Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答基本切题，也提到了母亲的影响，但存在明显的重复和语法问题，例如“because of because”“for for”和“adequately is really important”。“adequately”在这里使用不当，应改为“politeness”或“it”。建议先直接说明“我主要是从母亲那里学会礼貌的”，再补充具体行为，如打招呼、说谢谢，以及学习礼貌的原因。

Exemplo: I mainly learned to be polite from my mother. She taught me to greet people, say “please” and “thank you,” and show respect to everyone, including strangers. She believed that politeness was an important quality to develop from a young age.

Sugestão: 回答有明确观点，也尝试解释原因，但“because”重复，“symbol”应改为动词“reflect”或“show”，“their manners let taught by them their parents”结构不完整且难以理解。建议使用简单、准确的表达，例如“礼貌能体现一个人的性格和家庭教育”，并补充一个具体结果，如更容易给别人留下好印象。

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it reflects a person’s character and upbringing. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” can make other people feel respected and help us build better relationships.

Sugestão: 回答直接，观点清楚，并提供了求职面试和婚礼两个例子，内容较完整。不过“the occasion where”不自然，应改为“occasions when”，“job interviewing”应改为“job interviews”，“wedding”应使用复数“weddings”。此外，“it symbolizes one's manners”表达不准确，可以说“these occasions require good manners”。

Exemplo: I think we should be polite on every occasion, but it is especially important during job interviews, weddings, and other formal events. In these situations, polite behavior shows respect and creates a positive impression. It can also reflect a person’s upbringing.

Sugestão: 回答提到了说“thank you”和向成年人问候，能够回答问题，但句子在“and to”处中断，导致意思不完整。建议使用过去时并采用清晰结构：先说明具体行为，再说明这些行为带来的效果。可以说“我会向长辈问好、说谢谢，并在得到帮助时表达感激”。

Exemplo: As a child, I usually greeted adults politely and said “please” and “thank you” whenever someone helped me. I also listened carefully when they were speaking. My parents taught me to behave this way because it showed respect and left a good impression.

× When I was a child my mum told me how to be polite to everyone, even the people I am not familiar with because of because adequately is really important for for us to learn as a child.

✓ When I was a child, my mum told me how to be polite to everyone, even the people I was not familiar with, because being polite was really important for us to learn as children.

主句使用过去时“was”，描述童年时期的情况时，从句中的“am”和“is”也应改为过去时“was”。此外，“because of because”重复，应该只保留“because”。“being polite”比“adequately”更符合句意。

× When I was a child my mum told me how to be polite to everyone, even the people I am not familiar with because of because adequately is really important for for us to learn as a child.

✓ When I was a child, my mum told me how to be polite to everyone, even the people I was not familiar with, because being polite was really important for us to learn as children.

“us”指“我们”，因此后面的“child”应使用复数“children”。建议特别注意“we/us/they”等复数主语后面相关名词的单复数形式。

× When I was a child my mum told me how to be polite to everyone, even the people I am not familiar with because of because adequately is really important for for us to learn as a child.

✓ When I was a child, my mum told me how to be polite to everyone, even the people I was not familiar with, because being polite was really important for us to learn as children.

原句中“because of because”重复使用连接词，“for for”也重复，导致句子结构混乱。表达原因时使用一个“because”即可，并删除重复的介词。

× I think it's quite important because because politeness can symbol a person's person's heart and their their manners let taught by them their parents.

✓ I think it's quite important because politeness can symbolize a person's character, and their manners are taught by their parents.

情态动词“can”后面必须接动词原形。这里应使用“symbolize”，而不是名词“symbol”。同时，句中的重复词“because because”和“person's person's”应删除。

× I think it's quite important because because politeness can symbol a person's person's heart and their their manners let taught by them their parents.

✓ I think it's quite important because politeness can symbolize a person's character, and their manners are taught by their parents.

“manners”是被父母教授的，所以需要使用被动语态“are taught”。正确结构是“主语 + be动词 + 过去分词”，即“their manners are taught by their parents”。

× I think we should be polite on every occasion, especially the occasion where many adults are present such as job interviewing and wedding because I think it symbolizes one's manners and their parents' education.

✓ I think we should be polite on every occasion, especially on occasions when many adults are present, such as job interviews and weddings, because I think this reflects a person's manners and their parents' education.

“such as”后面列举了多个场合，因此“job interviewing”和“wedding”应改为可数名词复数“job interviews”和“weddings”。使用复数可以表示这类场合，而不是某一次具体活动。

× I think we should be polite on every occasion, especially the occasion where many adults are present such as job interviewing and wedding because I think it symbolizes one's manners and their parents' education.

✓ I think we should be polite on every occasion, especially on occasions when many adults are present, such as job interviews and weddings, because I think this reflects a person's manners and their parents' education.

表示在某个场合时，应使用介词“on”，所以应说“especially on occasions”。建议记住固定搭配“on an occasion”和“on special occasions”。

× I usually showed my politeness by saying thank you and some greetings to adults to show my manners let taught by my parents because I think it could leave a good impression and to

✓ I usually showed my politeness by saying thank you and greeting adults to show the manners taught by my parents because I thought they could leave a good impression.

“manners”是“被父母教导的”，因此应使用被动结构“the manners taught by my parents”。“taught”是过去分词，前面可以省略“were”，构成后置修饰语。

× I usually showed my politeness by saying thank you and some greetings to adults to show my manners let taught by my parents because I think it could leave a good impression and to

✓ I usually showed my politeness by saying thank you and greeting adults to show the manners taught by my parents because I thought they could leave a good impression.

问题询问的是童年时做过什么，因此整段叙述应保持过去时。“I think”应改为“I thought”，与前面的“I usually showed”保持时态一致。

× I usually showed my politeness by saying thank you and some greetings to adults to show my manners let taught by my parents because I think it could leave a good impression and to

✓ I usually showed my politeness by saying thank you and greeting adults to show the manners taught by my parents because I thought they could leave a good impression.

原句最后的“and to”没有连接完整的成分，句子没有结束，属于结构不完整。回答时应删除多余的“and to”，并在完整意思结束后结束句子。