Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example and use linking words. Correct verb forms and pronouns (e.g., "I learned" not "I have learned" in this context). Replace vague phrases like "show your good etiquettes" with a concrete action (e.g., "how to greet people and say thank you").

Exemplo: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. For example, my mother always taught me to say "please" and "thank you," and my teacher corrected me when I interrupted others. Because of that, I still try to use polite language in daily situations.

Sugestão: Make a direct topic sentence, then give one clear reason with a linking word and a concise example. Fix tense and word order (e.g., "sometimes when I'm in a meeting with many people, I try to remain quiet"). Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "so by that it show my respect."

Exemplo: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it shows respect for others. For instance, when I'm in a meeting with many people, I try to listen quietly and wait my turn to speak, which helps maintain a respectful atmosphere.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence naming occasions, then support with two specific examples connected by linking words. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., "politeness" not "a politeness"; "quiet" not "quite"). Avoid repetition and be specific about occasions (e.g., job interviews, meetings, family gatherings).

Exemplo: We should be polite on many occasions, such as job interviews, meetings, and family gatherings. For example, in a job interview you should speak respectfully and listen carefully, and at family events polite manners help avoid misunderstandings.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give one or two concrete actions you did as a child. Fix vocabulary ("gladness" is odd here) and tense ("I had good communication skills"). Use linking words to connect actions and reasons.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I tried to show politeness by greeting adults respectfully and saying "please" and "thank you." Also, I practiced listening carefully to others, which helped me communicate politely.

× I have learned to be polite as a child live from my parents and school teachers.

✓ I learned to be polite as a child from my parents and my school teachers.

The present perfect 'have learned' is inappropriate with the specific past time 'as a child'; simple past 'learned' is correct. 'live' is incorrect here and should be omitted; also add 'my' before 'school teachers' for clarity. Suggestion: use simple past for completed actions in the past and remove unrelated words.

× They tell me respect to other people and show your good etiquettes.

✓ They taught me to respect other people and to show good manners.

Original has wrong verb forms and pronoun inconsistency. 'tell me respect' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'teach someone to do something'. Use past tense 'taught' to match earlier past context. 'show your good etiquettes' mixes second person 'your' with first-person narrative and uses 'etiquettes' (uncountable/plural misuse); use 'show good manners'. Suggestion: use 'teach someone to + verb' and maintain consistent pronouns.

× Yes, I think being polite is very important for us because sometime whenever I in a meeting there was many people and I want to stay quiet and be polite so by that it show my respect.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because sometimes when I am in a meeting with many people I want to stay quiet and be polite because that shows my respect.

Multiple tense and word-order issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'whenever I in a meeting' needs 'when I am in a meeting' (present continuous or simple present for habitual situations); 'there was many people' mixes past 'was' with 'many people' and should be 'with many people'; 'I want to stay' is acceptable for habitual preference; final clause needs subject-verb agreement: 'that shows my respect'. Suggestion: use adverb 'sometimes', correct clause order, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Well, I think a politeness has many several reasons.

✓ Well, I think politeness has several reasons.

'A politeness' is incorrect because 'politeness' is an uncountable abstract noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. 'many several' is redundant; choose one quantifier such as 'several'. Suggestion: omit the article with abstract nouns and avoid redundant quantifiers.

× It shows our communication skills and good manners.

✓ It shows our communication skills and our good manners.

Sentence is mostly correct but clearer with parallel possessive structure 'our communication skills and our good manners'. Suggestion: keep parallel structure for clarity.

× We want to be quite in a work work interview or or at a meeting.

✓ We should be quiet in a job interview or at a meeting.

'quite' is a different word meaning 'completely'; the intended word is 'quiet' (silent). 'work work interview' is redundant; use 'job interview'. Remove duplicate 'or'. Also 'should be' is better than 'want to be' when giving advice. Suggestion: use correct adjective 'quiet' and clean repetitions.

× It show our respect.

✓ It shows our respect.

Subject 'It' requires third person singular verb 'shows', not 'show'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement in present simple.

× When I was a child, I showed gladness as to give respect to other people and speak politely and I have a good communication skills for other.

✓ When I was a child, I showed my respect to other people by speaking politely, and I had good communication skills.

Mixed tenses: use past tense 'had' to match 'was' and 'showed'. 'showed gladness as to give respect' is unnatural; use 'showed my respect' or 'showed respect'. 'speak politely' should be past 'speaking politely' to match. 'I have a good communication skills' mixes present 'have' with plural 'skills' and needs past 'had' and remove 'a' before plural 'skills'. Also 'for other' is incorrect; remove it. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and use natural collocations like 'show respect' and 'speak politely'.