Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: ・文法（時制と主語・動詞の一致）を修正する。具体的には過去の出来事なので過去形を使い、動詞の形を正すこと。・文を簡潔にして、主題文（topic sentence）を最初に置き、その後に具体例を1つ添える。・語彙を適切に使う（teach → taught、follow → followed、’up pretty’ は不要）。例を加えると説得力が増す。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite from my school teachers when I was a child. They taught us manners during lessons and reminded us to say “please” and “thank you” every day.

Sugestão: ・意味の明確化：まず意見をはっきり述べ、その後に理由を一つか二つ具体的に示す。・語彙ミスを修正（Paride→politeness）、冗長表現を避ける。・論理的なつなぎ言葉（because, so, therefore）を正しく使う。

Exemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people get along and reduces conflicts. For example, polite behavior can make public places feel safer and more comfortable for everyone.

Sugestão: ・質問に直接答える短い主題文を最初に述べる（例えば “We should be polite in formal and everyday situations.”）。・具体的な場面（family, workplace, public）を挙げて説明する。・語彙とスペルを正す（respect for → respect, follow pride→avoid unclear表現）。

Exemplo: We should be polite in many situations, such as at work, at school, and in public places. For instance, in the workplace politeness helps teamwork, while in public it shows respect for others' space and feelings.

Sugestão: ・過去形を使って簡潔に答える（I respected elderly people）。・“why”と“how”の具体例を一つ示す（例えば席を譲る、挨拶をする）。・意味が曖昧な表現（spend the wrong time stronger）を避け、明確な理由を述べる。

Exemplo: As a child, I often showed politeness by greeting older people and giving up my seat on the bus. I did this because I wanted to show respect for their age and experience.

× When I was a child, my school teachers teach me up pretty and I always following my teacher.

✓ When I was a child, my school teachers taught me proper manners and I always followed my teacher.

The verbs refer to past actions, so use past tense 'taught' instead of 'teach' and 'followed' instead of 'following' (Grammar problem types: past tense and subject-verb agreement). Also 'teach up pretty' is incorrect phrasing; use 'taught me proper manners' for clarity. Suggestion: identify the main verbs and put them in simple past when describing past events, and use the past form of regular verbs by adding -ed or irregular past forms.'

× I think Paride is very important because it is basically to be people and it is so important for everyone to make us so make a safe society.

✓ I think politeness is very important because it helps us be better people, and it is essential for everyone so that we can have a safe society.

The original sentence uses wrong words ('Paride' likely 'politeness'), incorrect infinitive and structure ('it is basically to be people'), and awkward clauses. Replace the noun and simplify: 'politeness helps us be better people' and 'so that we can have a safe society.' Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and use clear clause connectors like 'because' and 'so that' to show purpose. (Grammar problem types: incorrect use of adjectives/words and sentence structure.)

× If we reait with the or the person, it is important to respect for them and we have to follow pride

✓ If we interact with other people, it is important to respect them and to be polite.

Many words are misspelled and wrong ('reait' -> 'interact', 'the or the person' -> 'other people'), and 'respect for them' should be 'respect them' without 'for'. 'Follow pride' is incorrect; use 'be polite'. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('interact') and direct objects without unnecessary prepositions, and choose an appropriate verb phrase for intention. (Grammar problem types: incorrect use of pronouns and prepositions.)

× When I was a child, I always respect for old person because they spend the wrong time stronger than me.

✓ When I was a child, I always respected older people because they had lived longer and were wiser than me.

Describing past habits requires past tense 'respected' not 'respect'. 'Old person' should be plural 'older people'. 'Spend the wrong time stronger than me' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'had lived longer and were wiser'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general groups, use past tense for past habits, and express comparative ideas clearly ('had lived longer' or 'were older and wiser'). (Grammar problem types: past tense issue and incorrect use of prepositions/phrasing.)