Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は短く直接的で分かりやすいですが、内容が限定的で具体例や理由がありません。また文法や語彙の選択に改善の余地があります（“find people in trouble”は不自然）。より自然で豊かな表現と1〜2の具体例を加えると良いです。

Exemplo: My parents taught me to be polite by setting an example and explaining why kindness matters. For instance, they always encouraged me to help classmates who struggled with homework and to say ‘please’ and ‘thank you.’ As a result, I learned that small acts of kindness make social interactions smoother.

Sugestão: 意味が伝わりにくく、語彙と文法の誤用が多いです（“pride”の使い方が間違い）。まず意見を明確に述べ、その後に理由と具体例を論理的に示す練習をしてください。適切な語彙（polite, respectful, considerate）を使うこと。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it helps people get along and shows respect. For example, when someone is polite at work, colleagues feel valued and cooperation improves, which leads to a more positive atmosphere.

Sugestão: 答えは場面を挙げていますが表現が粗くで、侮辱的に聞こえる可能性があります（“in trouble”の使い方）。より広い場面を挙げ、敬意を示す理由を丁寧に述べてください。またリンク語（for example, such as, because）を使って論理を明確に。

Exemplo: We should be polite in many situations, such as when meeting elders, customers, or people with disabilities, because politeness shows respect and makes interactions easier. For example, speaking calmly and offering help when appropriate can make someone feel more comfortable.

Sugestão: 答えが簡潔すぎて具体性に欠けます。“talked to them”は何を話したか、どのように助けたかが不明です。過去の具体的な行動や結果を1〜2文で付け加え、接続詞で流れを作ると効果的です。

Exemplo: As a child, I tried to show politeness by offering help and listening to people who were upset. For example, I would comfort classmates who were sad and help them with their schoolwork, which often made them feel better and more confident.

× Yes, I think so because if everyone is pride, the world is better.

✓ Yes, I think so because if everyone is proud, the world would be better.

'Pride' is a noun; the sentence needs the adjective 'proud' to describe people. Also 'would be' is more natural for a conditional statement about an unreal or general situation. Suggestion: use 'proud' for describing people and use appropriate conditional verb form (would) for hypothetical results.

× For example, if people pride to others, they can feel sense of achievement.

✓ For example, if people show pride to others, they can feel a sense of achievement.

'Pride' is a noun; to express displaying pride use 'show pride' or use the adjective 'proud'. The verb 'pride' alone is incorrect. Also 'feel sense of achievement' lacks the article 'a'. Suggestion: use 'show pride' or 'are proud of' and include 'a' before 'sense of achievement'.

× Well, when I meet disabled people we should be polite because many disabled people are in trouble, so we should help them.

✓ Well, when I meet disabled people, I should be polite because many disabled people are in trouble, so I should help them.

The original mixes first-person singular 'I' with plural 'we', creating a pronoun mismatch. Use consistent pronouns to match the speaker (I). Also add a comma after the subordinate clause 'when I meet disabled people'. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent and punctuate clauses clearly.

× Well, my parents told me that if I find people in trouble, I should help them.

✓ Well, my parents told me that if I found people in trouble, I should help them.

The sequence of tenses requires backshifting in reported speech: 'my parents told me' is past, so the conditional 'if I find' should be backshifted to 'if I found'. Suggestion: in reported speech after a past reporting verb, change present tense to past tense.

× Well, when I met people in trouble, I usually talked to them.

✓ Well, when I met people in trouble, I usually talked to them.

No grammatical change needed; the sentence correctly uses past tense to describe repeated past actions. Note: keep 'usually' with past tense to indicate habitual action in the past.