Politeness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Mejorar la corrección gramatical y la fluidez: use formas verbales coherentes (por ejemplo, pasado para hablar de la infancia), evite repeticiones y elimine palabras sobrantes. Añada una oración temática clara seguida de detalles específicos y use conectores simples para más coherencia.

Exemplo: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. They insisted on simple habits like saying “thank you” and “goodbye,” and they corrected me gently when I forgot. Because they modeled polite behavior at home, I learned to greet adults respectfully and say polite phrases automatically.

Sugestão: Evitar repeticiones y organizar ideas con conectores: resuma la idea principal en una oración y aporte 1–2 razones concretas usando conectores como 'because' o 'for example'. Mantenga la respuesta dentro de 3–4 oraciones y use vocabulario preciso.

Exemplo: Being polite is essential because it helps people live together peacefully. For example, politeness prevents conflicts and shows respect for others’ feelings. Also, polite behavior builds trust and better relationships in the community.

Sugestão: Aclarar y dar ejemplos específicos: evite frases vagas y errores léxicos ('located' no aplica). Responda con una frase tema y añada 2–3 ocasiones concretas usando conectores como 'for example' o 'such as'.

Exemplo: We should be polite in many situations, especially in public and at work. For example, be polite when meeting new people, speaking with colleagues, and interacting with service staff. Politeness shows respect and makes social interactions smoother.

Sugestão: Ser más específico y conciso: comience con una oración clara sobre la acción principal, luego describa un ejemplo concreto y explique brevemente por qué lo hacía. Evite conectores redundantes y repeticiones.

Exemplo: I showed politeness through small daily actions. For example, I always said “thank you” and greeted the security guards in my apartment, which made them smile and strengthened our friendly relationship. These habits taught me to be considerate of others.

× It was mainly by the way my parents decide to raise me.

✓ It was mainly by the way my parents decided to raise me.

The verb 'decide' should be in past tense to match 'It was' and the time frame (childhood). Use past simple 'decided' for completed actions. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past events. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× They usually emphasized a lot of in things such as saying thank you, saying goodbye, having having a a polite behavior

✓ They usually emphasized many things such as saying thank you, saying goodbye, and having polite behavior.

Errors include extraneous words ('a lot of in', duplicated words 'having having a a') and awkward noun phrase 'a polite behavior'. Replace 'a lot of in things' with 'many things' and remove duplicates. Use 'having polite behavior' or better 'behaving politely'. Suggestion: avoid word duplication and use natural collocations like 'behaving politely' or 'having polite manners'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× It's not only important but it is basic common sense to be polite and to be kind and to be courteous.

✓ It's not only important but it is basic common sense to be polite, kind, and courteous.

Repetition of 'to be' is unnecessary; streamline the coordinate adjectives with commas. Also 'basic common sense' is acceptable but flow improves without extra 'to be' phrases. Suggestion: combine parallel adjectives with commas and avoid redundant infinitives. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× You have to do it when living in a society, when living in community, you have to do it because you have to respect each other, you have to know that people deserve kindness and respect and love.

✓ You have to do it when living in a society and in a community; you must respect each other and recognize that people deserve kindness, respect, and love.

Use articles 'a society' and 'a community' or combine them; 'when living in community' is missing an article. Also improve cohesion: replace repeated 'you have to' with 'you must' and add commas for list. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and vary phrasing to avoid repetition. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× You should be polite in every single occasion you can because it's not just showing that you respect others, but it's showing the way you were located and you have to show you are a good person.

✓ You should be polite on every occasion you can because it not only shows that you respect others but also demonstrates that you are a good person.

Preposition 'on' is used with 'occasion'; 'every single occasion' is acceptable but 'on every occasion' is more natural. 'It's not just showing' should be 'it not only shows' for subject-verb agreement and clarity. 'the way you were located' is incorrect and unclear; replace with 'demonstrates that you are a good person.' Suggestion: use correct prepositions and clearer subject-verb constructions. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× You are something someone who's honest and kind and respectful.

✓ You are someone who is honest, kind, and respectful.

Original has extra word 'something' and contraction misplacement 'someone who's' after 'are'. Simplify to 'You are someone who is...' and use commas in a list. Suggestion: remove unnecessary words and keep relative clause next to the noun it modifies. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I showed it but in many ways, however, I think the most clear one was when I said thank you or goodbye or I greeted the guards in my apartment block.

✓ I showed it in many ways; however, I think the clearest example was when I said thank you or goodbye, or when I greeted the guards in my apartment building.

Use 'clearest' (superlative) instead of 'most clear'. 'Apartment block' is acceptable but 'apartment building' is more common in some varieties; ensure parallel structure by repeating 'when' before 'I greeted' or using commas and 'when'. Suggestion: use comparative/superlative correctly and maintain parallel clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 25

× That was when I really showed my kindness.

✓ That was when I really showed kindness.

'Showed my kindness' is grammatically possible but 'showed kindness' is more natural in this context. Removing the possessive 'my' improves idiomatic usage. Suggestion: prefer idiomatic collocations like 'show kindness' unless emphasizing personal ownership. Grammar problem type ID: 13