Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答没有直接说明“如何学会礼貌”，而且语法和表达较难理解。应先说明父母或老师教你礼貌，再举具体例子。注意使用过去时，例如“my parents taught me”和“we had to say”。避免使用不自然的表达，如“meet a leader”和“on the table we don't sit on the seat”。

Exemplo: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. For example, they told me to greet adults politely and wait until everyone was seated before eating. They also reminded me not to interrupt other people.

Sugestão: 虽然你表达了肯定态度，但没有清楚解释礼貌为什么重要，且“good miner”“later gold appearance”等词语不符合语境。应使用清晰的现在时，并给出一个具体结果，例如礼貌能给别人留下好印象、帮助建立良好关系。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it shows respect and helps people feel comfortable. For example, when we meet someone for the first time, saying hello and asking questions politely can create a good first impression.

Sugestão: 回答提到了见面时要礼貌，但内容不够清晰，且句子结构和词汇使用错误较多。应直接列出两到三个场合，例如第一次见面、正式场合和与年长者交流，并说明礼貌的目的。可以使用“for example”“also”等连接词组织答案。

Exemplo: We should be polite whenever we meet someone for the first time, especially in a formal situation. We should also be respectful when speaking to older people or teachers. Simple actions, such as greeting them and listening carefully, can make the conversation more friendly.

Sugestão: 回答没有清楚说明你小时候做过哪些礼貌行为，而且“writer vocal”和“loud voils”等表达无法理解。应使用过去时，直接列举具体行为，例如轻声说话、不打断别人、使用“please”和“thank you”。注意回答最多五句话，并用连接词补充细节。

Exemplo: As a child, I tried to speak softly and use polite words such as “please” and “thank you.” I also listened carefully and did not interrupt when other people were speaking. My parents taught me that these small actions showed respect.

× Yes, whenever the child is But such as when we need meet a leader we need to say hi and on the table we don't sit on the seat.

✓ Yes, whenever I was a child, such as when I needed to meet a leader, I needed to say hi, and I did not sit on the table.

问题描述的是童年时期的经历，所以应使用过去时。将 is 改为 was，将 need 改为 needed，并将 don't 改为 did not。

× Yes, whenever the child is But such as when we need meet a leader we need to say hi and on the table we don't sit on the seat.

✓ Yes, whenever I was a child, such as when I needed to meet a leader, I needed to say hi, and I did not sit at the table.

表示坐在餐桌旁通常使用 at the table，而不是 on the table。on the table 表示“在桌子上面”。

× Yes, whenever the child is But such as when we need meet a leader we need to say hi and on the table we don't sit on the seat.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I learned to greet leaders politely and not to sit on the table.

原句中有多个从句和短语杂乱连接，句子结构不完整，意思不清楚。可以拆分并使用清晰的主语、谓语和并列结构。

× Definitely when we was a good miner and we have later gold appearance for new people or when they first need to ask

✓ Definitely. When we were young, we learned good manners and how to make a good first impression on new people.

主语 we 后面不能使用 was，应使用 were。be 动词要根据主语的人称和数变化：I/he/she 使用 was，you/we/they 使用 were。

× Definitely when we was a good miner and we have later gold appearance for new people or when they first need to ask

✓ Definitely. When we were young, we learned good manners and how to make a good first impression on new people.

这里谈论的是小时候学习礼貌的经历，应使用过去时。learn 改为 learned；如果使用 have，则应根据语境改为 had。

× Definitely when we was a good miner and we have later gold appearance for new people or when they first need to ask

✓ Definitely. When we were young, we learned good manners and how to make a good first impression on new people.

固定搭配是 make a good impression on someone，表示“给某人留下好印象”，因此应使用介词 on。

× So much one way life is I will need to to be polite such as for example when we meet And later we need to play high and to show a good impression and to appeal a conversation friendly.

✓ There are many situations in life when we need to be polite, such as when we meet people, greet them, show a good impression, and have a friendly conversation.

表示“生活中有很多情况”时，应使用 There are many situations。因为 situations 是复数，所以使用 are，而不是 is。

× So much one way life is I will need to to be polite such as for example when we meet And later we need to play high and to show a good impression and to appeal a conversation friendly.

✓ There are many situations in life when we need to be polite, such as when we meet people, greet them, show a good impression, and have a friendly conversation.

这个回答描述一般性的礼貌行为，应使用一般现在时。need to 比 will need to 更适合表达通常情况。

× So much one way life is I will need to to be polite such as for example when we meet And later we need to play high and to show a good impression and to appeal a conversation friendly.

✓ There are many situations in life when we need to be polite, such as when we meet people, greet them, show a good impression, and have a friendly conversation.

英语中形容词通常放在名词前面，因此应说 a friendly conversation，而不能说 a conversation friendly。

× So much one way life is I will need to to be polite such as for example when we meet And later we need to play high and to show a good impression and to appeal a conversation friendly.

✓ There are many situations in life when we need to be polite, such as when we meet people, greet them, show a good impression, and have a friendly conversation.

原句缺少清晰的主干，并且重复使用 to，多个动作连接不自然。可以使用 when 从句和并列动词，使句子结构更清楚。

× needed to speak as a writer vocal and to advise Saman loud voils and don't say some sentence when other people speak basically is important

✓ I needed to speak in a quieter voice and not say anything when other people were speaking.

原句开头缺少主语 I，后半部分也缺少清晰的谓语结构。完整句子通常需要明确的主语和谓语。

× needed to speak as a writer vocal and to advise Saman loud voils and don't say some sentence when other people speak basically is important

✓ I needed to speak in a quieter voice and not say anything when other people were speaking.

表示“用较小的声音说话”时，常用搭配是 speak in a quieter voice，因此需要介词 in。

× needed to speak as a writer vocal and to advise Saman loud voils and don't say some sentence when other people speak basically is important

✓ I needed to speak in a quieter voice and not say anything when other people were speaking.

when 引导的动作发生在过去，并且表示当时正在进行，所以 speak 应改为 were speaking。be 动词后使用现在分词 speaking，构成过去进行时。

× needed to speak as a writer vocal and to advise Saman loud voils and don't say some sentence when other people speak basically is important

✓ I needed to speak in a quieter voice and not say anything when other people were speaking.

问题问的是童年时做了什么，因此应使用过去时。一般过去时使用 needed；表示当时正在发生的动作使用 were speaking。

× needed to speak as a writer vocal and to advise Saman loud voils and don't say some sentence when other people speak basically is important

✓ I needed to speak in a quieter voice and not say anything when other people were speaking.

在否定句中，表示“任何事情”通常使用 anything，而不是 some sentence。not say anything 是更自然、正确的表达。