example, um, formal greeting and bowing, both, it is very brightness, brightness action.

✓ For example, formal greetings and bowing are both polite actions.

Use the adjective polite to describe actions. Brightness is a noun and cannot be used as an adjective before action.