Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 用词和句子结构不准确，影响表达清晰度。建议：1) 改正关键词汇（例如把“planned/plant/office/neighbor's plant”等错误词改为“polite/parents/household/neighbors”）；2) 使用一个明确的主题句然后补充具体细节（不超过5句）；3) 使用连接词如“because”“for example”使逻辑更清晰；4) 简化句子，避免重复。示例练习：把回答分为一到两句主题句加一到两句举例或原因。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child. They taught me simple manners like saying “hello”, “please” and “thank you”, and they also modeled respectful behavior by greeting our neighbors. For example, whenever we met an older person, my parents told me to greet them first and speak respectfully.

Sugestão: 内容方向正确但存在重复和词汇错误，应提高用词准确性并丰富表达。建议：1) 用准确词汇（polite而非plant/planned）；2) 开头直接给出观点，然后用一两条具体原因支持；3) 避免重复同一信息，尽量提供不同角度的支持，比如社会影响或个人感受；4) 控制在3–4句内。

Exemplo: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships. It also makes everyday interactions smoother and more pleasant. My parents encouraged these habits, so I always try to greet older people and say “please” and “thank you”.

Sugestão: 答案重复且词汇错误影响流畅性。建议：1) 直接列出具体场合（e.g., first meetings, workplace, public places, family events）；2) 使用连接词（such as, for example, when）使条理清楚；3) 提供一两句说明为什么在这些场合要有礼貌；4) 用词准确，句子简洁。

Exemplo: We should be polite in many situations, such as when meeting someone for the first time, at work, and in public places. For example, politeness at work helps maintain professional relationships, and being courteous in public makes daily life more pleasant for everyone.

Sugestão: 回答含有多处语法与词汇错误，句子不连贯。建议：1) 以一句清晰的主题句回答（例如“I used to...”。）；2) 用正确动词短语（greet people politely, say please and thank you）；3) 用一两个具体例子描述行为；4) 避免不必要的词或重复，保持句子简短且连贯。

Exemplo: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting people politely and often saying “please” and “thank you”. For example, when I met an older person, I would say “hello” and speak respectfully to show my respect.

× I learned to be planned from my parents where I was a child.

✓ I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child.

句子结构和词汇使用错误。“be planned”是不合适的短语，正确应为“be polite（有礼貌）”。此外，时间状语从句应使用“when I was a child”而不是“where I was a child”。建议记住固定搭配和时间状语的用法。

× The office reminded me to say hello, please and thank you and they showed me by great neighbor's plant.

✓ My parents reminded me to say 'hello', 'please' and 'thank you', and they showed me by being good neighbors.

原句语序和词汇混乱。“The office”与上下文不符，且“by great neighbor's plant”毫无意义。根据语境应为“父母通过做一个好邻居来示范”，因此改为“they showed me by being good neighbors”。注意主语一致和合适的表达。

× For example, whenever we meet someone older, my parents would tell me to greet them first and use respect for language.

✓ For example, whenever we met someone older, my parents would tell me to greet them first and use respectful language.

时态不一致：描述过去的习惯应使用过去时“met”。此外，短语“use respect for language”不自然，应改为“use respectful language（使用尊重的语言）”。建议注意时态一致性和形容词/名词搭配。

× Yes, I think being plant is very important because it shows respect for other people and helps create good relationships.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect for other people and helps create good relationships.

词汇使用错误：“plant”应为形容词“polite”。注意拼写和词性，保证使用恰当的形容词来修饰“being”。

× My parents also encouraged me to be planned, so when I meet an older person, I really greet them and say hello and I try to use please and thank you.

✓ My parents also encouraged me to be polite, so when I meet an older person, I greet them and say hello, and I try to say 'please' and 'thank you'.

“be planned”应为“be polite”（词汇错误）。同时时态需与一般现在习惯相符，去掉冗余“really”。将“use please and thank you”改为更自然的“say 'please' and 'thank you'”。建议注意词汇选择和简洁表达。

× Yeah, I think we should be planned on occasions, like meeting someone for the first time in public places and, uh, at work, for example.

✓ Yeah, I think we should be polite on occasions, like when meeting someone for the first time, in public places, and at work, for example.

重复错误“planned”应为“polite”。句子结构需要调整以使短语并列更清晰，加入“when”引导状语从句更自然。注意固定搭配和并列结构的标点。

× When you meet someone new, you should be planned because it shows respect.

✓ When you meet someone new, you should be polite because it shows respect.

再次出现“planned”误用，应为“polite”。建议检查常见词汇拼写并记住正确形容词形式。

× And in the public place, be planned helps.

✓ And in public places, being polite helps.

句子结构不正确且词汇错误。“be planned helps”不合语法，改为“being polite helps”使用动名词作主语，并将“the public place”改为复数或更自然的“public places”。

× Where was the child's? I also greet people planted plantedly and use please and thank you a lot.

✓ When I was a child, I also greeted people politely and used 'please' and 'thank you' a lot.

原句“Where was the child's?”不符合语法，应为“When I was a child”。动词时态需改为过去式“greeted”“used”来表达过去的习惯。“planted plantedly”是错误重复且拼写错误，应为“politely”。建议熟悉一般过去时和副词形式（polite → politely）。

× For example, we meet an old person.

✓ For example, we met an old person.

描述过去的例子要用过去时，原句使用一般现在时不合上下文。建议根据语境一致使用时态。

× I would say hello of message and try to speak respectfully because I want to show my respect.

✓ I would say hello and try to speak respectfully because I wanted to show my respect.

短语“hello of message”无意义，应删去“of message”。当描述过去的行为时，保持过去时一致性，将“I want”改为“I wanted”。若是说一般习惯可改为现在时。建议注意短语搭配与时态一致性。