Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words and correct repetitions. Also fix basic grammar (articles, verb forms) and punctuation. Aim for 2–4 sentences and include an example to make it specific.

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. For example, my parents always told me to say “thank you” when someone helps me and to apologise if I made a mistake. Because of their guidance, politeness became a habit in my daily life.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two reasons with linking words. Avoid mixed or incorrect idioms and check grammar (capitalization, subject-verb agreement). Use a concrete outcome to support your view.

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it creates a positive first impression. For instance, if you greet someone politely at a job interview, they are more likely to trust you and treat you with respect.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming typical occasions, then provide specific examples and use linking words to connect ideas. Remove repetition and improve phrasing for fluency. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: We should be polite in many everyday situations, for example when asking for help from teachers, speaking with friends, or interacting with coworkers at work. In these situations, saying “please,” “thank you,” or “sorry” helps maintain good relationships.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear past-tense statement, then give a specific action or brief example. Fix grammar and word choice (use ‘greeted people warmly’ rather than awkward phrases). Keep it short and concrete.

Exemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting people warmly and using polite phrases. For example, I would smile, say “hello” and “thank you” when someone helped me, which made them feel appreciated.

× To be polite as a child I learned from my parents as well as from my teachers parents always say to me say thank you and sorry whenever whenever you needed, like if someone is helping you to say thank you and also be sorry what you did wrong.

✓ To be polite as a child, I learned from my parents and my teachers. My parents always told me to say thank you and sorry whenever I needed to, for example, if someone helped me I should say thank you, and if I did something wrong I should say sorry.

Errors: run-on sentence, incorrect verb tense and form, incorrect pronouns and punctuation. Reasons and suggestions: Split into clear sentences, use past tense for learned/told (I learned, My parents told me), use correct pronoun and verb forms (whenever I needed to), and add commas to separate clauses. Be explicit with examples and use 'if I did something wrong I should say sorry'.

× being polite is a very important and crucial thing because whenever you meet someone for the first time the first impression is the last impression this is the quote I remember. So be polite and kind are always make other persons very respectful and kindness.

✓ Being polite is very important and crucial because when you meet someone for the first time, the first impression matters. I remember that quote. Being polite and kind always makes other people feel respected and shows kindness.

Errors: missing capitalization and articles, awkward phrasing, subject-verb agreement, incorrect noun choice. Reasons and suggestions: Capitalize sentence start, remove redundant article 'a' before 'very important', rephrase 'the first impression is the last impression' to 'the first impression matters', use singular subject 'Being polite and kind' with verb 'makes', use 'people' instead of 'persons', and use 'feel respected' and 'shows kindness' for clarity.

× Well there are many occasions we should be polite like in every situation like you want you want some thing help from others like teachers, your friends also in a workplace, your coworkers, colleagues. So in that case you should be polite like sorry thank you

✓ Well, there are many occasions when we should be polite, such as when you want help from others, like teachers or friends, and in the workplace with coworkers and colleagues. In those cases you should use polite phrases like 'sorry' and 'thank you'.

Errors: incorrect or missing prepositions and connectors, repetition, punctuation. Reasons and suggestions: Use 'occasions when', 'such as' to introduce examples, 'help from others' is correct prepositional phrase, separate workplace examples with commas, and use 'in those cases' for reference. Put polite phrases in quotes or italics and include articles as needed.

× Well as a child to show my politeness when someone greeting me I greeted as a respectful kindness and warm as a warm hearted?

✓ Well, as a child, to show my politeness when someone greeted me I would greet them respectfully and warmly, showing that I was warm-hearted.

Errors: incorrect verb tense and form, awkward adverb/adjective use, punctuation. Reasons and suggestions: Use past tense 'greeted' to match 'as a child', use adverbs 'respectfully' and 'warmly' to modify 'greet', avoid repeating 'warm', use 'warm-hearted' as an adjective later, and remove question mark. Consider 'I would greet them respectfully and warmly' to describe habitual past action.