Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer directly addresses the question and includes a clear reason: your parents taught you good manners. However, there are several grammatical and fluency problems, such as “a good manner,” “I followed I still follow,” and “the manners.” Avoid repeating yourself and use a clearer structure: explain who taught you, give an example, and describe the result. Use the plural phrase “good manners” and linking words such as “because” and “as a result.”

Exemplo: I learned good manners from my parents when I was a child. They taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and to treat other people respectfully. They were quite strict about this, but as a result, I still use these manners today.

Sugestão: You give a relevant opinion and a useful reason, but the answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations and repetitions, including “word small word” and “but but.” The final sentence does not express a complete idea, so you should finish by explaining how politeness affects first impressions or relationships. Use one specific example and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Being polite is very important because it makes people feel respected and comfortable. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” may seem like small things, but they can create a positive first impression when meeting someone for the first time.

Sugestão: Your main idea is relevant, but “when we force to meet others” is incorrect and unclear; you could say “whenever we meet other people” or mention specific occasions such as formal meetings, speaking to older people, or asking for help. The phrase “show and say behavior for good manners” is unnatural. Organize the answer with a direct response, one or two occasions, and a result, using linking words such as “especially” and “because.”

Exemplo: We should be polite whenever we meet or communicate with other people, especially in formal situations or when speaking to older people. We should use polite language when asking for help or making a request. This shows respect and helps us build positive relationships.

Sugestão: You answer the question directly and give specific examples, which is effective. However, “poetness” should be “politeness,” and “used to show my politeness saying” should be “used to show my politeness by saying.” Keep the tense consistent by using “it made people” rather than “it makes people,” and divide the long sentence into two shorter sentences for greater clarity.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I showed my politeness by saying “please” and “thank you” to my parents, teachers, and friends. I also tried to listen carefully when other people were speaking. These habits gave people a good impression of me and helped me build positive relationships.

× When I was young, I learned a good manner from my parents.

✓ When I was young, I learned good manners from my parents.

Manners is normally used as a plural noun when referring to polite behavior in general. The phrase a good manner refers to one specific behavior, so good manners is more appropriate here.

× So they were quite strict about manners, but I followed I still follow the manners now so it was very helpful.

✓ They were quite strict about manners, but I still follow those manners now, so their guidance has been very helpful.

The sentence incorrectly combines followed and still follow. Use the present tense still follow because the habit continues now. Has been is used because the guidance started in the past and remains helpful in the present.

× So they were quite strict about manners, but I followed I still follow the manners now so it was very helpful.

✓ They were quite strict about manners, but I still follow those manners now, so their guidance has been very helpful.

The original sentence contains two verb phrases joined incorrectly: followed I still follow. It also needs clearer clause organization and punctuation. Separating the ideas with proper conjunctions makes the sentence easier to understand.

× I think being polite is very important saying please might seem a little word small word, but but it makes people feel respected.

✓ I think being polite is very important. Saying please might seem like a small thing, but it makes people feel respected.

The original sentence joins two complete ideas without proper punctuation or a conjunction. Saying please also needs a clearer noun phrase: a small thing. The repeated words but but and small word should be removed.

× I think being polite is very important saying please might seem a little word small word, but but it makes people feel respected.

✓ I think being polite is very important. Saying please might seem like a small thing, but it makes people feel respected.

Singular countable nouns such as thing usually need an article. The phrase a small thing is grammatically complete and natural.

× So when I met first people for first impression, I could

✓ So, when I first meet people, I can make a good first impression.

This answer describes a general situation, so the present tense is needed: meet and can. The past-tense forms met and could do not fit the general meaning.

× So when I met first people for first impression, I could

✓ So, when I first meet people, I can make a good first impression.

The adverb first should be placed before the main verb meet. The phrase meet first people is not the correct word order.

× So when I met first people for first impression, I could

✓ So, when I first meet people, I can make a good first impression.

First impression is a singular countable noun phrase, so it needs the article a. The natural expression is make a good first impression.

× We should be polite when we force to meet others. To build relationship, we have to show and say behavior for good manners to others it makes others feel respected and improve our impression.

✓ We should be polite when we first meet others. To build relationships, we have to show good manners and behave politely toward others. This makes them feel respected and improves our impression.

The original answer contains incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses. Adding clear subjects and verbs, such as we have to show and this makes, creates complete sentences. The phrase force to meet is also replaced with the grammatically appropriate phrase first meet.

× To build relationship, we have to show and say behavior for good manners to others it makes others feel respected and improve our impression.

✓ To build relationships, we have to show good manners and behave politely toward others. This makes them feel respected and improves our impression.

Relationship should be plural because the speaker is referring to relationships in general. The plural form relationships is therefore more suitable in this context.

× To build relationship, we have to show and say behavior for good manners to others it makes others feel respected and improve our impression.

✓ To build relationships, we have to show good manners and behave politely toward others. This makes them feel respected and improves our impression.

The correct preposition is toward when describing polite behavior directed at other people. The original phrase for good manners to others is not grammatically appropriate.

× To build relationship, we have to show and say behavior for good manners to others it makes others feel respected and improve our impression.

✓ To build relationships, we have to show good manners and behave politely toward others. This makes them feel respected and improves our impression.

The subject this is singular, so both verbs must take singular forms: makes and improves. The original sentence used improve after the singular subject it or this.

× When I was a child I used to show my poetness saying please or thank you to others so it makes people get a good impression on me and build a good relationship.

✓ When I was a child, I used to show my politeness by saying please or thank you to others. This gave people a good impression of me and helped me build good relationships.

After the preposition by, use the -ing form saying. The phrase by saying explains how the speaker showed politeness. The spelling poetness is also corrected to the noun politeness.

× When I was a child I used to show my poetness saying please or thank you to others so it makes people get a good impression on me and build a good relationship.

✓ When I was a child, I used to show my politeness by saying please or thank you to others. This gave people a good impression of me and helped me build good relationships.

The correct expression is give someone a good impression of me, not get a good impression on me. Of is the appropriate preposition when describing the person who creates the impression.

× When I was a child I used to show my poetness saying please or thank you to others so it makes people get a good impression on me and build a good relationship.

✓ When I was a child, I used to show my politeness by saying please or thank you to others. This gave people a good impression of me and helped me build good relationships.

The answer describes repeated behavior in the past, so the results should also be expressed in the past tense: gave and helped. The present-tense form makes does not fit this past-time context.