Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答有清晰的两点结构：家庭教育和学校教育，但语法错误较多，影响自然度和准确性。例如，“there are two factors affect me”应改为“two factors affected me”，“be behavioral yourself”应改为“behave yourself”，“be behave”应改为“behave”。可以使用“First... Second...”来增强衔接，并补充一个具体行为，例如向长辈问好或说“please”和“thank you”。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my family and my school. First, my parents taught me to behave myself and use polite expressions such as “please” and “thank you.” Second, my teachers encouraged us to respect our classmates and greet adults properly. These lessons helped me develop good manners from an early age.

Sugestão: 观点明确，也提供了原因和结果，但“prenight”应为“polite”，“the first impression that people give us”表达不自然，应改为“the first impression we give others”。“Always try to be polite that...”是句子连接错误，可以改为“Being polite can help...”或使用“Moreover”。建议避免重复使用“career”，并加入一个生活中的具体例子，使内容更有说服力。

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is extremely important because we need to interact with other people every day. Good manners create a positive first impression and show that we respect others. For example, saying “thank you” to a colleague can make communication more pleasant. In the long run, politeness can also help us build stronger relationships at work.

Sugestão: 回答提到了工作场合，但内容重复，且有多处词汇和语法问题。“per night”和“Pronide”应为“polite”，“occasions that should be polite”应改为“occasions when we should be polite”。“The business environment is the highly required environment”不自然，可以直接说明会议、面试或与客户交流等场景。建议列举两个具体场合，并解释礼貌如何帮助沟通。

Exemplo: We should be polite in many situations, especially when we are dealing with other people professionally. For instance, it is important to use polite language during a job interview, a business meeting, or a conversation with a customer. This shows respect and helps everyone communicate more comfortably. We should also be polite when speaking to elderly people or strangers.

Sugestão: 回答试图举例说明礼貌行为，但存在较多听辨或拼写对应的词汇错误，例如“pony”和“poniteness”应为“politeness”，“grading”应为“greeting”。“according to your words”表达不清楚，可以直接说“through my words and actions”。此外，句子过长且缺少清晰结构，建议用“Whenever...，I would...”描述一个具体经历，并使用正确的动词形式。

Exemplo: As a child, I showed politeness mainly through my words and actions. Whenever my parents introduced me to someone, I would greet that person politely and say, “Nice to meet you.” I also used expressions like “please,” “thank you,” and “sorry” when appropriate. These simple habits showed that I respected other people.

× Well, when I was a child, I think there are two factors affect me a lot.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I thought there were two factors that affected me a lot.

主句描述童年经历，应使用过去时 thought。there be 结构也要与过去时间一致，因此用 were。factors 后面需要用 that 引导定语从句，不能直接接 affect。

× My parents always told us to be behavioral yourself no matter in front of others or just stay at home.

✓ My parents always told us to behave ourselves, whether we were in front of others or just at home.

behavioral 是形容词，不能放在 to be 后表达“表现得有礼貌”，这里应使用动词 behave。主语是 us，所以反身代词应为 ourselves，而不是 yourself。whether...or...表示“无论……还是……”，连接两个情况时结构更正确。

× Second, the school education also told children to be behave as a good kid.

✓ Second, school education also taught children to behave like good kids.

to 后面应使用动词原形 behave，不能使用 be behave。children 是复数，因此后面应使用复数形式 good kids。school education 在这里表示一般概念，通常不需要 the。

× Well, I think being prenight is extremely important for kids because we are living in a society that we have to connect with others.

✓ Well, I think being polite is extremely important for kids because we live in a society where we have to connect with others.

society 后面表示地点或环境，应使用 where，而不是 that。谈论普遍事实时，live 比 are living 更自然。being polite 是正确的动名词结构，表示“有礼貌这件事”。

× The behavior is the first impression that people give us.

✓ Our behavior creates the first impression that people have of us.

原句中 people give us 的宾语关系不清楚，容易理解为“人们给我们行为”。表达“别人对我们的第一印象”时，应使用 people have of us。使用 Our behavior creates...也能使主语和逻辑关系更加清楚。

× Always try to be polite that will help you in your career and give you a better career path.

✓ Always try to be polite, because that will help you in your career and give you a better career path.

两个完整分句不能只用逗号直接连接。可以使用 because 说明原因，也可以拆成两个句子。

× Well, normally there are so many occasions that should be per night, especially like in the business environment.

✓ Well, normally, there are many occasions when we should be polite, especially in a business environment.

表示“在某些场合”时，应使用 occasions when...，不能使用 occasions that...。especially like in 结构错误，直接使用 especially in 即可。business environment 前使用 a，表示一个商业环境。

× The business environment is the highly required environment.

✓ A business environment is a highly formal environment.

这里是在泛指商业环境，不应使用两个 the。highly 通常修饰形容词 formal，不能自然地修饰 required 来表达“要求很高”。

× People also should be Pronide and professional.

✓ People should also be polite and professional.

also 通常放在情态动词 should 后面，因此使用 should also。polite 和 professional 都是形容词，两个形容词可以由 and 连接。

× Pronide is the way to express your professional to make people feel comfortable to get the business done.

✓ Politeness is a way to show your professionalism and make people feel comfortable doing business.

professional 是形容词，不能直接作“专业性”的名词；这里应使用 professionalism。make people feel comfortable 后面可接 doing business，表示“让人们做生意时感到舒服”。

× Well, when I was a kid, I think the best way to show your pony is according to your words.

✓ Well, when I was a kid, I thought the best way to show your politeness was through your words.

描述童年想法时，主句应使用过去时 thought。the best way...后面需要清楚说明方式，through your words 比 according to your words 更准确。

× Words is a way to express your poniteness like when you meet some familiar people that your parents introduced to you, you should first grading them as a pernite way.

✓ Words are a way to express your politeness. For example, when you meet people whom your parents have introduced to you, you should first greet them politely.

Words 是复数主语，因此谓语应使用 are。原句包含多个意思，拆成两个句子可以避免句子过长。should 后面必须使用动词原形 greet，不能使用 grading。副词 politely 修饰 greet，表示“有礼貌地打招呼”。