Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答直接，内容也有具体例子，但“plight”应改为“politeness”，且“learned politeness from my parents”更自然。“must exchange greetings”语气偏生硬，可以说“greet people”。注意时态一致：过去经历可用“they taught me to...”以及“when someone helped me”。建议使用“for example”引出例子，并减少重复使用“must”。

Exemplo: I learned politeness mainly from my parents. They taught me to greet people when I met them in my neighborhood and to say “thank you” whenever someone helped me or did me a favor.

Sugestão: 观点明确，也给出了两个理由，但“brings can help you bring”是明显的重复和语法错误，应改为“can help you make”。“a good first impression”前面用“make”，而不是“bring”；“strong relationship”应改为复数“strong relationships”。可以用“Moreover”连接第二个理由，并避免重复使用“being polite can help”。

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is essential for everyone. It can help us make a good first impression and build strong relationships with others. Moreover, politeness is especially useful when we meet strangers because it makes them feel respected and comfortable.

Sugestão: 回答提到了会议和初次见面，但表达不够自然，且存在多个词汇和语法问题：“pleased”应为“polite”，但更自然的表达是“speak politely to”；“pride”应为“polite”；“to have make”应改为“to make”。“for example like”重复，只保留“for example”。建议先概括场合，再分别说明原因，并使用“especially”增强逻辑。

Exemplo: We should be polite whenever we meet new people or attend formal occasions. For example, during an important meeting, we should speak respectfully to our managers and colleagues. It is also important to be polite when meeting someone for the first time because this helps us make a positive first impression.

Sugestão: 回答简洁直接，并提供了两个具体行为，但“grated”应改为“greeted”，“met him”应改为“met them”，因为指的是其他人。连接两个行为时不要使用“or”，因为你是在列举两种做法，应使用“and”。另外，“when they did me a favor”可以保留，也可以说“when they helped me”。

Exemplo: When I was a child, I showed politeness by greeting people whenever I met them in my neighborhood. I also always said “thank you” when someone helped me or did me a favor.

× Well when I was a child I often learned plight from my parents and for example they told me I must exchange greetings when I meet others in our neighborhood or I must say thank you when others helped me or do me a favor.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I often learned plight from my parents. For example, they told me I must exchange greetings when I met others in our neighborhood, and I must say thank you when others helped me or did me a favor.

叙述童年时的经历，主要时态应保持过去时。因此，when I meet 应改为 when I met，do 应改为 did，使并列动词与 helped 保持一致。

× Well, I think it's necessary for everyone to be polite because being polite brings can help you bring a good first impression to others and also being polite can help build strong relationship with others especially strangers.

✓ Well, I think it's necessary for everyone to be polite because being polite can help you make a good first impression on others. It can also help you build strong relationships with others, especially strangers.

原句中 brings can help you bring 重复使用了多个谓语，造成句子结构混乱。应保留一个完整的谓语结构：can help you make。较长的句子也可以拆成两个句子，使结构更清晰。

× Well, I think it's necessary for everyone to be polite because being polite brings can help you bring a good first impression to others and also being polite can help build strong relationship with others especially strangers.

✓ Well, I think it's necessary for everyone to be polite because being polite can help you make a good first impression on others. It can also help you build strong relationships with others, especially strangers.

英语中通常说 make a good first impression on someone，而不是 bring a good first impression to someone。因此这里应使用介词 on，并搭配动词 make。

× Well, I think it's necessary for everyone to be polite because being polite brings can help you bring a good first impression to others and also being polite can help build strong relationship with others especially strangers.

✓ Well, I think it's necessary for everyone to be polite because being polite can help you make a good first impression on others. It can also help you build strong relationships with others, especially strangers.

strong relationship 后面接 with others，表示与许多人的关系，因此 relationship 应使用复数 relationships。注意名词单复数要根据所指对象的数量决定。

× I think maybe some important or special occasions for example like an important meeting you must be pleased to your manager or to your colleagues and also in some important first meeting you should be pride to have make a first impression

✓ I think we should be polite on some important or special occasions. For example, at an important meeting, you must be polite to your manager or colleagues. Also, at an important first meeting, you should be proud to have made a good first impression.

pleased 表示“感到高兴或满意”，不符合“对别人有礼貌”的意思，应改为 polite。pride 是名词，不能放在 be 后面作表语；这里应使用形容词 proud。

× I think maybe some important or special occasions for example like an important meeting you must be pleased to your manager or to your colleagues and also in some important first meeting you should be pride to have make a first impression

✓ I think we should be polite on some important or special occasions. For example, at an important meeting, you must be polite to your manager or colleagues. Also, at an important first meeting, you should be proud to have made a good first impression.

表示“在会议上”时，通常使用介词 at，而不是 in。因此，in some important first meeting 应改为 at an important first meeting。表示“对某人有礼貌”时使用 polite to。

× I think maybe some important or special occasions for example like an important meeting you must be pleased to your manager or to your colleagues and also in some important first meeting you should be pride to have make a first impression

✓ I think we should be polite on some important or special occasions. For example, at an important meeting, you must be polite to your manager or colleagues. Also, at an important first meeting, you should be proud to have made a good first impression.

have 后面需要接动词的过去分词形式，构成完成时或完成不定式。因此，have make 应改为 have made。

× When I was a child, I often grated with other people when I met him in our neighborhood or I always said thank you to them when they did me a favor.

✓ When I was a child, I often grated with other people when I met them in our neighborhood, and I always said thank you to them when they did me a favor.

other people 是复数名词，因此代词应使用复数 them，而不能使用单数宾格 him。代词的数要与它所指代的名词保持一致。