Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答有直接回应，也提供了例子，但存在明显的词汇和语法错误，影响表达清晰度。 “showed great”应改为“showed respect”或“greeted them”；“talk to them and she”表达不完整且指代错误。建议使用过去时保持一致，并用“Also”连接第二个例子。

Exemplo: My parents taught me to be polite when I was young. For example, they told me to greet my teachers whenever I saw them in public and to speak respectfully to adults. They also reminded me to use words like “please” and “thank you” when talking to other people.

Sugestão: 观点明确，也给出了职场例子，但“very essential”语义重复，应改为“essential”或“very important”；“in many occasions”应改为“on many occasions”；“when we at workplace”应改为“when we are at work”。避免重复使用“polite”，可以补充礼貌带来的具体结果，例如改善人际关系和工作氛围。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Being polite is essential because it helps people communicate smoothly and maintain good relationships. For instance, at work, speaking respectfully to our managers and colleagues can create a more positive and cooperative atmosphere.

Sugestão: 回答覆盖了学校和工作场所，内容相关，但“in many occasions”应改为“on many occasions”，“when we at school/workplace”应改为“when we are at school/at work”。最后一句中的“platinum”是词汇误用，应为“politeness”；此外，结尾可以说明礼貌的重要作用，而不是重复观点。

Exemplo: We should be polite in many situations, especially at school and in the workplace. For example, we should show respect to our teachers, classmates, managers, and colleagues. We also need to be polite when speaking to strangers or asking someone for help, because good manners make social interactions much easier.

Sugestão: 回答结构基本清楚，并提供了问候长辈的具体例子，但时态不一致：过去经历应使用“showed, met, greeted, said”。“platinum”应改为“politeness”，“through my words”可以改为“through my words and actions”。建议明确举出礼貌用语，例如“please”“thank you”和“excuse me”。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I showed politeness through my words and actions. Whenever I met older relatives, I greeted them respectfully and used polite expressions such as “please,” “thank you,” and “excuse me.” I also offered to help them with small tasks around the house.

× For example, when I saw my teacher on the street, I showed great to him or her and when I met my friends, I should talk to them and she.

✓ For example, when I saw my teacher on the street, I showed great respect to him or her, and when I met my friends, I should talk to them and her.

“showed great”后面缺少名词，句子结构不完整。应使用“showed great respect”表示“表达了很大的尊敬”。

× For example, when I saw my teacher on the street, I showed great to him or her and when I met my friends, I should talk to them and she.

✓ For example, when I saw my teacher on the street, I showed great respect to him or her, and when I met my friends, I should talk to them and her.

“talk to”后面需要使用宾格代词。“she”是主格，不能放在介词“to”后面，应改为宾格“her”。

× Absolutely, Being polite is very essential for everyone and I think in many occasions we should be polite to many people.

✓ Absolutely, being polite is very essential for everyone, and I think on many occasions we should be polite to many people.

表示“在许多场合”时，固定搭配是“on many occasions”，不能使用“in many occasions”。

× For example, when we at workplace we should be polite to our boss and our coworkers.

✓ For example, when we are at work, we should be polite to our boss and our coworkers.

“we at workplace”中缺少系动词“are”。主语“we”后面需要使用“are”构成完整句子。

× For example, when we at school we should be polite to our teachers and classmates, and when we at workplace we should be polite to our bosses and our coworkers.

✓ For example, when we are at school, we should be polite to our teachers and classmates, and when we are at work, we should be polite to our bosses and our coworkers.

两个从句“when we at school”和“when we at workplace”都缺少系动词“are”。应分别改为“when we are at school”和“when we are at work”。

× When I was a child, I always show my platinum through my words and my good behavior.

✓ When I was a child, I always showed my platinum through my words and my good behavior.

句子描述的是过去的童年经历，因此动词“show”应使用过去式“showed”。

× For example, when I meet older relatives, I always greeted them and say some polite words.

✓ For example, when I met older relatives, I always greeted them and said some polite words.

整段内容描述过去的经历，所以“meet”应改为过去式“met”，“say”应改为过去式“said”。同一句中并列动词的时态应保持一致。