Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and use more natural expressions. “Say to great people” is unclear; say “greet older people respectfully” or “speak politely to adults.” Also, use “my parents taught me” instead of “my parents told me,” and connect your ideas more smoothly with “although” or “over time.”

Exemplo: My parents taught me to be polite by reminding me to greet adults respectfully and say “thank you” whenever I received something. Although I was shy at first, I gradually became more comfortable using these expressions through regular practice.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion in the first sentence and avoid repeating the same word. The correct noun is “politeness,” not “pleatiness” or “platinis.” Explain the result more naturally: people feel appreciated, so they may be more willing to help others in the future. Use “because” or “as a result” to link your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, politeness is very important because it shows respect and appreciation for other people. For example, when we thank someone for helping us, they feel valued and may be more willing to help others in the future.

Sugestão: Organize the answer by mentioning several occasions and explain the appropriate behavior for each one. Correct the grammar in “the first thing we should greet them” to “the first thing we should do is greet them,” and replace “been quiet” with “be quiet.” Avoid repeating “thank you” and use linking words such as “also” and “for instance.”

Exemplo: We should be polite whenever we meet someone, receive help, or share a meal with others. For instance, we should greet people when we see them and thank them when they help us. When eating with others, we should also show respect by using good table manners and speaking quietly.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating “quiet” and use the correct expressions “older people” or “my elders,” “greeted them,” and “said hello.” Since the question asks what you did, use the past tense consistently. Begin with a direct answer and then give two specific examples, such as greeting adults and showing good table manners.

Exemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting adults and saying hello whenever I met them. I also used good table manners when eating with my parents or other older people. For example, I waited for everyone to be served and avoided speaking loudly during meals.

× When I was a child, my parents always told me to say to great people and to say thank you after receiving something from them.

✓ When I was a child, my parents always told me to say hello to great people and to say thank you after receiving something from them.

The verb say needs an object or expression, such as say hello. The preposition to should follow hello, not say by itself.

× They They feel being appreciated and then they will do more to help others in future.

✓ They feel appreciated, and then they will do more to help others in the future.

The subject pronoun They is repeated unnecessarily. Use it only once at the beginning of the sentence.

× They They feel being appreciated and then they will do more to help others in future.

✓ They feel appreciated, and then they will do more to help others in the future.

The fixed expression is in the future, so the definite article the is required before future.

× When we meet people, the first thing we should greet them and then after receiving help from them, we should appreciate their help by saying thank you thank you.

✓ When we meet people, the first thing we should do is greet them. After receiving help from them, we should show our appreciation by saying thank you.

The phrase the first thing we should greet them is missing the verb do and the structure is incomplete. Use the pattern the first thing we should do is + base verb.

× When we eat together, we respect other people and been quiet.

✓ When we eat together, we respect other people and keep quiet.

Been is a past participle and cannot be used here as the second verb after respect. Because the sentence describes a general situation, use the base-form verb keep to make the two verbs parallel: respect and keep.

× When I met them at first I gripped them, say hello.

✓ When I met them at first, I gripped them and said hello.

The sentence describes past events, so say must change to its past-tense form said. The conjunction and correctly connects the two past actions.