Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên, ngữ pháp và độ rõ ràng. Tránh tiếng tắc nghẽn (“uh”), sửa cấu trúc như “respect with other people” thành “respect other people”, và tránh lặp từ (“thank you or thank you”). Bổ sung câu chủ đề rõ ràng và một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về hành động mẹ dạy (ví dụ: chào hỏi, trao đổi, cách xin lỗi). Giữ độ dài tối đa 4–5 câu.

Exemplo: My mother taught me to be polite from a young age. She often reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” and showed me how to apologize sincerely when I made a mistake. For example, she would role-play greeting guests so I learned how to speak respectfully. These small habits became part of my daily routine.

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, trật tự từ và tính súc tích. Tránh câu hỏi tu từ không cần thiết (“is it the way…”). Dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng nêu quan điểm, rồi thêm lý do cụ thể với liên từ như “because” hoặc “so”. Sử dụng danh từ/đại từ đúng (“a good person” thay vì “a good people”).

Exemplo: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it affects how people perceive you and helps build positive relationships. When you treat others with respect, they are more likely to respond kindly and cooperate with you. For instance, polite behaviour can make teamwork at school or work much smoother.

Sugestão: Làm rõ và rút gọn ý, sửa ngữ pháp (“communication” → “communicate”), và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Thay vì lặp ý chung chung, nêu vài dịp cụ thể (ví dụ: giao tiếp với người lớn, ở nơi công cộng, trong công việc). Giữ tối đa 4 câu.

Exemplo: We should be polite in most situations, especially when interacting with strangers, elders, or colleagues. For example, saying “excuse me” on public transport or addressing seniors respectfully shows consideration. Being polite in these occasions helps create a pleasant environment for everyone.

Sugestão: Sửa lỗi từ vựng (“politics” → “politeness”) và ngữ pháp (động từ nguyên mẫu: “by saying thank you”). Tránh kết thúc quá đột ngột bằng “So that's all”; thay vào đó, mở rộng bằng một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc kết quả khi bạn cư xử lịch sự. Giữ cấu trúc: chủ đề + chi tiết + ví dụ ngắn.

Exemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “thank you” and apologizing when I made a mistake. For instance, if I accidentally bumped into someone, I would immediately say sorry and help if needed. These simple actions helped me get along well with classmates and adults.

× When I was a child, my mother told me to, uh, respect with other people and always say thank you or thank you or sorry with with.

✓ When I was a child, my mother told me to respect other people and always say thank you or sorry.

Sử dụng giới từ không đúng: 'respect with other people' và 'sorry with with' là sai. Verb 'respect' is transitive and does not take 'with'; use 'respect other people'. Remove duplicate words and extra 'with'. Suggestion: Learn verbs that take objects vs those that need prepositions and avoid redundant words.

× Yes, I think that being polite is very important for many people because is it the way they treat with everyone?

✓ Yes, I think that being polite is very important for many people because it affects the way they treat everyone.

Chủ ngữ - động từ không phù hợp và trật tự từ: 'because is it the way they treat with everyone?' uses incorrect word order and unnecessary 'with'. Use 'it affects the way they treat everyone.' Suggestion: Use 'it' as dummy subject and 'affect' to link idea; do not add 'with' after 'treat'.

× So when you polite with people around you, you will become a good people.

✓ So when you are polite with the people around you, you will become a good person.

Sử dụng tính từ/ danh từ không đúng: missing auxiliary 'are' before adjective 'polite', and 'people' should be singular 'person' when referring to an individual. Also include definite article 'the' before 'people around you'. Suggestion: Use 'be' verb before adjectives and choose singular/plural consistently.

× I think we should be polite on every occasion because whenever you communication with everyone, respect and polite is very necessary.

✓ I think we should be polite on every occasion because whenever you communicate with everyone, respect and politeness are very necessary.

Lỗi giới từ và danh từ hóa: 'you communication' is wrong; use verb 'you communicate'. 'respect and polite is' mixes noun and adjective; use noun 'politeness' and plural verb 'are' for compound subject. Suggestion: Ensure correct word forms (verb vs noun) and subject-verb agreement for multiple nouns.

× For example, whenever you talk to other people you can you need to respect.

✓ For example, whenever you talk to other people you need to show respect.

Sử dụng đại từ không đúng và thừa từ: 'you can you need to' is redundant. Also verb 'respect' typically needs an object or use noun 'show respect'. Suggestion: Avoid duplicate pronouns and choose appropriate verb or verb+noun collocation.

× When I was a child, I often showed my politics by say thank you or apologize when making mistake when made mistake.

✓ When I was a child, I often showed my politeness by saying thank you or apologizing when I made a mistake.

Dạng động từ -ing: after 'by' use gerund 'saying'/'apologizing'. Also 'politics' is wrong word; should be 'politeness'. Include subject 'I' and article 'a' before 'mistake'. Suggestion: After 'by' use gerund; choose correct noun forms and include subjects where needed.