Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Yanıtınız doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başlamıyor ve cümlenin sonunda tamamlanmamış kalıyor. “I learned to be polite from my parents” gibi net bir giriş yapmalısınız. “from anyone perspective”, “say thank you against a favor” ve “a memory belonging in my childhood” ifadeleri doğal değil; bunların yerine “from my perspective”, “say thank you for a favor” ve “I have a childhood memory” kullanın. Annenizin arkadaşının evindeki anıyı tamamlayarak, bu olayın size ne öğrettiğini belirtin. Ayrıca uzun cümleleri iki veya üç kısa cümleye bölün.

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They always said “thank you” when someone helped them and apologized whenever they made a mistake. I also have a childhood memory of visiting one of my mother’s friends. My mother greeted her warmly and thanked her for the coffee, which showed me how important good manners are.

Sugestão: Ana fikriniz açık ve trafik örneği uygun; ancak yanıt yine tamamlanmamış. “the most pivotal feature anyone can have” bu bağlamda fazla iddialı ve doğal değil; “one of the most important qualities” daha uygun olur. “what is going on the other people's live” yerine “what other people are going through” kullanın. Trafik örneğinde “honk the horn continuously” ve “react rudely” ifadelerini tercih edin. Sonuç cümlenizi tamamlayarak kibarlığın çatışmaları azaltmasına nasıl yardımcı olduğunu açıklayın.

Exemplo: Yes, I think politeness is one of the most important qualities a person can have. We all come from different backgrounds, so we cannot always know what other people are going through. Therefore, being rude usually makes problems worse. For example, if someone cut me off in traffic, I would not honk continuously or react rudely; I would simply stay calm and carry on.

Sugestão: “Regardless of the situation” şeklindeki doğrudan cevabınız iyi; fakat “angry is a bad advisor” yerine doğal deyim olan “anger is a bad adviser” kullanılmalı. “my teacher or my boss yelled at him” ve “scolded at me” ifadelerinde zamir ve fiil hataları var; “yelled at me” ve “scolded me” deyin. “In front of everyone's eyes” yerine “in front of everyone” kullanın. Örneği “I would try to calm the situation” şeklinde tamamlayın ve işimi kaybetme ihtimalini ana neden değil, olası bir sonuç olarak belirtin.

Exemplo: We should be polite in almost every situation, especially when we disagree with someone. In my opinion, anger is a bad adviser, so it rarely helps us solve problems. For example, if my teacher or boss scolded me in front of everyone, I would not shout back. Instead, I would remain calm and try to resolve the situation respectfully, because reacting angrily could damage our relationship or even affect my job.

Sugestão: Yanıtınız soruya cevap veriyor ve somut bir örnek içeriyor; ancak “I didn't do anything in particular” ifadesi verdiğiniz örnekle çelişiyor. “intrinsic sense” doğru olsa da Part 1 için biraz yapay; “I naturally understood” daha akıcıdır. “used to need to help him” yanlış yapı; “I would help them” veya “I used to help them” kullanın. “him” yerine cinsiyet belirtmeyen “them” tercih edin ve aynı fikri tekrarlayan son cümleleri birleştirin.

Exemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by helping people whenever I could. I naturally understood that helping others was the right thing to do. For example, if I saw someone struggling with heavy bags, I would offer to carry some of them. They usually appreciated my help, and I felt happy that I had made their task easier.

× learned to be polite from my parents

✓ I learned to be polite from my parents.

The sentence is missing its subject. In English, a complete sentence normally requires an explicit subject before the verb. Begin the answer with I learned.

× from anyone perspective

✓ from anyone's perspective

The noun perspective belongs to anyone, so the possessive form anyone's is required. Use an apostrophe plus s to show possession.

× they always said thank you against a favor done by anyone

✓ they always said thank you for a favor done by anyone

The preposition against is incorrect in this context. We say say thank you for something when expressing gratitude.

× I have a memory belonging in my childhood

✓ I have a memory from my childhood

The preposition in is not suitable when referring to the time period in which a memory occurred. Use from my childhood to indicate its origin.

× my mother took me her friend's home

✓ my mother took me to her friend's home

The verb take requires the preposition to before a destination. The correct structure is take someone to a place.

× after we arrived she made some coffee for my

✓ After we arrived, she made some coffee for me.

The phrase for my is incomplete because my must be followed by a noun. Use the object pronoun me when the meaning is that the coffee was made for you.

× what is going on the other people in the other people's live in public

✓ what is going on with other people in other people's lives in public

The phrase what is going on requires with before a person or group. The preposition in is needed before other people's lives to describe events occurring in their lives.

× other people's live

✓ other people's lives

The possessive phrase other people's refers to more than one person, and the noun life must therefore be pluralized as lives. Note that lives is the irregular plural of life.

× angry is a bad advisor

✓ anger is a bad advisor

Angry is an adjective, but the subject of this sentence must be a noun. Use anger to name the emotion. A more natural expression is Anger is a bad adviser.

× if my teacher or my boss yelled at him or even scolded at me

✓ if my teacher or my boss yelled at me or even scolded me

The speaker is the person receiving the criticism, so the object pronoun must be me, not him. The phrase scold someone does not take at, so use scolded me.

× if my teacher or my boss yelled at him or even scolded at me

✓ if my teacher or my boss yelled at me or even scolded me

Yell at someone correctly takes the preposition at, but scold someone does not. Therefore, say yelled at me but scolded me.

× Instead, if I

✓ Instead, if I had to respond, I would remain calm.

This is an incomplete conditional clause because it does not contain a main clause or a complete verb phrase. A conditional beginning with if must be completed with a result clause, such as I would remain calm.