Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、発音の躊躇（uh, I, I）と語順の誤りがあり、構造がやや不自然です。話を簡潔に保ち、トピック文を明確にした上で、1つか2つの具体例を時系列または原因→結果で示してください。接続語（for example, so, because）を使って文の流れを滑らかにし、不要な繰り返しを避けましょう。発音のポーズを減らす練習も必要です。

Exemplo: I learned to be polite by watching my parents. For example, they always greeted neighbors and said “please” and “thank you,” so I copied their behavior and practiced these phrases every day.

Sugestão: 主張は明確ですが、表現が冗長で文法や語順のミス（“it makes daily conversations” や “re relaxing one”）があります。まず簡潔なトピック文を置き、その後に理由を2つ程度、接続語でつなぎ具体例を添えて説明しましょう。形容詞や副詞の使い方（more relaxing）に注意してください。ゆっくり話し、文を完結させる練習をしてください。

Exemplo: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it shows respect and makes interactions smoother. For example, polite language at work can prevent misunderstandings and create a more relaxed atmosphere.

Sugestão: 答えは限定的で誤用（be quiet は場面により不適切、makes daily lives made more relaxing は文法誤り）が見られます。まず一般的なトピック文で範囲を示し（formal situations, everyday encounters など）、続けて具体的な場面を2つ挙げ、それぞれの理由を簡潔に述べましょう。動詞と形容詞の一致（make daily life more relaxing）に注意してください。

Exemplo: We should be polite in formal situations and everyday encounters. For instance, you should be polite when speaking with your boss to show respect, and also polite with neighbors to keep good relationships.

Sugestão: 回答は比較的明確で自然ですが、句動詞や前置詞の使い方（greet with others → greet others）を修正するとより自然になります。トピック文の後に短い背景や結果（how often, reaction from neighbors）を付け加えると説得力が増します。語彙を少し増やして具体性を出しましょう。

Exemplo: My parents told me to greet others, so I regularly said hello to my neighbors. Over time this became natural, and many neighbors would smile and start conversations.

× I learned how to be polite by seeing my parents, uh, see my showing respect to others.

✓ I learned how to be polite by seeing my parents showing respect to others.

The phrase 'see my showing' is incorrect because 'see' followed by a clause should use the gerund without a pronoun object in this context. Remove 'my' and the extra 'see' to use 'seeing my parents showing' or simply 'seeing my parents showing respect'. Use 'seeing my parents showing respect to others' for natural English. Suggestion: Use 'seeing' + noun phrase (seeing my parents showing...) or 'by watching my parents show respect...'. This aligns verb + -ing usage.

× I was told to greet with others and I, uh, practiced every day.

✓ I was told to greet others and I practiced every day.

The correct collocation is 'greet others' not 'greet with others'. The preposition 'with' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Remove 'with' to fix the prepositional error. Suggestion: Use 'greet someone' without 'with'.

× I think being polite is very important because by doing that people can show respect to others and it makes daily conversations.

✓ I think being polite is very important because by doing that people can show respect to others and it makes daily conversations easier.

The sentence ends awkwardly with 'it makes daily conversations.' Add an adjective to complete the meaning; 'easier' fits the intended effect. This is a present tense description, so use 'makes' + adjective. Ensure completeness of predicate. Suggestion: Add an adjective (e.g., easier, smoother) after 'makes daily conversations'.

× It helps daily conversations more uh, re relaxing one.

✓ It helps make daily conversations more relaxing.

The original has word order and form errors: 'more uh, re relaxing one' is garbled. Use 'helps make' + object + 'more relaxing'. 'Relaxing' is an adjective modifying 'conversations'. Suggestion: Use 'helps make daily conversations more relaxing'.

× When we talk with our boss at the workplace, it is very important to be quiet.

✓ When we talk to our boss at the workplace, it is very important to be polite.

Use 'talk to' not 'talk with' when focusing on addressing someone, though 'talk with' can be acceptable for two-way conversation. More importantly, 'be quiet' is not the best collocation for politeness; 'be polite' suits the question about being polite. Change preposition and adjective accordingly. Suggestion: Use 'talk to our boss' and prefer 'be polite'.

× By doing that, we can show respect to them and makes daily lives made more relaxing.

✓ By doing that, we can show respect to them and make daily life more relaxing.

There is a subject-verb agreement and phrasing issue: after 'we can', the verb should be base form 'make', not 'makes'. Also 'daily lives made more relaxing' is ungrammatical; use singular 'daily life' and 'more relaxing'. Suggestion: Use 'we can ... and make daily life more relaxing'.

× My parents always told me to greet with others, so I tried to greet with my neighbors as much as possible until it became natural.

✓ My parents always told me to greet others, so I tried to greet my neighbors as much as possible until it became natural.

As above, 'greet with others' and 'greet with my neighbors' are incorrect. Use 'greet others' or 'greet my neighbors'. Remove the preposition 'with'. Suggestion: Use 'greet others' or 'greet my neighbors' without 'with'.