Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly in the past tense, since you are describing childhood. Correct “always teach” to “always taught,” “make me polite” to “encouraged me to be polite,” and “insisting me” to “insisting that I speak” or “by encouraging me to speak.” Avoid repeating the idea of speaking politely; add one specific example to make the answer more effective.

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and discouraged me from using rude language. For example, whenever I asked for something, they reminded me to ask politely instead of giving orders.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion and organize your reasons with linking words such as “because” and “as a result.” The phrases “means too means,” “everyone supports,” and “develop your career” are unclear or grammatically inaccurate. Use “people appreciate polite individuals” and “it can help us build good relationships and succeed professionally.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is extremely important because it shows respect for other people. In addition, polite behavior helps us build strong relationships at school and at work. As a result, people are more likely to trust us and cooperate with us.

Sugestão: Give specific occasions instead of making a general statement. Mention situations such as meeting elderly people, speaking to teachers, dealing with customers, or asking for help. Correct “treated really good” to “treated very well,” and avoid the incomplete and repetitive ending “politeness is the best.”

Exemplo: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially in formal situations. For example, we should use respectful language when speaking to teachers, elderly people, or customers. We should also remain polite when we disagree with someone because this helps prevent unnecessary arguments.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating “I always used to” and use more natural expressions. “Loved junior ones” is unclear; say “treated younger children kindly” instead. Organize the answer with a topic sentence and linking words, and give one concrete example of how you behaved politely.

Exemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by speaking respectfully to elderly people and treating younger children kindly. I also tried to be honest with my parents, even when I had made a mistake. For example, I always greeted my grandparents and offered to help them with small tasks.

× As a child, my parents always teach me to be polite. They didn't allow me to speak rude words and they always make me polite by insisting me to talk nicely.

✓ As a child, my parents always taught me to be polite. They didn't allow me to speak rude words, and they always made me polite by insisting that I talk nicely.

Because the question asks about childhood, the past tense is needed: teach becomes taught and make becomes made. The verb insist is followed by that + subject + base verb or by on + -ing, so insisting me to talk is incorrect. Use insisting that I talk or insisting on my talking.

× Yes being polite means too means as everyone supports and everyone like a polite person so being polite helps us to develop your career and also be a good person in future.

✓ Yes, being polite is very important because everyone supports it, and everyone likes a polite person. Therefore, being polite helps us develop our careers and become good people in the future.

The original sentence contains repeated and incorrectly connected clauses, so it needs clearer sentence structure. Everyone is singular, so the verb must be likes, not like. The pronoun your does not agree with us; it should be our. The phrase in the future requires the definite article the. The verbs develop and become should also have the same structure after helps us.

× Politeness is the most crucial factor in people's life as polite people are easily accepted and they are treated really good in community. So politeness is the best

✓ Politeness is one of the most crucial factors in people's lives because polite people are easily accepted and treated really well in the community. Therefore, politeness is one of the best qualities.

The plural noun lives is needed because the sentence refers to people's lives in general. Well is an adverb and must modify the verb treated; good is an adjective. The noun community needs the article the in this context. The phrase politeness is the best is incomplete in meaning, so a noun should follow the superlative: one of the best qualities. Using one of the most crucial factors also avoids incorrectly identifying politeness as the single most crucial factor.

× As when I was a child I always used to I always used to talk nicely to elderly people and always loved junior ones and also I didn't lie to my parents.

✓ When I was a child, I always used to talk nicely to elderly people, love younger people, and not lie to my parents.

As when is an incorrect combination of conjunctions; use When at the beginning of this time clause. The phrase I always used to is unnecessarily repeated, so it should appear only once. After used to, the coordinated verbs should have a parallel base form: talk, love, and not lie.