Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “I learned mainly from my parents.” Avoid unnatural phrases like “thanks to my parents teaching,” “in my childhood,” and “agree to America.” You probably mean “greet our neighbors,” not “agree to America.” Use the past tense consistently and give one specific example. A linking word such as “For example” will make the answer clearer. Keep the response to two or three fluent sentences.

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, whenever we met our neighbors, especially elderly people, my parents reminded me to greet them and speak respectfully. As a result, greeting people became a natural habit for me.

Sugestão: State your opinion directly and explain it with a clear reason. Replace “cause connection between each other is necessary in the routines” with a natural expression such as “because it helps people communicate effectively in daily life.” Avoid repetition of “quite” and clarify the result: politeness can make conversations more comfortable and encourage mutual respect. Use “being polite” rather than “be polite” as the subject.

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people communicate comfortably in daily life. When we show respect, others are more likely to respond positively and continue the conversation. It also helps prevent unnecessary misunderstandings.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly by saying that politeness is appropriate in all situations, then mention a few specific occasions. The phrases “keep politeness,” “the merits we have to do,” and “be implied in another case” are unnatural and make the meaning difficult to follow. Avoid repeating “I don’t think.” Use a clear structure such as “In my opinion… For example… In particular…”

Exemplo: In my opinion, we should be polite in almost every situation, especially when speaking to strangers, teachers, colleagues, or elderly people. For example, we should use respectful language when asking for help or disagreeing with someone. Politeness is important both in formal situations and in everyday conversations.

Sugestão: Respond in the past tense because the question asks about childhood. Replace “the most habit” with “the most common way” and “to calling” with “was to call” or “was to greet.” The phrase “some great poor grandmas” is unclear; you likely mean “elderly women” or “older people.” Avoid repeating “greet” too many times and give one concise example with a result.

Exemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting people whenever I saw them. For instance, if I met elderly neighbors in the garden, I would smile, say hello, and ask how they were. My parents taught me never to ignore people who were older than me.

× Thanks to my parents teaching when I was in my childhood.

✓ Thanks to my parents' teaching when I was a child.

The phrase in my childhood is grammatically possible but unnatural in this context. Use when I was a child to describe the period of your life more naturally. The possessive form parents' is used because the teaching belonged to or was provided by your parents.

× I still remember back to the primary school time every time when we got out of my our home and meet some neighbors.

✓ I still remember my primary school days, when we left our home and met some neighbors.

The original sentence contains an awkward structure and unnecessary words. Remember my primary school days is more natural than remember back to the primary school time. Use when rather than every time when in this sentence, and avoid the repeated possessive forms my our.

× When we got out of my our home.

✓ When we left our home.

My and our cannot be used together before the same noun. Because the subject is we, use our. The verb leave is also more natural than get out of when referring to leaving a home.

× When we got out of my our home and meet some neighbors.

✓ When we left our home and met some neighbors.

The sentence describes past events, so both coordinated verbs should be in the past tense. The past form of meet is met.

× They told me to agree to America.

✓ They told me to greet them.

The original wording does not form a meaningful sentence in this context. Agree means to have the same opinion, whereas greet means to say hello to someone. After told me, use the structure told + object + to-infinitive: told me to greet them.

× Connection between each other is quite necessary in the routines.

✓ Connections with one another are necessary in daily life.

The subject connections refers to relationships among people in general, so it should be plural. The plural subject connections requires the plural verb are. Use with one another, not between each other, in this expression.

× Connection between each other is quite necessary in the routines.

✓ Connections with one another are necessary in daily life.

The preposition with is appropriate when describing relationships or communication involving people. The phrase in the routines is unnatural here; daily life is the appropriate expression.

× So be polite could sometimes make you and others conversation or the talk more frequent and quite.

✓ So, being polite could sometimes make conversations between you and others more frequent and pleasant.

When an action functions as the subject of a sentence, use the gerund form being. The original phrase you and others conversation is missing a possessive or a preposition. Conversations between you and others is grammatically complete.

× So be polite could sometimes make you and others conversation or the talk more frequent and quite.

✓ So, being polite could sometimes make conversations between you and others more frequent and pleasant.

Quite is an adverb and cannot serve as the adjective describing conversations. Use an adjective such as pleasant. Also, frequent is an adjective that correctly describes how often conversations occur.

× I don't think there should be any limit to the occasion where we need to keep politeness.

✓ I don't think there should be any limit to the occasions when we need to be polite.

The sentence refers to multiple situations, so occasion should be plural: occasions. The expression be polite is more natural than keep politeness.

× I don't think there should be any limit to the occasion where we need to keep politeness.

✓ I don't think there should be any limit to the occasions when we need to be polite.

When refers to time or situations, while where normally refers to a physical place. Since occasions are situations, use when.

× I don't think people who may be polite in a case or be implied in another case.

✓ I don't think people should be polite in one situation but not in another.

The original sentence is incomplete and uses may incorrectly. Should expresses what is advisable or expected. After should, use the base form be, as in should be polite.

× I don't think if I don't think people who may be polite in a case or be implied in another case.

✓ I don't think people should be polite in one situation but not in another.

The sentence repeats I don't think and does not contain a complete main clause after the second occurrence. The corrected version has a clear subject, modal verb, and contrast structure: one situation but not another.

× As I had mentioned as a child, the most habit we could show politeness is to calling people or greeting people every day.

✓ As I mentioned, when I was a child, the most common way we showed politeness was by calling or greeting people every day.

The simple past mentioned is sufficient because you are referring to something you said earlier in the conversation. The past perfect had mentioned is unnecessary here. Use showed and was because the answer describes past childhood behavior.

× The most habit we could show politeness is to calling people or greeting people every day.

✓ The most common way we showed politeness was by calling or greeting people every day.

The structure to calling is incorrect after is. Use either to call or by calling. In the corrected sentence, by is followed by gerunds: calling and greeting.

× The most habit we could show politeness is to calling people or greeting people every day.

✓ The most common way we showed politeness was by calling or greeting people every day.

Habit is not the correct noun for this meaning, and the natural expression is the most common way. Since the subject way is singular, the past form was agrees with it.

× We might, we may want some great poor grandmas in the garden.

✓ We might see some elderly people in the garden.

The original sentence contains two modal constructions unnecessarily placed together and is missing the main verb that expresses what you did. The structure might + base verb is sufficient: might see. Elderly people is a respectful and natural expression.

× We might, we may want some great poor grandmas in the garden.

✓ We might see some elderly people in the garden.

Do not use might and may together before the same verb. Choose one modal verb and follow it with the base form of the verb. Here, might see is the appropriate structure.