Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答的核心意思是父母通过家庭聚餐教你礼貌，但语法和表达问题较多。例如，“my parents teach me”应改为过去时“my parents taught me”，“they talk me”应改为“they told me”，“you have to leaving”应改为“you have to leave”。“wish you have a good diet”不符合语境，可以说“wish everyone a pleasant evening”。最后的“Then use candy”意思不清楚，应删除或说明父母是否用糖果奖励你。建议采用“父母教我什么 + 具体场景 + 学到的礼貌行为”的结构。

Exemplo: My parents taught me to be polite through everyday family gatherings. For example, when we had dinner with relatives, they reminded me to greet everyone and say goodbye before leaving. They also taught me to thank people and wish them a pleasant evening.

Sugestão: 回答观点明确，也提供了大学小组作业的例子，这是较好的内容发展。不过，“being applied”应改为“being polite”，“being kindness”应改为“being kind”或“politeness”，“I have a lot of group work to do”最好使用过去时“I had a lot of group work to do”。“make the progress process”重复且不自然，可以说“help the group work run more smoothly”。建议减少重复和停顿，并用“观点 + 原因 + 具体结果”的结构作答。

Exemplo: Yes, absolutely. Being polite is important because it shows respect and helps people communicate more comfortably. When I was at university, I often worked in groups, and polite communication made it easier for us to share ideas and complete our projects smoothly.

Sugestão: 回答直接表达了“多数场合都应礼貌”的观点，也提到了遇到攻击性行为时的例外，逻辑基本清楚。需要改进语法和搭配：“in most occasions”应为“on most occasions”，“like we talk to other people or first meet someone”应改为“when talking to people or meeting someone for the first time”，“shouldn't keep too polite”应改为“don't have to be overly polite”。建议使用“通常情况 + 例外情况”的清晰连接方式，例如“Generally speaking”和“However”。

Exemplo: Generally speaking, we should be polite when talking to others, especially when meeting someone for the first time or speaking to older people. However, if someone is rude or aggressive, we should remain calm and respectful without allowing them to take advantage of us. In that situation, being firm is more appropriate than being overly polite.

Sugestão: 回答提到了打招呼和倾听这两个相关行为，但答案最后没有完整结束，且时态和搭配问题明显。“where I have a conversation”应为“when I had a conversation”，“begin with the timing”表达不清，可以说“start with a warm greeting”，“looking in their face”应改为“look at them”或“make eye contact”。由于问题询问的是童年经历，建议统一使用过去时，并补充结束谈话时说“thank you”或“goodbye”，形成完整答案。

Exemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting people warmly and making eye contact when they spoke to me. I tried not to interrupt them because I wanted to show that I was listening carefully. At the end of a conversation, I usually said thank you and goodbye.

× Well, that's my parents teach me.

✓ Well, that's what my parents taught me.

这里是在描述童年时期父母如何教你，所以应使用一般过去时。teach 的过去式是 taught。句子中加入 what 后，结构也更完整。

× When we have a dinner with our relatives

✓ When we have dinner with our relatives

表示“吃饭”时，have dinner 是固定搭配，dinner 前通常不使用冠词 a。

× Then they talk me.

✓ Then they told me.

你是在讲童年发生的事情，所以应使用过去时。tell 的过去式是 told。

× You have to say hello and to each relative.

✓ You have to say hello to each relative.

say hello to somebody 是固定搭配，表示“向某人问好”。这里不需要在 hello 后面额外使用 and。

× After leaving, you have to leaving the table.

✓ After leaving the table, you have to say that you are full.

have to 后面必须接动词原形，因此不能使用 leaving。这里可以直接用 After leaving the table，然后接完整的主句。

× Being applied is a way to show respect to other people.

✓ Being polite is a way to show respect to other people.

这里想表达“礼貌”，应使用形容词 polite。applied 通常表示“被应用的”，不符合句意。

× Like I was a university student and I have a lot of group work to do

✓ When I was a university student, I had a lot of group work to do.

句子描述的是大学时期的经历，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。使用 When 也能使时间关系更加清晰。

× So being kindness, being polite can help to make the progress process of the group work more smoothly.

✓ So being kind and polite can help the group work progress more smoothly.

kindness 是名词，不能和 being 连用来表示“友善的”；这里应使用形容词 kind。另外，progress 可作动词，表示“进展”，不需要使用不自然的 progress process。

× I think in most occasions we should be polite.

✓ I think on most occasions we should be polite.

表示“在大多数场合”时，固定搭配是 on most occasions，而不是 in most occasions。

× Like we talk to other people or first meet someone.

✓ For example, when we talk to other people or meet someone for the first time, we should be polite.

原句缺少清晰的主句结构，且 first meet someone 的表达不完整。可以使用 when 引导时间状语从句，并补充主句。

× But if there is a in some situation that people talk to you, don't respect you and maybe be aggressive

✓ But if people talk to you disrespectfully, do not respect you, or are aggressive, I don't think we should be too polite to them.

there is a in some situation 结构错误，而且后面的 people 已经是明确主语，因此不需要使用 there be 句型。直接用 people 作主语，句子会更加清楚。

× People talk to you, don't respect you and maybe be aggressive.

✓ People talk to you disrespectfully, do not respect you, or are aggressive.

并列谓语需要保持结构一致。talk、do not respect 和 are aggressive 都应围绕同一个主语 people 组织；are aggressive 也需要明确的系动词 are。

× We shouldn't keep too polite to them.

✓ We shouldn't be too polite to them.

polite 是形容词，不能直接跟在 keep 后面表达“保持礼貌”。这里应使用系动词 be，构成 be polite。

× Where I have a conversation with other people, I will first begin with the timing and the warmly greeting.

✓ When I had a conversation with other people, I would begin with a warm greeting.

问题要求描述你小时候做过的事情，因此应使用过去时。have 改为 had，will 改为 would。When 比 where 更适合表示“当……时”。

× I will first begin with the timing and the warmly greeting.

✓ I would begin with a warm greeting.

greeting 是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词 a。这里表示“温暖的问候”，应使用形容词 warm，而不是副词 warmly。

× The warmly greeting

✓ A warm greeting

修饰名词 greeting 时需要使用形容词 warm；warmly 是副词，不能直接修饰名词。

× I will see looking in their face to show that I respect them and I am listening.

✓ I would look at their faces to show that I respected them and was listening.

这里不需要使用 see looking 的结构。look at 表示“看着”，应使用 look at。句子描述过去的行为，因此 respect 和 am listening 也分别改为过去形式 respected 和 was listening。

× Looking in their face

✓ Looking at their faces

表示“看着某人的脸”时，固定搭配是 look at，而不是 look in。their faces 使用复数更自然，因为通常是看对方的脸。

× And after the conversation.

✓ After the conversation, I said goodbye.

原句只有时间短语，没有主语和谓语，因此不是完整句子。需要补充主语 I 和谓语 said，才能构成完整表达。