Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 「plateness」は誤った発音・表記なので、正しくは “politeness” です。また、“grade them as uncle or aunt” は不自然で、年上の人を「おじさん・おばさん」と呼ぶという意味なら “address them as Uncle or Aunt” が適切です。最初に母親から礼儀を学んだことを明確に述べ、その後に具体例と結果をつなげると、より自然で効果的になります。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my mother. She taught me basic manners, such as greeting adults properly and saying goodbye when I left. For example, I had to address her colleagues as Uncle or Aunt, which taught me to respect older people and consider their feelings.

Sugestão: “plighten” は誤りで、名詞は “politeness”、形容詞は “polite” です。回答の主張は明確ですが、“I also hold myself to a high standard” はこの質問への理由としてやや間接的です。礼儀が第一印象や人間関係に与える影響を、具体的な場面や結果とともに説明すると、内容がさらに説得力を持ちます。

Exemplo: Yes, politeness is very important because it creates a positive first impression. When people speak respectfully and show consideration, others are more likely to trust and cooperate with them. On the other hand, even a friendly person can leave a bad impression if they have poor manners.

Sugestão: “plateness” は “politeness” に直してください。内容と構成は良く、最初に「常に礼儀正しくあるべき」と直接答え、その後に対象者と具体例を示せています。“whether we talk to young people, the elderly or strangers” は自然ですが、“whether we are talking to...” とすると会話の流れにより合います。最後の例に、なぜその行動が重要なのかを短く加えるとさらに具体的です。

Exemplo: I think we should be polite at all times, not just on formal occasions. This is especially important when we speak to older people, strangers, or anyone who may need extra consideration. For instance, we should offer our seats to elderly passengers and keep our voices down in public places so that we do not disturb others.

Sugestão: “I had tidy and collect” は文法的に誤りです。この文脈では “I would tidy up and collect...” または “I made sure to tidy up and collect...” が自然です。また、食べ残しを片付けるという内容は理解できますが、通常は “clear my dishes” や “keep the table tidy” の方が自然です。子どもの頃の習慣であることを過去形または “would” で一貫して示し、その行動が店員の負担を減らしたという結果につなげてください。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I tried to be considerate of other people. For example, after eating at a restaurant, I would clear my dishes and keep the table tidy before leaving. I did this because I did not want to create extra work for the waiters.

× While I was little, I always tried to be considerate of others. For example, after eating at restaurants, I had tidy and collect my leftovers neatly before waiters came over, so they didn't have extra work.

✓ While I was little, I always tried to be considerate of others. For example, after eating at restaurants, I had to tidy and collect my leftovers neatly before the waiters came over, so they didn't have extra work.

The phrase “had tidy and collect” is grammatically incomplete. When “had” expresses obligation, it must be followed by “to” and the base form of the verb: “had to tidy and collect.” The definite article “the” is also appropriate before “waiters” because the sentence refers to the specific waiters serving the speaker at the restaurants.