Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答直接但表达欠流畅，句子重复（多次使用“say”）且有些词序和搭配不自然。建议用一到两句主题句然后用一两句具体例子补充，避免重复，使用更自然的动词短语（如 “greet people”, “express gratitude”）。此外将时间状语放在合适位置，控制在不超过5句。

Exemplo: I learned politeness mainly from my parents. For example, they taught me to greet people warmly, to thank others when they helped me, and to say goodbye politely when leaving a gathering.

Sugestão: 回答有观点但语言混乱，语法和搭配错误（如“act like a The main factor of the your name card”）。建议先给出清晰的主题句表达观点，然后用一两条理由支持（如“creates good first impression”或“helps build relationships”），使用连词（because, as a result）使逻辑更连贯。注意名词搭配（first impression, social network不要混用）。

Exemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it creates a good first impression. As a result, polite behavior can help you build stronger relationships both socially and professionally.

Sugestão: 回答内容合理但表达重复且语法需改进（如“first meeting someone”应为“first meeting someone”或“when meeting someone for the first time”），多次使用“also”。建议用一到两句列举主要场合，使用连接词（especially, such as, for example）并避免冗余。

Exemplo: We should be polite on most occasions, especially when meeting someone for the first time. For example, it is important to be polite during client meetings and when interacting with seniors at work.

Sugestão: 回答使用时态和人称不一致（混用“will”和“we”），句子冗长且重复（多次列出类似行为）。建议用过去式描述童年习惯，句子简洁清晰，列举具体场景并用连接词（for example, when）使表述连贯。

Exemplo: As a child I usually greeted people when I met them and thanked anyone who gave me gifts or food. I also said goodbye politely when leaving a gathering.

× They usually remind me to say hello and say thank you and say goodbye when the timing is there.

✓ They usually remind me to say "hello", "thank you" and "goodbye" when the time is right.

句子使用一般现在时描述习惯动作是正确的，但原句中短语“when the timing is there”不自然且语法不当。建议改为常用表达“when the time is right”（当时机合适）。另外，为了清晰，礼貌用语可用引号分隔。

× It is act like a The main factor of the your name card it influence on the first impression, which is of great importance of social network.

✓ It acts like your business card; it influences the first impression, which is very important in social networks.

原句结构混乱，有重复主语和不正确的词序。需使用主语+谓语（It acts）而不是“It is act”。“the your”是冗余且错误的冠词使用，应去掉“the”。动词单复数需与主语一致（influences）。短语“of great importance of social network”中介词使用和名词单复数不当，改为“very important in social networks”。这些修改使句子结构清晰且语法正确。

× I think being polite applies to most of the occasions especially when we first meeting someone and also during Our meetings with our clients and also with our seniors it is very, very important

✓ I think being polite applies to most occasions, especially when we first meet someone and during our meetings with clients and seniors; it is very important.

原句中时态与动名词混用错误，“when we first meeting someone”应使用一般现在时的动词原形“meet”。同时“most of the occasions”冗余，可简化为“most occasions”。大写“Our”不正确，改为小写。句子过长需要用标点分开以改善结构和可读性。

× I will greet someone when we meet and we say thank you when we get a gift or food from other people and we say goodbye when we're going to leave the place and farewell

✓ I greet people when I meet them; I say thank you when I receive a gift or food from others; and I say goodbye when I am leaving.

回答描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时而非将来时“will greet”。原句中人称混用（I 与 we）导致不一致，且“we say goodbye when we're going to leave the place and farewell”冗长且“farewell”使用不当。改为统一的第一人称并用一般现在时，简洁表达日常习惯。

× which is of great importance of social network.

✓ which is very important in social networks.

短语中“social network”在此泛指社交场合，应使用复数“social networks”或用不可数“social networking”。并且“of great importance of”中重复使用介词“of”不正确，改为“very important in”更自然正确。