Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答抓住了“父母教导”和“尊重他人”这两个重点，但语法、词汇和句子衔接问题较多。应直接说明父母如何教育你，例如提醒你说“please”和“thank you”，并用 because 或 for example 连接细节。注意使用复数 parents、过去时 believed/reminded，以及正确表达 say please and thank you；不要加入无法理解的片段，如“agrees”和“Great people, nice way I meet them”。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. From a young age, they taught me to respect others and reminded me to say “please” and “thank you.” They also encouraged me to greet people warmly, which helped me develop good manners.

Sugestão: 回答结构较清楚，有观点、原因和例子，内容也切合问题。主要问题是“peace”应为“please”，“News”是多余或不完整的内容；另外可以进一步说明礼貌如何帮助建立关系。建议保持2至4句，避免重复 say thank you，并使用自然搭配，如 make people feel respected 和 build positive relationships。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it creates a good first impression and makes people feel respected. For instance, saying “please” and “thank you” at work can encourage people to respond more positively and help build good relationships.

Sugestão: 回答的主要观点是“任何场合都应保持礼貌”，方向正确，但开头不完整，且“Poland less health”无法理解，影响表达清晰度。“greet greet”也应避免重复。可以先用完整的主题句回答，再分别提到家里、学校、工作场所或公共场合，并说明礼貌有助于维持良好关系。

Exemplo: We should be polite in almost every situation, both at home and in public. In particular, it is important when speaking to older people, teachers, colleagues, or strangers. I usually say “please” and “thank you” and greet people politely because this shows respect and helps maintain good relationships.

Sugestão: 回答提到了问候和道谢，但后半部分句子结构不清楚，无法准确表达你的意思。应直接说明你会向老师、朋友以及帮助过你的人道谢，并使用过去时或 used to 保持一致。“small acts of politeness show respect”是更自然的表达；同时删除“for example, and school trips”等不完整片段。

Exemplo: As a child, I used to say “good morning” to my teachers and friends. I also thanked anyone who helped me, whether at school or during school trips. I learned that even small acts of politeness can show respect and make other people feel appreciated.

× my parent

✓ my parents

“parent”表示一个家长；根据后文的“they”，这里指父母双方，所以应使用复数形式“parents”。

× because they believe so

✓ because they believed so

主句使用过去时“When I was a child”，讲述童年发生的事情，因此“believe”也应使用过去式“believed”。

× they believe so in respect to others is very important

✓ they believed that showing respect to others was very important

原句缺少清晰的宾语从句结构。可以使用“believed that + 从句”；“showing respect to others”作为动名词短语充当主语。

× respect to others is very important

✓ showing respect to others was very important

当“尊重他人”作为句子的主语时，应使用动名词“showing”。同时，因为是在描述过去的想法，使用“was”。

× they always remind me to say peace and thank you and agrees

✓ they always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” and to greet people

主语“they”是复数，不能使用第三人称单数形式“agrees”。并列结构中应使用一致的动词形式“to say”和“to greet”。另外，“peace”在礼貌用语中应为“please”。

× Great people, nice way I meet them.

✓ I greeted people politely when I met them.

原句缺少清晰的主语、谓语和完整的句子结构。应使用“I greeted...”表达“我问候别人”，并用“when I met them”说明时间。

× people will feel respected and are more likely to respond positively

✓ people will feel respected and will be more likely to respond positively

在“if”条件句的主句中，两个并列结果都应保持将来时结构，因此第二部分应使用“will be more likely”。

× Wish to be polite in any situation both at home and outside

✓ I try to be polite in every situation, both at home and outside.

原句缺少主语和完整谓语。英语完整句子通常需要主语；加入“I try”后，句子结构完整，也更符合问题“在哪些场合应该有礼貌”的回答。

× because Poland less health.

✓ because politeness helps maintain good relationships.

原句的词语排列不能构成有意义的英语句子，缺少清晰的主语和谓语。可以改为“politeness helps maintain...”来表达“礼貌有助于维持良好关系”。

× Maintain good relationship.

✓ It helps me maintain good relationships.

原句缺少主语，属于句子片段。加入主语“It”和谓语“helps”后，句子完整。

× good relationship

✓ good relationships

这里是泛指礼貌有助于维持多种良好的人际关系，因此通常使用复数“relationships”。

× for example, and school trips

✓ for example, on school trips

表示“在学校旅行期间”时，应使用介词“on”，即“on school trips”。“and”不能连接这里的时间场合。

× I would be my teacher and friend, everyone who helped me

✓ I would greet my teachers and friends, as well as everyone who helped me

“I would be my teacher and friend”中的“be”不能表达“向老师和朋友问候”的意思。应使用动词“greet”，并用“as well as”连接其他被问候的人。

× my teacher and friend

✓ my teachers and friends

这里指多个老师和朋友，且“teacher”和“friend”都需要使用复数形式。

× small politeness

✓ small acts of politeness

“politeness”通常是不可数名词，不能直接用“small”修饰来表示一个个礼貌行为。表达“细小的礼貌行为”时，应使用“small acts of politeness”。

× small politeness show respect

✓ small acts of politeness show respect

修改后主语“small acts”是复数，因此谓语使用“show”是正确的；同时加入“acts of”使名词短语结构完整。