Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is difficult to understand because of inaccurate word choices and incomplete sentences, especially “followed medicine to my parents.” Answer the question directly by saying that you learned politeness from your parents, then explain how they taught you. Use past tense consistently because you are describing your childhood, and include one specific example. Avoid stopping before completing your final idea.

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me to listen carefully, respond respectfully, and follow their instructions. For example, when they asked me to help with household chores, I did it without arguing and said thank you afterwards. Over time, I understood why showing respect was important.

Sugestão: You give a clear opinion at the beginning, but the rest of the answer is unclear and contains incorrect vocabulary and grammar. Use “an important ability” or, more naturally, “an important quality,” rather than “one of the most needed ability.” Explain one or two specific benefits, such as building trust or avoiding conflict, and connect your ideas with “because” or “as a result.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people communicate respectfully. When we are polite, others are more willing to listen to us and cooperate with us. It also helps prevent unnecessary arguments, especially at school or in the workplace.

Sugestão: You communicate a relevant idea about being polite when making mistakes, but the answer does not fully address the broader question about occasions. Use the correct phrase “make a mistake,” and say “listen to other people’s advice.” Mention several occasions, such as meeting elders, speaking to strangers, apologising, or asking for help. Avoid repetition such as “why why” and “again and again.”

Exemplo: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially when meeting someone for the first time or speaking to older people. We should also be polite when asking for help or when we make a mistake. In that situation, we should apologise, listen to other people’s advice, and try not to repeat the mistake.

Sugestão: Your answer includes a relevant example, but “said hello to everything” is unnatural; say “greeted people” instead. Use the past tense consistently: “followed” rather than “follow.” You could improve the answer by mentioning other polite habits, such as saying “please” and “thank you,” listening to adults, or helping family members. Remove repeated words such as “Then Then.”

Exemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting people whenever I met them because my parents taught me to do so. I also said “please” and “thank you” and listened carefully when adults were speaking. At home, I tried to help my parents with small tasks to show my respect and kindness.

× First, I followed medicine to my parents.

✓ First, I followed my parents' advice.

The original sentence does not have a grammatically appropriate structure. Follow is normally followed directly by the thing or person being followed, so my parents' advice is the correct object here.

× If he asked me to do something, first I definitely do it.

✓ If they asked me to do something, I definitely did it.

The answer describes childhood behavior in the past, so do must be changed to the past-tense form did.

× If he asked me to do something, first I definitely do it.

✓ If they asked me to do something, I definitely did it.

The pronoun should agree with the plural noun parents. Therefore, they is more appropriate than he.

× Then I start to think why it is needed and why he asked me.

✓ Then I started to think about why it was needed and why they had asked me.

The answer is about past experiences, so start should be started. The past forms was and had asked also make the sequence of past events clearer.

× Then I start to think why it is needed, why he asked me, which is the most.

✓ Then I started to think about why it was needed and why they had asked me, and I considered which reason was the most important.

Which is the most is an incomplete clause because it does not specify what was being compared. The correction completes the comparison and connects the ideas with a conjunction.

× Yes, it is one of the most needed ability to humour, I think.

✓ Yes, I think it is one of the most important abilities.

After one of the most, the noun must be plural, so ability must be abilities. Important is also the natural adjective for describing a valuable ability.

× If we are polite supervisors or parents reading to teach well, but if we clean my ideas they want to do that.

✓ If we are polite, supervisors or parents can teach us well, and if we clarify our ideas, they will understand what we want to do.

The original sentence contains incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses. Each clause needs a clear subject and verb, and the ideas should be joined with a suitable conjunction.

× Sometimes we mistake.

✓ Sometimes we make mistakes.

The verb mistake is not normally used this way in English. The standard grammatical expression is make mistakes, with the plural noun mistakes for general situations.

× So if we mistake we should be polite to listen others' advice.

✓ So, if we make a mistake, we should be polite and listen to others' advice.

The conditional clause needs the natural structure make a mistake. The two actions should be connected with and so that the sentence has a complete and clear structure.

× We should be polite to listen others' advice.

✓ We should be polite and listen to others' advice.

Listen is followed by the preposition to when it has an object. Therefore, listen others' advice must be changed to listen to others' advice.

× Then learn why why we missed and then we have to try not to do it again and again.

✓ Then we should learn why we made the mistake and try not to make it again.

The word why is repeated accidentally, and the clause needs a clear subject. The correction removes the repetition and uses a concise, complete structure.

× Then Then I follow others' ideas and do things to show my kindness when I was a child.

✓ Then I followed others' ideas and did things to show my kindness when I was a child.

Because the sentence refers to a period in the past, follow and do must be changed to their past-tense forms followed and did.