Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答基本直接，但时态和词汇有明显错误。因为问题问的是童年经历，应使用过去时，如“my parents taught me”；“great”应改为“greet”，“elder people”更自然地说“older people”或“elderly people”。可以补充父母具体教你的礼貌行为，并使用“for example”连接细节。

Exemplo: My parents taught me how to be polite when I was a child. They told me to greet older people respectfully and say “please” and “thank you.” For example, whenever we visited my grandparents, I was expected to greet them first.

Sugestão: 观点明确，但条件句和表达不够自然。“If you've been polite”应改为一般现在时“If you are polite”；“show the respect”应改为“show respect”。建议说明礼貌的重要性，例如有助于建立良好关系，并使用“because”或“as a result”增强逻辑。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it shows respect and helps people build positive relationships. If you treat others politely, they are more likely to respect you and respond in a friendly way.

Sugestão: 回答提到了两个场合，但句子结构、拼写和表达问题较多。“elder people”应改为“older people”，“grate”应改为“greet”，“Init”应改为“you should use”。应先给出概括性观点，再用“for example”列举见长辈和请求帮助等具体场合，同时注意使用完整句子。

Exemplo: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people. For example, we should greet older people respectfully when we meet them. We should also use polite words such as “please” and “could you” when asking for help.

Sugestão: 内容具体，提到了问候长辈和准备水果，但问题询问过去经历，所以应将“will”改为过去时“would”或“used to”。“greet to elderly people”应改为“greet elderly people”。建议加入一个具体情境，并用“also”连接两个行为。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I used to greet elderly people whenever I met them. I also helped my parents prepare fruit for our older relatives when they visited us. These were simple ways for me to show respect and kindness.

× Most of the time my parents will teach me how to be polite as a child.

✓ Most of the time, my parents taught me how to be polite when I was a child.

问题描述的是童年时期的经历，因此应使用一般过去时。将 will teach 改为 taught；when I was a child 比 as a child 更清楚地表达“当我还是孩子时”。

× They taught me that I need to great to elder people.

✓ They taught me that I needed to greet elderly people.

greet 是及物动词，后面直接接人，不能使用 to，因此不能说 greet to people。另外，great 是形容词，表示“很棒的”，这里应改为动词 greet，表示“问候”。由于主句 taught 使用过去时，间接引语中可将 need 改为 needed。

× They taught me that I need to great to elder people.

✓ They taught me that I needed to greet elderly people.

elder 通常用于表示家庭或群体中的“年长者”，这里描述年长的人时，使用 elderly people 更自然、更准确。

× Yes, of course. If you've been polite, everyone will respect you and you also can show the respect to others.

✓ Yes, of course. If you are polite, everyone will respect you, and you can also show respect for others.

这里表达的是礼貌的重要性这一普遍事实，所以 if 从句应使用一般现在时 you are polite，而不是现在完成时 you've been polite。情态动词 can 后面接动词原形，also 通常放在 can 后、主要动词前。

× Yes, of course. If you've been polite, everyone will respect you and you also can show the respect to others.

✓ Yes, of course. If you are polite, everyone will respect you, and you can also show respect for others.

respect 在这里表示一般意义上的“尊重”，是不可数抽象名词，前面通常不加定冠词 the。因此应说 show respect，而不是 show the respect。

× Yes, of course. If you've been polite, everyone will respect you and you also can show the respect to others.

✓ Yes, of course. If you are polite, everyone will respect you, and you can also show respect for others.

表示“对某人表示尊重”时，常用固定搭配 show respect for somebody，而不是 show respect to somebody。

× If you meet elder people you need to grate to them and if you need help Init use polite words.

✓ If you meet elderly people, you need to greet them, and if you need help, use polite words.

greet 是及物动词，直接接宾语，不能说 greet to them，应改为 greet them。原句中的 grate 是拼写错误，应改为 greet；Init 应根据语境改为 if，构成正确的条件句。

× If you meet elder people you need to grate to them and if you need help Init use polite words.

✓ If you meet elderly people, you need to greet them, and if you need help, use polite words.

elderly people 是表示“老年人”的更自然表达。elder people 虽然有时可以理解，但在这里不如 elderly people 合适。

× Well most of the time I will greet to elderly people when I meet them and I will prepare fruit for them.

✓ Well, most of the time, I greeted elderly people when I met them, and I prepared fruit for them.

问题询问的是你小时候做了什么，因此整句应使用一般过去时。将 will greet 和 will prepare 改为 greeted 和 prepared，同时 when 从句中的 meet 也应改为 met。

× Well most of the time I will greet to elderly people when I meet them and I will prepare fruit for them.

✓ Well, most of the time, I greeted elderly people when I met them, and I prepared fruit for them.

greet 是及物动词，后面直接接 elderly people，不需要介词 to。应说 greet elderly people，而不是 greet to elderly people。